Date: 04/21/09 02:59 am Title: Late Nights and Finding Home
Oh god! My heart burst out of my heart! I'm so glad that Tom is home again! DON'T SEPERATE THE TWINS AGAIN!!!!!! PLEAAAAAASSSEEEE!!!! I'm so glad that they're back together again!!!!!
Author's Response: I am glad he is home too :) And no, I'm positive that there is no more separation, Tom needs to learn to speak everything out and communicate instead of just running off. I am so glad you like it. <3
Date: 04/21/09 12:28 am Title: Late Nights and Finding Home
Twin angst. I know that truely we all want them to be happy and lovey dovey but I think for right now it would be good for Tom to go back to the hotel for a bit. But I am not sure that would work because Tom promised the kids that he was home for good and if he keeps saying that and leaving then the kids wont trust him at all and that wont be good for the family or anybody because it would cause a rift and then Bill and Tom may not get together again if the kids dont trust their own father. Also what did Bill mean when he called Cyan a little shit. Bill wouldnt really talk about his kids that way.
Author's Response: I am going to start responding from the bottom up XD First, I just moved little shit in as a term of endearment, my mother used to say it everytime one of us did something naughty but she would still laugh at us and love us, also Bill was just trying to lighten the mood, it was very awkward with Tom back all of a sudden. It will not be good if the kids do not trust Tom but Tom is here to stay, he needs to be if he is to be an actual father to them and not keep running off. Tom will hopefully keep well on his promise. As for Tom going back to the hotel, I do have a cute scene in mind ;3 I hope you will like it. And yes, I am one all for the angst but I needed to please -all- of my readers, and it was just time for me to please the ones that loved fluff and reunion. I apologize if this chapter didn't work out for your reading, and I hope you will check out the missing scenes once they are up. Thanks so much for reviewing, as always, it is much appreciated to come home and see all of them (: <3
Date: 04/20/09 11:10 pm Title: Late Nights and Finding Home
Awwwwwwe. Yay!! The adorable little munchkins missed their Daddy. I'm glad Tomi's there again - Bit for how long, I wonder.
Author's Response: They did miss their father but it surely won't be that easy for Tom. Tom is there to stay for now ;) Tom was just confused. He really does love his children, no one can doubt that. Go Tom! He just isn't parent of the year ;x he's kind of...the Britney Spears of this relationship, just as long as he doesn't drop the kids on their heads! XD <3 Thanks honey.
Date: 04/20/09 10:42 pm Title: Late Nights and Finding Home
Bring on the twin angst! Mama wants it!
Author's Response: :D Sure thing! Read the missing scenes for it coming soon! <3
Date: 04/20/09 10:14 pm Title: Late Nights and Finding Home
This was awesome, some of your best writing yet!
Author's Response: :D I appreciate that, thanks so much! <3
Date: 04/20/09 10:00 pm Title: Late Nights and Finding Home
thats totally not how i pictured Tom coming home but hey you are the writer so it was really good. but i dont think bill should let tom off the hook so fast like that, bill should let tom stay but sorta make tom work for it ya know.
Author's Response: I didn't picture Tom coming home that way either but many people just wanted the fic to progress finally lol. There will definitely be a missing scene posted but of course, in the original plotline, we can assume that Tom was of course not let off the hook that easily and we all know Bill will make Tom work for it (; I think they were both lonely and needed each other at the moment and Tom may have made a promise he is not quite ready to keep?
Date: 04/20/09 09:28 pm Title: Late Nights and Finding Home
awesome chappy
and no more angst lets move on with the love
and bring some more drama
XD
Author's Response: :D Sure! thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I truly do appreciate you <3
Date: 04/20/09 09:11 pm Title: Late Nights and Finding Home
I want fluff! Marshmellowy fluff. D:
This fic has had sooo much drama. It's like a soap opera. O.o
(I hope that doesn't sound mean, I really do love this fic.)
Author's Response: Fluff! And yes, soap opera indeed ;) And it isn't mean, thanks for reviewing <3
Date: 04/20/09 08:36 pm Title: Ultrasounds and Rainbows
oh and forgot to include that you should put in some of what the kids went through with the separation and how they felt and feel that would be a great way to see how this has influence them as well.
Author's Response: Of course that will be included <3 Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/20/09 08:33 pm Title: Late Nights and Finding Home
well I really love this story and I thought the reunion was great but I would like to see a missing scene with Tom getting through his problems and Bill getting through with out Tom. but I thought this chapter was cute and sad at the same time. Bill is so family orientated and Tom get wanted to relive his glory days but at the end Tom realized that his heart was always with his family not some dream he can't follow. So I really thought you did great with bringing them together but I would like to see if Tom learned anything in his absents. And you really showed that they long to be together and want the same things at the end. And I always appreciate love and happiness but Angst missing scene would be loved as well. but I do love when these two are happy in your story but they need to talk about what the separation has changed.
Author's Response: Of course, I had really wanted to dig into Tom and everything that was happening but everyone I seemed to talk to just wanted the story to progress. There will definitely be the missing scene posted when I get everything together, school is killing me right now. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I truly appreciate it :D
Date: 04/20/09 07:46 pm Title: Late Nights and Finding Home
No way. On with the love! Twin seperation angst hurts my soul. Loved this chapter. :D
Author's Response: Woo! Love! Update soon! <3
Date: 04/20/09 07:35 pm Title: Late Nights and Finding Home
I just want them to stay together
Author's Response: :D Me too <3
Date: 04/20/09 07:31 pm Title: Girlfriends and Getting Lost
ZOMG THIS IS AMAZING!
No. Srsly. I know I haven't reviewed before for this, or, like, EVER, but still...you're amazing. This is amazing. The fact that you're making me review is amazing!
Date: 04/20/09 07:26 pm Title: Girlfriends and Getting Lost
DO YOU LOVE ME NOW? :D
Date: 04/20/09 07:25 pm Title: Girlfriends and Getting Lost
So sweet.
Vi may have overreacted a bit, got that from Bill aye? :D
. . .xD
Date: 04/20/09 07:18 pm Title: Late Nights and Finding Home
KID PORN SOON PLZ? D:
That sounded so wrong in every single way o.o
I can't wait to read Missing Scenes
Author's Response: LOL NOT YET? D: And ooo, missing scenes ;3
Date: 04/20/09 07:13 pm Title: Late Nights and Finding Home
*GLOMP* GAH! I loved this chapter! I wanted the twin loveeee! No angst, it frustrates me. This was gooood. And I want to know the point of view of all the kids when they say Tom come back :D
Author's Response: :D I love that you finally reviewed for meeeee. And of course I will dig into the kids a little deeper ;3 thanks.
Date: 04/20/09 07:00 pm Title: Late Nights and Finding Home
YESYESYES!
DADDY'S BACK YAY!
It's not too fast, if he really means it. That's all I gotta say about it.
Author's Response: :D Yes, of course Tom means it, but it will of course be harder trying to get back into the groove of things and to promise his kids that he isn't just saying it when he says that he is finally home.
Date: 04/18/09 10:32 pm Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
i think you should go into detail more of what Blue is thinking...
Date: 04/14/09 06:28 pm Title: Puffy Chairs and Revelations
have the girls start a diary....that includes violet(:...and the guys well u could do like flashbacks or therapy now that toms gone or something
