Date: 07/22/08 11:28 am Title: Stolen Kisses and Shitty Diapers
My guess is that Blue is mute?
I really like this story:)
Date: 07/22/08 11:02 am Title: Itchy Asses and Indigo
You know what I loved about this chapter? Tom missed Indigo saying 'daddy'. And it serves him right!
Date: 07/22/08 10:44 am Title: Itchy Asses and Indigo
Awwwww "Daddy"
This is interesting! It was really shocking when Tom left. I was like "what the hellllll Tom!!"
MORE!!
Date: 07/22/08 08:55 am Title: Phone Fights and Closing Doors
OUCH! Hell hurts... & believe me I've had my share of it.
Date: 07/22/08 08:29 am Title: Phone Fights and Closing Doors
Gah. Does anyone actually give a shit about Bill?!! O-o
Tom leaves, his mother is being a bitch, Andreas just tries to take advantage of him.
Sheesh. Now I'm depressed. I hate them all. Poor Billa.
Date: 07/22/08 07:52 am Title: Phone Fights and Closing Doors
I agree that Simone should be trying to do more to get them back together. Violet is being really cute. Taking care of Daddy. How sweet!! ^_^
I really hope whatever Tom's got going on, that he cleans it the fuck up -- and NOW!!
Date: 07/22/08 07:04 am Title: Phone Fights and Closing Doors
what the fuck is wrong with everyone?! it makes no sense that everyone turned into such assholes suddenly. I don't understand ;[
please more soon! I'm so into it
Date: 07/22/08 06:30 am Title: Phone Fights and Closing Doors
Mmmmm, I almost forgot to review :P Of course not, poor Billa...first Tom, then his mom and now Andreas...If I only could help *sigh* I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Date: 07/22/08 05:26 am Title: Phone Fights and Closing Doors
poor Bill D:
Date: 07/22/08 04:18 am Title: Phone Fights and Closing Doors
I was tempted not to review if i could have a kiss from Andy!! lol
I know, he's weird but I kinda like him!!!
seriously, I love the last updates!
more chapters today?? PERFECT!
Tom is a jerk! typical man's reaction!
do they always think that the mother ( Bill kinda is) is a superhero who doesn't need quality time away from the kids sometimes too??
anyway, can't wait for more
Date: 07/22/08 04:12 am Title: Phone Fights and Closing Doors
alright! now you have fucking done it!
unless they donīt get back together and STOP FIGHTING.
i wonīt read.
NOW FIX IT!
Author's Response: I appreciate your enthusiasm, but please refrain from telling me how to write my own story. It will be a shame if you stop reading because of one little thing, but that's your issue completely.
Date: 07/22/08 03:11 am Title: Phone Fights and Closing Doors
Bill and tom need to stop being ignorant little fucks and put each other and there kids first... nd Andi... he cant honestly be pissed at bill... he made the move and knew damn well that bill loves tom more than anything... as far as im concerned andi set himself up to get hurt... so he better just suck it up and cut the shit >.<
anywho... *grabs both tom and bill's ear* stop acting like babies and work it out... you cant expect things to work if you start throwing crayons like children... you both kno better... so suck it up damn it...
great job Leana... im lovin this...
Date: 07/22/08 03:06 am Title: Phone Fights and Closing Doors
Ugh... While I'm busy kicking Tom maybe I'll kick Andreas too. Tom needs to get himself together... and come back and be a good daddy.
D:
Date: 07/22/08 01:19 am Title: Bitey Kids and Lonely Bill
what the hell?! what is wrong with Tom? Ew, I hate him now :( he's so heartless! please update soon !!
Date: 07/21/08 11:18 pm Title: Bitey Kids and Lonely Bill
Haha Green and red one word:CUTEEEE =P
*Punches Tom in the face* sorry tommi i had to >=(
Update soon =)
Date: 07/21/08 07:51 pm Title: Bitey Kids and Lonely Bill
OMG!! O.O!!
WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!!
MORE!
Date: 07/21/08 07:48 pm Title: Bitey Kids and Lonely Bill
that was just so f*** up..well at less he didn't have to carry the babys in him for 9 months like Bill did! sorry got a little in to the storie haha ^_^
Date: 07/21/08 05:29 pm Title: Bitey Kids and Lonely Bill
Good Red do it again he deserves it... Damn it >.< sometimes "fanfic" tom really pisses me off >.< argh... if i were bill i would have throw a knife at him or something (anger issues) >.< stupid tom and his stupid needs and his stupid attitude...
great chapter btw this one deffinatly was an interesting break from the mushy happy happy joy joy stuff...
and incase it isnt totes obvious... more please lol
*sounds like a greedy 5th grader*
Date: 07/21/08 05:28 pm Title: Bitey Kids and Lonely Bill
Tom i will kick your sorry ass!
Date: 07/21/08 04:40 pm Title: Bitey Kids and Lonely Bill
ok so last chapter was WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
... this chapter... well... sad...
i still love it :D
PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!