Date: 06/23/10 05:08 pm Title: watching
Yay for random stories!
I really liked this! Very sweet and cute. :]
Almost makes me want to start riding the bus...almost. :p
Date: 12/12/09 02:23 pm Title: watching
Awwwww this was a really sweet story. x]
I loved it! Good job.
Author's Response: tnx <3
Date: 06/10/09 11:43 pm Title: watching
awwwww! i saw this story in the random story box thing...
This is sooo cute :D
Author's Response: thanks :D glad you enjoyed it! x
Date: 03/15/09 11:19 am Title: watching
Awwwww! That was so sweet! Really liked it!
Author's Response: thank you :D
Date: 01/04/09 04:07 pm Title: watching
This practically made my heart melt, it was so sweet and fluffy. I'm happy this caught my eye on the 'random story' thing, it was beautiful. I loved it. :)
Author's Response: ow thanks :D incredible that I still get revieuws after all this time ^^ thank you so much! xxx
Date: 11/28/08 01:43 pm Title: watching
ya know, i've read this one a few times, and it is really one of my favourites!! and it still makes me smile :) x
Author's Response: well, your review makes me smile :) xxx
Date: 11/25/08 07:13 am Title: watching
Oh god! how sweet! it made my heart melt!
Author's Response: I4m glad it did :) xxx
Date: 09/15/08 11:45 am Title: watching
So fucking sweet!I love it because it's very unique and different!
Author's Response: thanks :D I'm glad you find it unique :D it's hard to write a story that noone has writen before! xxx
Date: 09/06/08 06:18 am Title: watching
omg, that was so sweet.. i loved it! and it was totally different from the other shit you read here, congrats!
Author's Response: thank you :D I'm glad you liked it! xxx
Date: 06/25/08 03:15 pm Title: watching
aaaw, this was so cuutee.
nice work.
x33
Author's Response: tnx hun ^^ ly! xxx
Date: 06/04/08 10:17 pm Title: watching
cute...
Author's Response: thnx :D xxx
Date: 06/03/08 08:18 pm Title: watching
Ah!I Love it!
I do the same thing every morning in the bus too.But i love the way you wrote this. It felt real!
Much Love
Soda Brain
Author's Response: watching people is entertaining hu :D tnx hun, glad you liked it *hugs* xxx
Date: 06/03/08 04:27 pm Title: watching
I love the way you've written this, and it's so adorable :)
Author's Response: thank you! xxx
Date: 06/03/08 02:44 pm Title: watching
Wonderful story :D:D I really like it, it's so cuutee
Author's Response: heey xD I know you :P haha I'm not going to post this on our forum though, they probably won't like it xD *hugs* glad you did xxx
Date: 06/03/08 12:53 pm Title: watching
aaaw :) this was totally awesome!
I really like the POV you've used in this. the story is different, and of course; different is good ;)
keep up the good work!
Author's Response: thank you :D I'm glad you liked the different POV, *hugs*
Date: 06/03/08 09:27 am Title: watching
awww this is soo cute!!
and sweet!
and adorable!
i loove it!!
*-* kisses bye :D:D:D
Author's Response: thanks :D *hugs*rnrnxxx
Date: 06/03/08 04:46 am Title: watching
Cute. XD
I loved it !
Author's Response: thank you *hugs* xxx
Date: 06/03/08 12:38 am Title: watching
awww thats sooo cute! i'm smiling like an idiot XD and thats good! Now it's 23:33 in my country so I can sleep in peace!
beautiful one-shot!! i really love it!
Author's Response: thanks xD I hope you slept well! xxx
Date: 06/02/08 10:38 pm Title: watching
awww. that was really cool. i used to observe people like that. couples and stuff and just random people. you really got the gist of what goes through your head.
Author's Response: thanks :DrnI ussualy do this on my bus to school everyday xD I love to watch people and figure out what's behind them :D In my mind, Tom and Bill are just on my bus ;) xxx *huggels*
Date: 06/02/08 08:59 pm Title: watching
aw thats so cute!
Author's Response: thanks :D *hugs*