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Reviewer: Foxylady Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/08 05:58 am Title: Paralyzer

This was AMAZING.
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!
Seriously the whole "threesome" thing is really great, because it's so different from other stories.
I like how you explain things... it's so intimate and so hot. You really should continue with this!

Author's Response: Ah, we we're going to continue this. Review again on whether or not you want it to be a full blown out story, or just another part of it. And I [GSAA] really enjoyed writing a threesome so Thea an I could have a canon character. [I wrote Tom, she wrote Bill and we shared Kriss] but yes, I personally think this would be the most amazing smut I've ever helped write. But *blushes* I'm glad you liked it so much.

Reviewer: purplerain477 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/08 06:17 am Title: Paralyzer

omg this story is great!!! Please continue!!! I love it :)

Author's Response: We'll be writing the next part tomorrow. Or, should be. Because Thea [this is GSAA right now] won't be busy then with Baby Kaulitz.

Reviewer: Jumbi_x Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/08 03:32 pm Title: Paralyzer

oh my god!
You can't just stop there.=P

Author's Response: lol, we're most likely going to be writing the next time we're both online. ^___^ It might only be two parts though. What do you think? Two, or should we write more than that?

Reviewer: tomsgroupie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/08 10:19 pm Title: Paralyzer

nasty.

more?

Author's Response: Soon my minion.

Reviewer: bill0oz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/08 12:05 pm Title: Paralyzer

it was really HOTTTTTTTT
i want more pleaseeee

Author's Response: lol, thank you. We'll be writing more shortly. After I [GSAA] get to where I'm moving to. [I'm responding in a hotel room.]

Reviewer: theWives Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/08 01:56 am Title: Paralyzer

all i can ask or say to you is MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE OMG PLEASE GIVE ME AND OTHERS SOME F*'N MORE, its just that good ^_^

Author's Response: Aww, thank you. More will be coming soon. Patience my evil minion. Patience is the key to everything.

Reviewer: Tamira Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/08 07:21 pm Title: Paralyzer

The story starts great, at last both of them are showed as "normal" horny boys;) i would like to see it become long story with many ugh adventures ;) great job, keep going

Author's Response: It just might if people like it enough. [A/N I just mean that if people review enough, we just migh.

Reviewer: Nini Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/08 06:51 pm Title: Paralyzer

I WANTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

Author's Response: Patience, my evil minion. Patience.

Reviewer: Nini Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/08 06:51 pm Title: Paralyzer

fuck I want to read the next chapter

Author's Response: lol, it's coming soon.

Reviewer: SaraInes Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/08 04:27 pm Title: Paralyzer

Oh come on!!! You have to continue!
I never read het stories but this one is soo hot. Please, continue!!!

Author's Response: Lol, well, since Thea is four hours ahead of me [this is GSAA speaking.] I'm currently at a hotel. But I'm in the process of moving [physically] so you'll just have to wait until I talk to Thea again. Don't worry your pretty little head off, a new chapter is coming. ^____^

Reviewer: Irene Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/08 07:45 am Title: Paralyzer

You say you wrote this when you were bored? You certainly need very little to get so ACTIVE!Well written and the first threesome with the twins I have ever read. Liked it!

Author's Response: Yeah. Nothing really better to do. But yeah, we do need to get active. And thank you!! We might be writing again and actually write a smutty scene. *hides*

Reviewer: Shaniah Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/08 07:32 am Title: Paralyzer

More please!!!!!!

Author's Response: A few more replies from people and we just might... *giggles* There's about 99.99% that we're going to.

Reviewer: annie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/08 06:26 am Title: Paralyzer

you reallllly should finish this!

Author's Response: Lol, thanks. We're thinking about it but it might be a few days because I [GSAA] am moving in less than 4 hours.

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