Date: 05/05/09 06:58 pm Title: Morendo
He always knew the time would come when Bill would say he had enough, and he accepted it. – awh that’s kind of awful.
He wouldn’t have if he knew his replacement would be Tom, but he was never told that. – I hope no one was told.
Tokio Hotel never sang again, and Tom was mostly touring Europe with Bill, providing help whenever it was needed. Like tonight for example. He was supposed to look at Bill while he played his latest creation. The one that took him two years to write. – like the last two years of them being together?
Just off stage reporters were hounding Tom with questions.
“How is it like to have a famous brother?” – what not how.
Tom just laughed and shrugged. - lol
“Then how about we write it together?” – awh! Very sappy!
Author's Response: thank you for another fic graciously reviewed in full :)
Date: 05/05/09 06:54 pm Title: Moderato con espressivo
What no sex? *sighs*
Andi has great timing!
“Well, at least I’m not the only one working my ass off with these fuckers. And by horrendous fuckers I mean gracious fans, of course.” - lol
“We’re actually starting to get along.” - *shifty eyes* yeah.
“Maybe the 3 of us could have a talk when I get back. Love to see the two of you together.” – oh god!
“I’m just an awful person… How long have I been with him? 14 years! And it just takes me 5 days to come crawling back to you! Fuck… I’m screwed up” - *grimace* well just cause you were with him doesn’t mean you loved him…unfortunately.
Tom just cooed him and kept his firm grip. He hated having to do this to Andi, but giving Bill up again after all of this wasn’t an option. – well that’s good.
Author's Response: glad you agree with Tom's thinking.
Date: 05/05/09 06:47 pm Title: Rubato
Encounters with Tom went from bad to worse with each passing day and his sanity was beginning to falter. – I’m not sure who’s fault that is.
“No, it’s okay. The song sounded lovely. What was it?”
The blond shrugged and went to pick up his guitar. He gave it a few plucks and tuned it.
“It’s one of our songs. I just tried to see how it would sound on the piano, that’s all.” – when did Tom learn to play the piano at all?
“This isn’t fair, Tom…” Bill whispered, stopping and pulling away.
“What isn’t fair?” his brother asked.
The brunet turned his face towards him and pressed his forehead against Tom’s. The heat that emanated was claming, but unwelcomed.
“This,” he said and pulled away abruptly, getting up from the bench and scurrying off to his room.
Tom should have followed him, but he didn’t. – yes he should have. *sigh* but you’re getting closer to where you should be.
“I wish people were as easy to understand as pianos are,” he whispered and lightly pushed Tom’s hand away. It wasn’t a rejection, rather a plea to give him and his piano a bit of space. – I’m glad that was explained because I would have thought it was rejection.
The piano metaphor is REALLY good!
“It’s not the same with a person. Once you’re out of tune with someone, you can never get back in tune. You don’t just wipe the dust off and expect them to great you with open arms. You need to learn how to play hem all over again.” – very true.
“But I never forgot how to play you…” the soft answer came. - awh
“That’s what you decided, Bill. When you didn’t wait for me and jumped directly on Andreas. He might not be the best replacement, in my opinion, but it looks like you two have reached your harmony - *sigh* but Bill’s just playing him lol didn’t mean to do that pun but you know it’s true.
“Don’t try and put this on me Tom. You were the one who ran off that day preferring David and the producer to me.”
“I never ran away. I just didn’t want to wake you up… I came back and when I did I just saw you kissing Andi like there was no tomorrow.”
“I only did that because I was expecting you to laugh at me!” Bill explained a bit louder than he had originally intended. – OMG so he did this because of what he THOUGHT Tom would say…way to fuck it up royaly Bill.
“Did I ever mention that to you?”
Bill threw his hands up in the air and fell down to the ground, to his level.
“That’s exactly why I did it! Because you were ignoring the fact that it ever happened. I thought you wanted to pretend you were too drunk to remember it and silently tell me that what I said, well, it wasn’t okay with you.” – see like I thought Bill messed it up first and Tom held them apart.
“Don’t you ever think I would hurt you! You or your silly little piano,” he added, pressing his lips forcefully against his brother’s.
Bill yelped and pushed him away slightly. Not because he wanted to, but because he didn’t have the strength to fight the repercussions any more. – oy!
