Date: 04/08/09 11:36 pm Title: More To Come
wtfffffffffffffffffffff....thats so not cool y would you put it in bullets?
Date: 04/08/09 11:03 pm Title: Julien
aaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww,u made me cry.....meany
Date: 04/07/09 08:11 pm Title: Operations and Car Wrecks
HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/05/09 08:41 pm Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
yea, the story is good. But we never hear what Caroline is thinking. What does she think about her fathers?
Date: 04/04/09 07:10 pm Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
I am still reading n well...
i would love to know more about the kids each of them, they got to have something, attitude, movmements n so on that resembles their parents.
Red: I really wanna know more about him since i guess he is the one that is more like his father, guess he was closer he could b the one hurt the most, like his heroe just left, he is still a kid and see his father like that, well thats what i think right? n is ur storie so yeaah...
also i loved the idea, Bill now must be strong and cheer the kids, that's what most of the mothers do, n im glad he did! tomi on the other side, poor guy, i know his life changed and somethines u just want to get out of there, but for some reason all that happened
also this storie is really great, trust me, i love it! n 9 kids, dude, its freaking scary but awesomee! ^^
keep this up plz!
-Grimada
Date: 04/03/09 02:27 am Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
I just read all the chapter's in one sitting and love it and can not wait for more.
Oh and I adore Violet who I am starting to think of as Mini Bill, hope he stays true to himself....I feel bad thinking how Orange thinks but I understand she is a child..but isn't there a limit. XD
Again love the story and can not wait for an update this has to be put in my faves. ^_^
Date: 04/02/09 08:22 pm Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
I FINALLY CAUGHT UP WITH THIS STORY! I've been reading for 4 days to get it all! Update soon please =] and Yeah it'd be cool to see into each of the kids minds =]
Date: 03/31/09 02:09 am Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
You did great on this chapter and I think you should do a chapter in the kids' point of view maybe one for each of them or Violet Blue Yellow or Red they happen to have important parts when they're in the story I don't know just a suggestion think about it :)
Date: 03/30/09 09:29 am Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
You tell him, Gusti!! :D *hugs* Tomi's gotta' figure out that getting up and leaving everytime will not solve problems.
Ya!! I'm here. I'm still reading!!!!
Date: 03/29/09 01:41 pm Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
I'm reading, I squeal like a little girl every time there is a update.
And I'm sure I'm not the only one.
I think I almost have been here from the start, or not to long into the story - and it is so amazing to see you grow. I really like this story, and I hope you enjoy writing it so much as I enjoy reading.
Date: 03/29/09 12:24 pm Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
Ya. I'm still here...totally diggig this story. Explore the kids but don't go overboard, it can get boring. There' not much to young kids. It's when they get to be teenagers that they get real interesting.
Date: 03/29/09 11:29 am Title: Diamonds and Labor Pains
haha he fainted
Date: 03/29/09 08:44 am Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
WELL, Gusti just managed to say all I feel in this chapter, so I need not reiterate. <3333333
And you know I'm still reading.
And like I said before, this song IS Tom to me.
And this is for Bill.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-O-qCioGDH0
Get your ass back home where you belong Tom. You know that's where your heart lies and no matter how far you go, you will always end up back where you started.
Date: 03/29/09 02:03 am Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
woot gustav sure told tom!!
and i wanna know whats going on in the kids mind
but write about violet he's awesome XD
Date: 03/29/09 01:16 am Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
I'm still reading! I love this story by the way.
Date: 03/28/09 10:04 pm Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
me is still reading!
I really like gusti´s rant!
Date: 03/28/09 07:57 pm Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
oh oh Oh OH!!!!! I am I'm still reading!!!! haha I think that something should happen between violet and bill or violet and tom because violet seems to kind of grasp the most of what's going on. Or maybe something happens to one of the children and it brings bill and tom together again because they realize they have the same feelings including loving each other and being worried about the child something happens to. Hopefully that gives you an idea. I REALLY REALLY REALLYYYYY LOVE UR STORY!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE AS MUCH AS U CAN!!!!!!
Date: 03/28/09 07:22 pm Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
im still reading
Date: 03/28/09 05:49 pm Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
I'm reading, again. I don't have much time though, due to school work but I'll try to read now and then :D x3
Date: 03/28/09 04:47 pm Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
Wow, Gustav really let Tom have, which was wonderful! He needs to get back home with those babies.