Date: 09/28/08 02:38 pm Title: One and Only
the emotions in this fic are so focused and intense. thank you so much for breaking my heart with this absolutely beautiful story.
Date: 07/18/08 06:32 pm Title: One and Only
I simply loved it and I read it over gaian and again.
It took my breath away and I am now speachless
beatiful !
Date: 06/13/08 04:27 pm Title: One and Only
such a sweet UBER LONG, but so sweet this story:)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 06/10/08 05:29 pm Title: One and Only
-sniffles- I feel like crying for some reason. This story was lovely. The emotions that you got out in the story are amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 06/07/08 11:39 pm Title: One and Only
this story was so beautiful, it made me cry
once again, your amazing writing has turned me into a pile of goo
i just love our characterizations of bill and tom in this story
they fit with each other perfectly
and the relationship between bill and andreas, it's beautiful
my primitive vocabulary just isn't enough to describe how amazing this story is
and your idea of the changes from spring to winter are amazing
i pretty much love every aspect of this story, and it's too much to point out
just wanted to say, you are absolutely amazing
thank you so much for writing this
Author's Response: I love turning you into a pile of goo! It's so sweet ^_^
Ah, and I think your vocabulary is more than enough to make me melt -snuggles-
And thank you, not me, lol! :D
Date: 06/05/08 12:01 pm Title: One and Only
omg Tinka XD it took me hours to read this! But it was SO worth it ;) This really made my day, I'm so lucky to have found it!
I really liked everything in this story...It's just so sweet :)
Damn long chapter! XD congrats!
The story was AWESOME! I love you! xP
Author's Response: It took you hours to read it? Good! Do you know how many hours it took me to write it? ;)
I'd say I'm the lucky one ;)
Thank you :D And I love you, too ;)
Date: 06/04/08 06:37 pm Title: One and Only
just great
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 06/04/08 04:46 pm Title: One and Only
That was long, I didn't mind though :-p I really adored this story, it captivate me from the beginning to the end. How you dicribed the relationship between Andreas and Bill and the reaction of Tom to the whole thing, made it feel very real. I loved how you dicribed the season chance and the way Bill sees it. That brought an original undertone to the story, just brilliant. The way that they reacted to the accident that there mom was in , sounded very muts real to. I can believe it can be a burden sometimes all though you don't want to feel like that ;-) The ending was cute though. Very nicely done ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you very much :D
Date: 06/04/08 04:12 pm Title: One and Only
Great job! This was probably the longest fic I've ever read and it was truly amazing! :))
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 06/04/08 02:19 pm Title: One and Only
I have absolutely NO IDEA what to say now. I lost myself somewhere deep inside of this story o_O It felt so real. I mean...like I'd been watching the whole thing happening. Just standing there and it all happen right in front of my eyes. I so admire your writingskills. I really do. A story cannot get better than this
Author's Response: Lmao, you don't need to say anything, then ;) -finds you in the story and brings you back to you (as if it makes sense, lmao)- -blushes- No need to admire me, I'm nothing special :)
Thanks :D
Date: 06/04/08 11:27 am Title: One and Only
I am so glad that they ended up together, I would have had to open up a can of ninja woopass, or something, on you if not.
Love the last few lines ;)
I'm kinda sad to see this end.
It's been a like forever since I read those first few thousand words, I'm semi-addicted.
Loved the ending.
Author's Response: LMFAO ninja woopass XDDDDDDDDDDD Recognize the las few lines from somewhere? ;) Uh, I'm bored now that it's over :O I have nothing to do all day! lol. -snuggles- I'll get you something else to be addicted to :P
Thanks :D
Date: 06/04/08 11:19 am Title: One and Only
Pfew, it WAS worth reading it all :O I'm still shaken by all this awesome beauty!
Author's Response: -licks- Thanks :D
Date: 06/04/08 11:11 am Title: One and Only
GOSH! Its one of the best thing I`ve ever read!It was a superlong one shot, but the time didn`t matter. I was truly drowned in its beauty. Thank you so much for writing this!
Author's Response: No, thank you for reading it ;)
Date: 06/04/08 10:49 am Title: One and Only
Oh this is so sweet.
I love this.
It's really long, but I didn't want to stop reading it. God you write beatiful.
xx
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 06/04/08 10:18 am Title: One and Only
ugh! my eyes hurt! that was a loooooong read...When they finally ended up together, i didn't feel like it was "sepcial" you know? maybe the too long descriptions in the middle of the story ruined it a bit.But, it was a good read ! i like your writing style!
Author's Response: Lmao, your eyes hurt?! Try typing it, and then being forced to tag it! Lol
Anyway, I'm afraid that the long description were there for exactly that reason. It's not supposed to feel special, but normal, finally normal; because that's how they feel ;)
Thanks :D
Date: 06/04/08 08:04 am Title: One and Only
Omg. I absolutely adore this SO much, Tink! Thank you for writing it ^_^ *hugs*
okay, so I was going to leave a review for every chapter, but you've made it a oneshot now, so I'll put everything I was going to say in one review...
Spring, was filled with such meloncholy and longing. Tom, feeling left out, although that was his own doing, his jealousy of Andreas... It was sweet though, the way he protected Bill when their mother had the accident... I loved Andi, and the way he cared for both of them. Bill and Andi are a great pairing and the scenes with them were very sexy...
Aw, Summer... I felt sorry for Andi, but what he did was the right thing to do... He and Bill were obviously just going through the motions. And then the scene with the three of them, all together as friends again in the twins' garden was so heartwarming. There was something strangely hot about the scene where Bill was telling Tom about him and Andreas... Tom was so jealous.
Aw, it was sad when Andreas got a new boyfriend, but it was sweet the way Tom comforted Bill... They were so cute together. Although in the end, Andi was a good friend to them both really and he obviously knew Bill well. Bill listening to Tom and the guy was so sad... You could really tell how much it hurt him. They were both so confused about how they felt, you portrayed that really well.
I loved the part with Bill reminiscing, looking at their old toys etc. Very sweet. I loved how you incorporated the seasons, and how the story builds amd flows along with them to it's conclusion. The scene with Bill and Tom was so very sexy, and sweet too. The little part with Bill realising what they had been doing, watching the seasons together, was a lovely touch; I adored the ending. I'm glad they managed to sort through their problems and accept how they felt for each other...
There's not one thing I didn't like about this story Tink... The twins relationship, how Andy fitted in with that... I liked the characterisations of all three of them and the complexity of their relationships. The awful situation with their mother and how it made them feel and how they coped... Absolutely gorgeous and I could tell how much work you put into it... *hugs tightly* *adores you*
Author's Response: -stares at the review- Uh... I can't be assed to write that much, lmao! Well, most of the things you pointed out here, were just additional scenes for upping the word count, lol! Esp. the one in the garden. Uh... -forgets what else she wanted to say- Lmao. Okay, scratch it.
Anyway, what I wanted to say... Thank you :D -cuddles- And I love you, too ;)
Date: 06/04/08 07:15 am Title: One and Only
ahhhh love it love it love it love it!!!! it took me forever to read but it was so worth it!!! gawd i cant wait for the next chapter!!!! yayness!!!!!! *dances around*...written so freakin well....now its Bill and Tom's turn right?!?!?!?! *puppy dog eyes*
xoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response: Lmao, I'm sorry for the confusion, I had troubles with the size of the document, and then the tags. It's all a oneshot, actually, not a chaptered story as it was first posted, lol. But thanks :D