The brunet wiggled to escape a bit but his brother pushed him back down and captured his lips in a needful kiss. It was all it needed for Bill to come crashing down of his shallow little fortress. – Yea!!!
He kicked at his brother’s pants and pushed himself down on his cock as hard as he could. It hurt like it never did before, but it was Tom… yes…if it was Tom then the pain didn’t matter any more. He felt like they couldn’t be close enough, like no matter how hard their bodies were pressed together it was never going to be close enough. Tom’s hot breath on his neck, his gentle hands running around Bill’s body, his cock grinding inside his brother, that was what 14 years of rage ended with. – way to end a fight boys!
Author's Response: play the piano is kind of a big word for what Tom was doing. Even i can spell out a few notes on the thing, but that doesn't mean i;m playing it.
Date: 05/05/09 06:32 pm Title: Meno mosso
“I fucked up that’s what’s the matter! I totally screwed up the song and everyone’s probably out there having a field day making fun of me.”
Tom walked in and closed the door behind him. He didn’t want people to intrude on Bill at a moment like this. Bill was his responsibility and no one else’s. Especially not Andreas’. – He was…now it depends on how he feels about you.
This whole Andreas business was getting on his nerves, but he had yet to find the way to stop it. – lol
Bill looked happy, and God knows he wanted Bill’s happiness more than anything else in the world. - awh
“How come you came home?” the defeated twin asked, his jaw resting on his older brother’s shoulder.
“I wanted to be at you concert, but the fucking plane went late and I missed it.” – flash back?
Bill lifted his gaze and glared at Tom. Was he talking about the piano concerts, or about Andi? Tom mistook his gaze and smiled.
“You’re better off with me. You’re just wasting your life in this shithole of a city with that stupid hobby of yours.”
Bill stood up from his grasp and flogged him over the face. – dude yeah! *stands behind bill for her turn*
“It was inappropriate for you to say that, given both of our conditions,” he simply stated and went back to his meal.
“What conditions are those?”
“We’re brothers, twins at that, and I have a steady boyfriend for the past 14 years.” – why do you have to thrown in the boyfriend thing…shouldn’t the brothers thing be enough?
“With whom you’re very happy,” Tom added, deflated.
Bill took a bite of his apple and hesitated a fraction of a second too long.
“Yes. Yes, I’m very happy with him. Very happy,” – over compensation isn’t going to cut it.
waltz in A minor. The one thing that reminded him of Andreas, because he desperately needed to be reminded of Andi right about now. – why? And it’s so chipper I want to hit myself in the face!
This was not how his life was supposed to go. He was not supposed to be in this situation, choosing between taking advantage of Bill or leaving him altogether. – Oh my!
“What are you doing here?” he asked a bit panicked, getting in an upright position and putting some distance between them.
“I was just looking at you. As you were sleeping.”
“Yeah? And what did you see?”
Tom shrugged.
“A sad angel.” – what a line!
Bill scoffed and waved him off.
“I’m sure a lot of girls open their legs up because of that line of yours, but sadly it does little to impress me,” he explained as he sat back at the piano and ignored Tom. “Now if you’ll excuse me, I need to practice for the concert. Find something else to do today.” – awh! So mean!
Unlike Tom he came when invited, secretly hoping to have a moment in private with his brother. Things were needed to be said. – I see why Bill is so bitter…he kept trying when Tom did nothing but push him away.
“To your continued politeness then, and here’s hoping that Tom gets his head out of his ass soon enough.” - lol
he had long since learned to read Tom’s lips. When they couldn’t talk to each other, in school lips reading and Morse code were just the natural solution to that. – well yes of course lol!!!
The party is just sad.
Author's Response: lol. Is it slap Tom day? And punch yourself in the face for a too chipper song day? lol
Date: 05/05/09 06:12 pm Title: Tranquillo
to ask him to forget all about Andi and come to him… - but could Bill really leave Andi? Would he?
“You were great today,” he finally managed to spit out. When Bill turned towards him and lifted an eyebrow he turned the conversation around “You know, getting Renee to give me one of her spare guitars,” he added, pointing towards the black guitar seated in the back. – why would Renee give him a spare guitar to take home? She would not!
“Thanks, Bill,” he said in earnest and his brother just nodded, disinterestedly.
