Date: 03/19/10 04:28 pm Title: Paralyzer
oh you have to continue!!! please its probably one of the best stories i´ve ever read just to the plot!!lol
Date: 07/27/09 12:18 am Title: Paralyzer
wow...that's all i really have to say...
Date: 04/27/09 10:31 pm Title: Paralyzer
Dude! That chick is one lucky son of a bitch!! OF COURSE WE WANT MORE! I WANT MORE! Just when the good part is coming up, you end it!! WHY ARE YOU SOOO CRUEL!!!
Please update soon. Thank you :)
Date: 04/09/09 03:07 pm Title: Paralyzer
MORE bitte...this is really good. and damn you stopped just before they did anything...more fun...grr
Date: 03/05/09 10:11 am Title: Paralyzer
sooooo hot! keep it coming : D
Date: 02/17/09 12:53 pm Title: Paralyzer
this is really good, more soon?:)
Author's Response: le sigh...we've been trying.
Date: 11/19/08 04:51 am Title: Paralyzer
more! please god more!
Author's Response: Hehe. We've been trying to write more, we've just gotten really busy. More will be up soon.
Date: 11/05/08 06:02 pm Title: Paralyzer
more now fuck
Author's Response: We've been trying to write more for a while, but it's difficult with school and work for us.
Date: 11/03/08 06:42 pm Title: Paralyzer
omh! *i'm such a noob reading my own story ,lol. but damn thats sexy *phew!* hor hot hot! WE must finishe this some time!! and actually make them fuk the girl, threesome with bill/tom is to muh to pass up!
LY meli!
Author's Response: Haha, I love it, so it's all okay. Lmao I want to write on it sooooooooooooooooooooo bad. We just HAVE to finish it.
Date: 11/03/08 05:48 pm Title: Paralyzer
YES!!! I WANT MORE!!! SCRUMPTIOUS STORY!
Author's Response: OMG I've been dying without this. We'll write more soon, I proooooooomise.
Date: 09/18/08 01:51 pm Title: Paralyzer
*falls off chair*
Jeeeez... I just came across this and now I'm about to run out screaming for some action.
Will you you (notice my stutter)continue this ever? I love it!
Author's Response: Hehehe, we've been working on it, but we've been extremely busy. We're trying to go as fast as we can. >.< Thanks for the review.
Date: 08/03/08 08:33 am Title: Paralyzer
you have to continue it...
no, you MUST!!!
update soon pleeeeesss!!!
Author's Response: We've been trying but we've both been extremely busy. It's almost done though, don't worry.
Date: 07/28/08 12:20 am Title: Paralyzer
"I don't know..." Bill trailed off his eyes wandered the crowded bar till they landed on a hot blond bartender. "Let's ask her!"
"Okay, you ask her then," Tom said, scrunching his eyebrows together. He was never a fan of redheads.
She changed her hair colour that quick?
Author's Response: Auuuurgh, sorry. -_- she was a redhead at first and then we changed her hair color so she'd match the banner and I guess we missed that. -_-'
Date: 07/19/08 11:44 am Title: Paralyzer
I want more and NOW ! x)
Author's Response: lol we've been working on it. We've also been working on our other story together and our own stories we're writing on our own. It'll be sometime soon though. ^__^
Date: 06/30/08 08:55 pm Title: Paralyzer
I don't want more, I NEED more!
HOT HOT HOT !
Write-on!
Author's Response: lol calm down. We'll write more when we have time. We both have jobs though. [well, GSAA is starting one soon.] And we'll both be working full time.
Date: 06/30/08 05:27 am Title: Paralyzer
woohoooo smexay
im reveiwing im reviewing lol
Author's Response: lol thanks. We'll write more soon. But don't get too mad. We both have jobs. [GSAA is starting hers soon.]
Date: 06/26/08 05:37 am Title: Paralyzer
wow that was hot =]] do write more :]
Author's Response: lol, we have more written, we're just not finished. It should be up soon. We have to find time to get together and write it. But thanks for reviewing. ^___^
Date: 06/19/08 10:39 pm Title: Paralyzer
D= D= D= D= D= D= D= D= D= D= D= D= D= D=
the....THE REST!!!!!
Author's Response: lol, we've been sort of busy lately. But we're almost done with the Paralyzer fic. There WILL be a story sequel after it. This is just the prelude to something. *shifty eyes*
Date: 06/13/08 03:48 pm Title: Paralyzer
SO AMAZING. SO DETAILED. SO FUCKING HOT.
you seriosuly have to continue!
Author's Response: We're going to continue, we just need to find the time. Especially since we're about 4 hours apart in time difference. But thank you for reviewing. ^___^
Date: 06/08/08 09:04 am Title: Paralyzer
I love your work!!! I've never read anything quite like this. Great style and very refreshing. Love it :)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. ^_____^ We're writing more on it soon. We've already started, but we haven't quite finished the second chapter yet. It should be within the next couple days. GSAA has to go away tomorrow, but she'll be back to wriiiite more.