Date: 07/09/08 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 8
You know i really didn't expect this.
XD, but i still like it!
Author's Response: No? Oh. But gooood :D xx
Date: 07/04/08 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
ooooooooh bugger, kill david the dirty swine! id have slapped him lol
Author's Response: oooh, you just gave me an idea! Dankee =)
Date: 07/03/08 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
oooooooooooh hexi hexi ;P LOL Urgh, davids freaking me out. Update soon deary. this is a awesome story xx
Author's Response: Lol. i shall, thankss :) xx
Date: 06/29/08 11:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Really interesting format! Feels really Billish, giddy, a bit silly, romantic, and so funny. And I like how this is really creative and has no boundaries - can't wait to see how you'll continue this :)
Author's Response: Thanks! It's meant to be all of those things ^_^ I'm glad they're getting across :D x
Date: 06/29/08 04:56 am Title: Chapter 6
bad Emily, very bad Emily. i dont like her lol
and bad BAD Tomi haha hes a dirty boy. i really like this one please update soooooon :)
Author's Response: Lol. the character Emily is based on my sister. LOL. with the whole, awkward, being in the wrong place at the wrong time, just being plain annoying and the name. ;) Yeah, i love her... or don't like her. ^_^ I'll update asap :D x
Date: 06/27/08 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love your story!! Its amazing and you do a wonderful job of making it sound real and cheesy in any way!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much <3 I really appreciate comments like this :) x
Date: 06/27/08 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 6
ooh I loveeed that chap! Tom is such a pest ^_^ Bless him :P And that Emily...Urgh, I'd of kicked her bye now. Anyway u HAVE to update it is like a matter of my surviving the weekend! So yeeeeeah! xxxxxxxx
Author's Response: yay. glad you did, chica. Um, weekend.. well i aint in tomorrow or sunday, so i'll have like, tomorrow night. :-/ You MUST surviveeee, lmao/ xx
Date: 06/27/08 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow,Bill is very...complicated.
In the earlier chapter he was talking about his love for Tom and now he's going out with some random girl!
I wonder how Tom would react to this?
I like it keep it up!
Author's Response: yeah, i think complicated just about covers it. :D Thanks, honey <3 x
Date: 06/22/08 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
an update, yes!
im liking this, im liking it alot!
Author's Response: yeaaaah, update ;) Gooood :] x
Date: 06/21/08 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
Noooooooo!
Amazingly well written, as usual but I'm not liking this Jade at all. D:!
Author's Response: Thank you so much (: x
Date: 06/21/08 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
Damn you, Bill. Get your act in gear and remember who you REALLY love. -Sighs- Poor , poor diva.
Author's Response: Lol. ah, i love your reviews :D x
Date: 06/21/08 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh shit is right.
O_____O.
As I was reading this I decided that I really wished I was Jade...until Bill introduced them to one another. Now I'm relatively happy that I am not this Jade...for now.
>>;
Author's Response: Lol. Lucky she's met Bill, but unlucky for what's to come.. maybe.. x
Date: 06/21/08 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
O_O;
Ho'snap.
This doesn't sound good.
Did I mention before that I was captivated?
-Rushes on to read the next chapter.-
Author's Response: Yes, love, you did mention it. Thankss x
Date: 06/21/08 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my, I'm captivated by this already! I'd write more about it but I'm dying, not literally, to get to the next chapter. ;D
Author's Response: Thank you, xx
Date: 06/21/08 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
whoop (Y) For being a quick chap it was darn right aceeeeeee
u betr update soon :L xxx
Author's Response: Thanks, honey. I'll try, <3 x
Date: 06/20/08 06:55 am Title: Chapter 4
oooooooo this is getting interesting!
update now!!!!!!!!!!!
or....or.....or ill cry...and you dont want that do you ;)
Author's Response: it is? um..okay. :] I'll update soon (: x
Date: 06/18/08 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
SO..............
When's the next one?
Author's Response: Jesus Abi, gimme chance to write the thing, lmao. And this one is not getting done, till a chapter of another has been; so don't threaten me again, lol! Or i...i won't come to your party. -hpmh-. x
Date: 06/17/08 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
i want the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!! now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(ow i just poked my eye!!!!!!)
i love it this could go on forever. its great!
Author's Response: nooo. -hug you until your eye feels better- thank you :D xx
Date: 06/17/08 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
oooooh im loving this one!
loving loving loving!!!!!
(ima poke my eye out with the ! in a min)
Bill:do i have to go all diva on you?.....im still giggling at that and i havent giggled all day :D
Author's Response: yay. glad you're loving it :D ahaha. don't hurt yourselfff :D Woop, i made you giggle ^_^ xx
Date: 06/17/08 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow!
your writing is evolving immensely, your getting better and better. and i thought you couldnt!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! That's lovely ^_^ xx