“Yeah, whatever.” – hey your brother is being poliete did you hear him he just said thank you? That’s pretty big you could at least acknowledge it.
“Well, at least you got him away from your piano. Are you two okay?”
Bill fumbled with his hair and closed his eyes. Were they okay? – yeah sort of.
“I said I’d give him some of your clothes when he comes out of the shower. Is that okay… dear?” The word came out harder than usually. He could almost heart Andreas smile on the other side. – what is going to happen to Bill and Andreas when Bill and Tom work things out?
Have a wet dream about me. - *smirks*
He heard the door creak open and as he lifted his gaze he saw a just out of the bathroom Tom looking sheepishly at him. His eyes wondered down to the region where the white towel covered the remaining skin and he involuntarily licked his lips. - *grimace* oops
“No wonder you like to wear tight clothes,” he said before he could think of the consequences.
Bill slapped him and pointed towards the door. - *gasp* OMG Tom!
“Hey Andi. I’ve been thinking about what you just said and I was wondering…how about some phone sex?” – wow Tom got him that worked up by showing up in a towel and saying some sassy words? Or did he want to have Tom hear him through the wall?
Author's Response: you know he's bluffing about the spare guitar part, right?
Date: 05/05/09 06:00 pm Title: Vivace
“So that’s your guest?” he asked pointing towards Tom. “He doesn’t look like he’s the kind of guy who listens to what you sing,” Tobi added, looking at Tom’s rather sloppy choice in clothes. Apparently he wasn’t too fond on feeling cotton in close proximity of his skin. – lol cotton joke *shakes head*
“Brother?” Tobi asked shocked. “You have a brother?” – well that tells you a lot about how Bill feels about Tom.
“Who… in their right mind confuses Liszt with fucking Beethoven!? The 9th symphony doesn’t even have a piano opus in it!”
“Yes Bill I know that…”
“Didn’t they explicitly ask for a piano opus?” – fuck!
He always dismissed his piano rehearsals and never came to any of his smaller concerts, when he was still receiving invitations. – haha WHEN he was receiving invitations!
“And we’ve got what? One week to rehearse it before the whole thing starts? We don’t have the time!” Bill reminded him and sat at the piano. It managed to calm him down slightly. Just slightly.
“Well don’t you already know your part by heart?”
“Yeah, of course I do,” Bill said as if it should be already obvious. “You know it’s one of my favorite Beethoven pieces.” – lol then what’s the problem?
“Then Chopin’s Nocturnes it is then.” – is so slow and quiet…meh!
“But what if I’ll go wrong and screw everything up?” he asked looking pleadingly into the blond’s eyes, making Andi wish they were at his place.
“Then I’ll love you even more. It’ll show me that there’s finally one thing wrong with you,” he answered, running his hand smoothly through Bill’s hair and closing in for a kiss. “Because you’re just perfect.” – awh that’s so sappy!
“No sweetheart. He said he couldn’t make it, because he has a very important interview to do and he can’t cancel or, and I quote, ‘David would crawl up his ass and live there for the rest of his life’, unquote.” – I bet they all happen to be important so important that he can’t bother to make any of them.
Tom couldn’t help but curse himself for ever letting Bill go. – well you did didn’t you.
“Did you like it?” Bill asked expectantly and smiled when his brother slowly nodded. – wow looking for his approval. No you aren’t over him are you?
“Let’s speed it up a bit, shall we? Ever heard of the flight of the bumble bee?” – I only like parts of this one because it actually sounds like a bumblebee.
“Hey Bill,” the chorus of voices resounded. Some of the people waved at him and he waved back. These were his friends. Tom realized. These were the people that respected him. – odd isn’t it getting a glimpse into your brother’s life.
Then again, a place where no one knew who he was was also a strange thing for him. He was famous around the world… but not in these circles it seemed. – I’m sure at least one of them recognizes you and isn’t bothering to say anything.
“He’s the guitarist from Guns’n’Roses,” Bill finally concluded, seeing how Tom was caught in a bit of a tight spot.
A collective ‘oooh’ ensued and Tom felt awkward that they knew who Slash was but he had no idea of this Paco guy. – lol!!
