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Reviewer: vixen91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/08 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

that was HOT!!!! LIKE FUCK!!!!! You serioiusly need to write some more because OH MY DAMN!!! hehehe, can't wait to see if you get any other good ideas for a steamy sex scene! May i suggest a shower to clean of all that dirty mud... =D

Reviewer: hermaphrodite Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/08 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow mud is nice!
i loved it!

Reviewer: DNmuffinz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG, that was hot.

Bill and Tom are a bunch of dirty boys.
:P

You should write more of these.

Reviewer: jackie2249 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/08 07:53 am Title: Chapter 1

omg

Reviewer: Jonnaaa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/08 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

the idea was fun, and the story is ok, but there's pretty much typos :s but i still understood most of the text, and it doesn't matter if i don't understand it all, cuz' english isn't my mother language :p

Reviewer: Hannapuus Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/08 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Dirty:D

Reviewer: Konoto Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/08 02:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, very hot indeed XD(sorry if I write something wrong u___u my english is not very... good)

Anyway. I love that photoshoot, very sexy XD

Reviewer: Linni Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/08 06:19 am Title: Chapter 1

I like it! :D

Good work! :)

Reviewer: rach-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/08 03:06 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I really like this story. And it was written really great. Nice job.

Reviewer: trlne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/08 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

How can you hate a story like that? Oo
I'd be proud if I were you! (:

Reviewer: billsbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/08 02:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful...simply beautiful!^^

Reviewer: PunkyEmoFreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/08 09:20 am Title: Chapter 1

You shouldn't hate it, it turned out hot. Really hot. ^^

Reviewer: Hello Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/08 11:08 am Title: Chapter 1

hahaha bill is tough, ouchies getting fucked raw! lol

Reviewer: stearson Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/08 12:46 am Title: Chapter 1

OH MEIN GOTT! That was so fucking hot~! I LOL'd at the end this the last line. you did a very good job! XD

Reviewer: wolfyXgoddess13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/08 05:31 am Title: Chapter 1

It was pretty good for a raw, twincest-ish lemon.
Props to you.

Reviewer: Bill_Is_Fckable Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/08 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Your saying that that wasn;t good. OMJ that was so fucking hot!! I gotz to go get some tissues, lolzXD. Rock on ~Michelle

Reviewer: tokiohotelgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/08 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow! That was awesome! It's definitely NOT shitty! Write more please, you are so good at this. And I love how Bill was such a little slut! xD

Reviewer: Hikari Alien Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/08 11:28 am Title: Chapter 1

X.x Twincest! ^^

Reviewer: be_truthful Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/08 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Haha! Bill is such a tease at the begining. Poor photographer.
God that was hot. Write more.

Reviewer: yaoisex Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/08 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Mmmmm, a - fucking - mazing!!

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