Date: 06/18/08 09:42 pm Title: About A Girl
aw this is so sweet =]
i like it.
pleaseee write more, im going to be dying of anticipation until you do!
Author's Response: No! Don't die! Or else you won't be able to read the rest! lol
Date: 06/18/08 09:41 pm Title: Dis Moi
this is really good...write more please :)
Author's Response: I promise to update soon!
Date: 06/18/08 08:31 pm Title: Dis Moi
this is so awesome. more soon!!!
Author's Response: thank you! I'll try!
Date: 06/18/08 07:50 pm Title: Dis Moi
MORE!
OH GOTT YOU HAVE ME!!!
WRITE MORE!!
Author's Response: I'm trying!
Date: 06/18/08 07:45 pm Title: Dis Moi
ow mja gowdddd
more pleaseee
Author's Response: I can type only so quickly!
Date: 06/18/08 06:47 pm Title: Too Little Too Late
UPDATE!!! NOW!
bitte
Author's Response: Okey Doke!
Date: 06/18/08 04:47 pm Title: About A Girl
lol...duxe i tottaly said himen instead of human lol *dies of embarrasement*
Author's Response: Trust me, it's no big deal. :)
Date: 06/18/08 01:38 pm Title: Too Little Too Late
oh damn bill grr
wot wos in d letter ?!
Author's Response: That's soon to be figured out O_o
Date: 06/18/08 01:21 pm Title: Too Little Too Late
Wow! That was a great chapter! Loved it! Now we know at last. But what did the letter say?
Author's Response: That's part of why the story isn't over yet!rnThanks for the positive feedback
Date: 06/18/08 12:49 pm Title: Too Little Too Late
Ouch D':
That was sad...
Stupid papparazzi have to ruin everything. :[
More!
Author's Response: Yup, I hate my own imaginary paparazzi I put in the story, hahrnI'll update as soon as I can!
Date: 06/18/08 05:12 am Title: Too Little Too Late
awww! damn... I love this story btw i have i told you that? probably, man the things we himans get mad about eh? oh well we have to make mistakes to learn from them
Author's Response: Hah, thank you. Yeah, we humans get pissed off so easily!
Date: 06/18/08 03:24 am Title: Too Little Too Late
OMG! Go on!
Author's Response: I'm going! I'm going! ;P
Date: 06/18/08 12:43 am Title: Oh the Guilt
Good story! Just wanted to point out, though, that you referred to Rosalie as Anne in one sentence. You probably already know this since it's in the fourth chapter, but in case you didn't, here's the senctence:
Bill, despite his pain, grabbed Anne and pulled her through the paparazzi.
It's right when the paparazzi surprised them on the bench after Rosalie had flipped Bill for whispering in her ear and scaring her.
Anyway, great story, and just wanted to let you know!!!
Author's Response: Ugh, how many times do I do that!? I constantly end up putting the wrong names in the wrong stories. Anne's the character of another story I was working on at the time I wrote the chapter.rnAnyway, thanks for the review. I went ahead and fixed the little mistake.
Date: 06/18/08 12:35 am Title: Too Little Too Late
well, Bill fucked up. How could he think she would talk? It said they were using playback and stuff like that. I knew they would use a voiceover. Why didn't he? Oh well, let the brooding and self pity begin! update soon.
Author's Response: I think you misunderstood. She does talk. She doesn't sing. Originally I was going to go somwhere with the whole character singing, but I couldn't really fit it in so I decided to drop it.rnThanks for the support!
Date: 06/17/08 11:34 pm Title: Too Little Too Late
Wow. I bet he feels real dumb for not giving her a chance to explain her side of the story. But that was a really unexpected twist to your story; I love it! Oh and two chapters in one day; AWESOME!! Keep up the great work! :)
Author's Response: Everyone loves a good story twist! Even if I have to think of it myself...
Date: 06/17/08 09:03 pm Title: Too Little Too Late
Noooo! Billi was too late. *cries* update soon please!
Author's Response: or was he O_o
Date: 06/17/08 06:57 pm Title: Leave (Get Out)
Oh no he didn't!!! But that doesn't make sense, why would she only talk on camera and not to the one person who really seems to care about her? Well, I liked the chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one soon!! :)
Author's Response: She has her reasons ;)
Date: 06/17/08 06:14 pm Title: Leave (Get Out)
Love it, write more...
Author's Response: thanks for the support
Date: 06/17/08 05:50 pm Title: Leave (Get Out)
Bill was so mean! At least he could have let her explain herself. Although that would be difficult since she's not talking... Anyway I liked the chapter. I'm waiting for your next update. I'm curious to find out the reason why she doesn't talk.
Author's Response: I'm just about to update!
Date: 06/17/08 05:29 pm Title: Leave (Get Out)
Billllllllllll
grr more pleasee
Author's Response: Nein Problem!