He sighed and kept his gaze on Bill, so was more than obviously enjoying himself. He wished Bill would smile more often in his presence. – I’m not so sure that Tom was the one to fuck up their relationship but he was definitely the one who kept them apart after it was fucked up.
“How about The Croatian Rapsody? Tonci Huljic's nice.” – nice a bit repetivive but nice I guess
Bill eyes lit up in gladness and waited for the violins to start the song. He just loved this song. – I do like it better then others that’s I’ve heard.
Author's Response: i unhinged the flood gates of sappy with for this fic, I think. And don't you say anything bad about The croatian rapsody. It's the only song in my ipod that's gotten more plays that Schrei.
Date: 05/05/09 05:08 pm Title: Grave
“Bill you can’t just ignore me all day, you know,” Tom said when he came into the kitchen to find something to eat. – why not?
Tom opened the cupboards randomly and looked for some chocolate cereals.
“We don’t have any,” Bill said when the microwave beeped. Chocolate cereal, we don’t have any. I couldn’t find the brand we used to eat when we were kids so I just gave it up completely.”
“Really?”
Bill nodded and turned to leave. - lol
“Why are you so afraid of being near me?” his brother asked awkwardly and Bill stopped for a second.
“Because the last time I was alone with you the consequences fucked up my life,” he said, more calmly than he would have expected to, and then left the kitchen to go work some more on his song. – did he kiss him? or what?
“It’s easier for girls to kiss each other. It’s not the same with guys.” – where are they?
“I love you,” he spat just before a knock came from the door. – wait which one? WHICH ONE said that????
He’d been around the two of them enough to know when they were having one of their conversations and also long enough to know that he could barge in at any moment without hearing them complain. – well that’s a nice cover.
“Like hell it doesn’t. A good lyric can get a girl to part her legs in a second.” - *snorts*
“Moonlight sonata then?” Bill offered and saw his brother’s eyes light up. That he had heard of. “You can play it on the guitar as well, but I don’t think you’ve learned to read sheet music.”
Tom shook his head and shrugged.
“Another day then,” he said.
“Yeah…” – whoa they’re getting along aren’t they?
“You’re coming with me to rehearsals tomorrow. I’m not leaving you alone in the house.” - *snorts*
Plus I’ve learned that you can’t stay angry at something for ever. Things happen the way they’re supposed to and you can’t stop them no matter what.”
Keep telling yourself that Bill… and fail to notice the darkness that fell over Tom’s features. – oh my…
Author's Response: it was at a party, one might before Tom left on a big tour. And Bill was the one that said it
Date: 05/05/09 04:53 pm Title: Stretto
“No need to throw daggers at me, adorable little brother. I know I’m not welcome in your…”
“What the fuck do you think you’re doing?” Bill cut him off.
“I’m staying here until I David stops being an ass.” – Why is Bill letting him?
“Phoenix?” he asked incredulously. “Really Bill, Phoenix?” - *smacks Tom upside the head*
“I said out Tom! It’s my house I freaking well do what I please in it! OUT!”
Tom just shook his head slowly, as if his mind were already on something else.
“Technically it’s only half yours. Writer boy’s got the other half. So you can’t kick me out of something that doesn’t entirely belong to you.” – Tom is such an ass…why does he want to be there. I bet David isn’t even mad at him. I bet he’s just using the excuse so that he can stay there with Bill. Why?
“Will you let me finish? I said you’re twins and you’re one inch away from stabbing each other. I know he’s a real prick, but you can’t be like his. You don’t talk, you don’t write and you definitely don’t enjoy each other’s presence.” – I don’t think Andi would do this because he was the one who came down the stairs and pulled Tom off of Bill. This seems OOC for Andi’s worry.
He forgot to tell her that he spent every waking hour either fucking Andreas or playing the piano. Or sometimes both. - *smiles*
Metronomes weren’t good, she had decided, nothing like a good old stomping foot to keep you steady. - *laughs*
Andreas was going to be pleased with the progress he had made today. Maybe he was going to give him an extra special kiss. - ???
He just curled up in his bed and started sobbing into the pillow. He didn’t need this right now. Not like this. Not with Andreas gone. He was the only one that could keep him from loosing his head with Tom. – how will Bill loose his head?
Author's Response: cause Bill still loves him. That's why he's doing everything.
Date: 05/05/09 04:03 pm Title: Adagio
He was just in and then out again, enough to turn Bill’s world upside down and then leave him to pick up the pieces. But he was capable of getting through all of this, with or without a lover by his side. – clearly it has happened many times before.
He had always been a cat. Landing on his feet was part of who he was, and while others burst into flames around him he just puts on his shades and enjoys the lovely heat emanating from their demise, blowing away at their ashes. – nice!
Bill snapped his fingers against each other and leaned in towards his pencil, trying to catch the idea before it went away. One dot two dots, three in a row… his hand started writing down music notes with incredible speed as his eyes closed every once in a while, imagining how the song would go. Then he would cut something out, write it again, better this time, then swoon his pencil like a conductor’s stick, mimicking the waves of high notes followed by low, fast by slow, long by short. – very, very nice imagery!
“I even have a name for it. I’m calling it Phoenix, from what you said to me that night.” – nice.
He hated leaving Bill so soon after a concert, but the fact that he was already up and writing on a new song made him feel a little bit better. - why did he not like leaving Bill after a concert?
He pressed into a kiss and felt Andreas grab his hips, pushing their bodies closer together. It felt right…today. – unlike some other days? I can wait for the beans to be spilled so I can understand the parts that I’m NOT being told! Arg!
He didn’t want to admit it to himself but he was hopeless without Bill. He couldn’t function properly without him. – awh! There’s always one who loves more in any relationship clearly this is Andi in this case.
He was trapped, but unlike most prisoners he enjoyed his cell. - *giggles*
“You wouldn’t want to leave me like this would you?” he asked, running his fingers through his hair and exposing half of his neck… the half Andreas liked best.
“You’re evil!” the blond said, pulling off his shirt and jumping him. – lol cute!
“And why the hell didn’t he wake me up? Why didn’t you?!” – Why should he? Why didn’t he?
This wasn’t just Tom’s way of taking care of his mother of Bill’s hissy fits. This was Tom’s way of telling Bill that last night was a ‘no’ for him. – no? no what?
“I have to tell you something Andreas… I don’t know if you’d be okay with it…”
If there was one thing he loved doing it was fucking with people’s heads. And he did that so well, particularly when it came to boys. - ??? *frowns*
“I think I’m falling in love with you, Andi.”
The blond didn’t have time to respond as Bill pressed his lips against his in a shy attempt of a kiss. – Why? Why? Why? Oh ooooohhhh that “flash back” from before was after this moment. This is how Bill is doing damage control? OMG Their entire relationship is based upon Bill trying to do damage control? OMG!
Author's Response: thank you for the frustration your showing :P
Date: 05/05/09 02:53 pm Title: Furioso
He owed his life and career to Andreas. Since that night he’s paid for Bill’s piano lessons every single week. 14 years of piano lessons…- that’s very expensive. I understand why Bill stayed with Andi, if he didn’t love him, to pay him back.
He turned and looked at the clock. It was 2:27 in the morning and he still hadn’t managed to close his eyes. They were burning and practically screaming at him, but he couldn’t. He couldn’t sleep with Tom in the house. – yeah!
He walked up to him, in plain sight, and realized that Tom was just ignoring him, continuing his awful rendition of a Guns’n’Roses song. The timing was off, the pressure was too much and he let loose a false chord every now and then. He was just ruining everything in his life. - *shakes head* he’s so mad at him! Why is Tom awake too?
“I didn’t see any cut marks on you,” he said wincing at the awful sound of an unfinished melody.
“Did you expect to find any?” Tom asked, fumbling with his large T-shirt. – harsh on both sides.
“What did you say?” Tom asked menacingly. He hated when Bill was acting like this. It was all his fault things were as they were. He had no right acting like a victim. – really? Hum?
“And I’m said to be the next up and coming Rubinstein.”
“Who are they?” Tom asked. – yeah sorry…*ducks* who?
“It’s not ‘they’ it’s ‘he’. Anton Grigorevich Rubinstein, one of the most famous Russian composers.”
“Never heard of him.” – me neither *giggles*
“Well look at you blondie… Acting all ferocious for your precious little fuck hole.” - *gasp*
The hot pinpricks in his eyes didn’t transform into tears. As he imagined his former best friend on top of his brother he realized it was far beyond crying any more. – hum?!
There was an argument on whether to bring another member into the band, another someone to fill the public’s expectation, but Tom just wowed them with his larger than life persona. They decided 3 members were more than enough. - *grins* different world.
He wanted to curl up in his bed and yell it all to Bill, who would probably be taking his precious time in the bathroom, painting his nails, or whatever it was he did in there. – yell it all at Bill is that because he’s in the bathroom?
He wanted to smile as he saw Bill’s telltale hair walk backwards out the door, but stopped when he noticed the hands wrapped around his waist. – oh he didn’t know. Ouch not the best way to find out.
“Ahem,” he said. Not because he wanted to stop them, but because he could think of nothing else to say in a moment like this.
They both froze and pulled away quickly in an attempt to mask the obvious. – yeah you can’t mask the obvious *smirks*
“Dude, don’t ever do that again. At least not until we come out or something. You can’t tell this to anyone!” Andreas said, pulling the brunet closer to him in a slight attempt to protect him. From what, he wasn’t sure himself.
Tom just smiled good naturedly and restrained his fist as best he could from pounding Andi into the wall. He nodded and shrugged. – what is going on that Bill is scared of and Tom wants to hit Andi but is faking that everything is fine?
“But don’t worry, Bill,” Tom said almost sarcastically. “You’ll have Andreas to keep you company during the long cold nights.” – oh Bill and Tom were/are together…not anymore.
I don’t read warnings so I have no idea what I’m in for. *grins*
Author's Response: i SO love your reviews. You're a dream :DrnrnAnd i don't read warnings eaither. I read a story if it has a good title and a good summary.
Date: 05/05/09 02:17 pm Title: Presto con brio
“What the hell are you doing here Tom?!” Bill yelled as he threw his hands up into the air, feeling somewhat powerless against this whole situation. He didn’t want Tom here! Not now! Not ever! “And how the fuck did you get in?” – oh lord!
“And do something about Andreas’s erection Bill. It looks like it hurts big time.” – eye roll.
No sooner had he done that that Andreas shoved him against the house wall and pulled him into a needful kiss. He wasn’t in the mood for this, but he obliged his friend by parting his lips and issuing a skillful moan. It almost sounded real. – almost sounded real? Why would he fake it?
But he needed Andreas by him, so that meant keeping him happy. And as far as 16 year olds were concerned happy meant sex. And lots of it. – why does he have to have Andreas by him and why does he have to keep him happy?
“Yeah, I know. Me too. I wanted to learn piano and Tomi wanted to learn guitar, but I think I just wasn’t cut out for it. Lyrics, that’s what I do best,” he said pressing a C and listening to the metallic sound ensue.
“Where’s Tom now, by the way?”
“I don’t know. He was in Munich two days ago, but I forgot where he’s supposed to be today. I think Frankfurt or something,” Bill answered – wow he abandoned his brother that early.
“Take it with you. An early birthday present. A cheap one, I know, but I’ll pay for lessons.”
“Lessons?” – that’s a good gift.
Author's Response: because he would. You'll see why.rnAnd yeah, it's a very good gift :)
Date: 05/05/09 02:06 pm Title: Accelerando
“No, that’s not it,” Andreas said, flicking Bill’s nose. “You feel at home in grandiosity because you yourself are larger than life. This is your natural habitat and this is the only sort of place that you feel comfortable in.”
“Once again, you’ve proven to be a fine judge of character, my dear.”
“I wouldn’t have become a famous writer if I wasn’t good at analyzing people.”
“And what has your analysis told you about me?” Bill inquired flirtatiously, to which Andreas mooched a frown, in concentration. – I’m not a fan of this dialogue. I can read it and understand it but it’s kind of heavy, I guess would be a way for me to describe it. I’ll either get over it and get used to it or it will drive me nuts and Ill stop reading it I guess we’ll find out.
“You’re not a bad brother. I’ve known you for all my life and if there’s someone who should be complaining about being a bad brother, then it’s definitely Tom, not you. He’s the one who forgot about you…” – I hope we’ll find out what happened.
He’s the one who never thanked God he was blessed with having such a wonderful, understanding, supportive brother. – lol they’re atheist…that would be rather difficult.
“Sometimes I wonder if you love that piano more than you do me,” – that’s funny, that’s often what we think about Tom and his guitar. I would love to see Bill learn to play the piano.
“Come here,” he said, scooting a bit closer to the instrument, leaving some room on the sleek ebony piano bench. – sweet.
The brunet’s hands trembled on the piano as Andreas’s own hands started running up and down the side of his body, his lips leaving a trail of scorching hot kisses on his neck. - awh
His fingers just instinctively glided on the keys pressing and prodding, much as the man behind him was doing to his body. His back arched and his head shot back as he felt a gentle hand brush against his cock, gripping it sliding slowly up and down. – hot. Piano and being jerked off? Very nice!
A slamming of a door and a familiar voice calling out to him with a more than familiar rudeness.
“Bill, you home? I had a row with the G’s and David kicked me out of the studio. I need a place to crash for the night!” – are you fucking serious?
Author's Response: i think he'd make a good piano player if he'd have more patience to learn it. glad that you liked the piano scene
Date: 05/05/09 01:50 pm Title: Largo
He wrote lyrics and knew he would be big. He had thoughts of stardom, he had dreams of fame… and where did they get him? A nine to five at the local diner and the best years of his life spent in the shadow of his big brother. – awh *pouts*
Tom Kaulitz the international rock legend. The guitar prodigy and sexy bad boy that had girls swooning. A perfect singing voice excellent instrument coordination. Wrote inspirational lyrics and always had a funny story to tell. He was just a dream, a miracle, God’s gift on Earth. – lame sauce!
The truth of the matter was that he hated Tomi. Hated Tomi with all his heart and cursed himself for being so gullible to believe every lie he had been told. No one wanted the skinny girlish emo wannabe. They were twins, but they couldn’t be more different and apparently he was ‘out’ and Tom was ‘in’. – I’m so thankful this is only true in your world and not in this world.
For a moment, there is silence, as he catches his breath and turns from his chair. Then, a loud uproar is heard from the audience as everyone gets up from their seats and applauds in earnest. – oh wasn’t expecting that.
Tokio Hotel breaks up! Tom Kaulitz attempts suicide. – lol Tokio Hotel without Bill…ok well that’s a dramatic start. And odd that Bill is finding this out through the news paper instead of his family.
Author's Response: yeah, me too. They're both 'in'.rnAnd he's finding it through the papers cause it's not true
Date: 06/18/08 11:21 am Title: Morendo
AHHHHHH!
I CAN'T FIND MY REVIEW O___O
WHERE IS IT?
I WROTE A REVIEW HOURS AGO =0
OMFG!
Author's Response: Your review is here, don't worry. It's '*loves*' right? rn
Date: 06/18/08 09:00 am Title: Morendo
Your brain told you to write Bill go back to Andi...?oO That's scary....
But I loved the ending, and I don't think it's rushed at all^^
Author's Response: Even though i like Bill/Tom more i can't stand the idea that Bill would cheat on Andi. Duty comes first, in my book.
Date: 06/18/08 06:29 am Title: Morendo
im gonna miss this
Author's Response: I have other stories cooking, don't worry :P
Date: 06/18/08 06:11 am Title: Morendo
Absolutely beautiful. I listened to the song as well and it brought tears to my eyes. I love your writing and all of your stories are so captivating and so beautiful. You manage to captivated the simplicity as well as the complexity of the Bill/Tom relationship regardless of the fact that it might never be true.
Ahem...I favourited you as an author :D :D
Author's Response: ::blush:: thank you for the add then XD. I'm glad you liked the story. I'm almost pleased with it myself :P
Date: 06/18/08 06:07 am Title: Morendo
*loves*
Author's Response: loves you for loving it :P
Date: 06/18/08 04:37 am Title: Morendo
I liked this story very much.
I may find the ending a bit rushed, but it's just me.
Otherwise, thank you. I really enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response: it was rushed because my brain told me that Bill had to go back to Andi, and i knew you would kill me if i wrote that, so i decided to end it before i would something i would regret :P
Date: 06/17/08 01:20 pm Title: Moderato con espressivo
Aww that was so heart breaking!! Dammit you instil so much emotion into such a short chapter and then it ends and I'm like *cries*!!! Ahh I love this story and I'm sooo looking forward to more!
Author's Response: well it's just one more chappie...