Date: 06/10/08 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
I KNOW THE SONG!!!
ITS TOMMY CAN YOU HEAR ME BY THE WHO!!!
I LOVE THAT SONG!!!
*dances round singing*
Aww I love this.
I wanna go in the hologram machine.
I want a planet made of sponge.
I'd called it Spongebob planet mass :D
Love this.
REALLY wanna find Real Bill now.
:O ALIEN BILL LAUGHS LIKE A MANIAC!!
I love him even more!
I will love him and pet him and call him squishy :D
Love it :D
xxxx
Author's Response: Yeyy that's correct!! :D :D Either you are very old, or you grew up with hippy parents like me... ;) Either way, the next chappie will be dedicated to you, Rinji_Tenshi! Congratulations! XD Spongebob planet mass XD XD Billarious!! Call him squishy XD XD Thanks for making me LMAO once again!
Date: 06/10/08 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 8
Aaaah... Great again... Still love it...
Though i have no idea what the song might be... Any hints? :P
Author's Response: I think your parents might know it... It's quite old!! Thanks for your review Linn!
Date: 06/09/08 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
Hahaha... Loved it!
It's so great!
Author's Response: Thanks Linn! More tomorrow, as usual! :D
Date: 06/09/08 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
:O BILL WENT PSYCHO!!
Bad Bill!!!
I wont give you marshmallows now!
Apologise to Gustav....
Well...When you wake up anyway.
QUICK DADDY!!! FIX THE MICROWAVE!!
Come on chop chop! we dont have all day!
*looks at watch*
Aww i love this.
I hope they get human Bill back soon.
I'm starting to miss him haha.
love it
xxxxx
Author's Response: Aww thanks! I don't know if they will find the real Bill... You'll have to wait and see. ;) And your comments are always so funny XD
Date: 06/09/08 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh where the hell is Bill???
But wheeeee for the microwave!!! *feels somehow proud for the idea* XD
And see, Bill The Alien saved them!! Otherwise none of them would have noticed what Tom was doing! Poor Tomi, though...
Anyway, just tell us where is Bill! :D
Oh I almost forgot! Eddie did a great job with the banner! ;)
Author's Response: Wheee thanks Di! *rhyming* :D Yeah, thanks for the microwave idea! It's amazing what a couple of K&D Sessions can do! XD I'll tell you where Bill is when I update my chappie!
Date: 06/09/08 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
“I have placed a device near the main engine that will allow us to travel at the speed of light!"
*remembers the microwave convo and dies from laughter* XD
Another great chappie!!
Can't wait for the next one! :)
Author's Response: Yeyy thanks Di! That convo was indeed Billarious!! XD
Date: 06/09/08 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
Daddyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!
My Bill 7, ... or was it 8? I think it's 7! Ah well, my Bill waves!! :D
I missed Daddy!! Let's see how this develops!!
*runs like the green idiotic icon* XD
Author's Response: *zoom* Thanks Di! I can't remember what number you had either... But: *waves back to Bill clone* :D
Date: 06/08/08 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
Very creative and fun story! The genre works extremely well for you.
The dialogue was fantastic, and there was never excessive writing. However, the dashes between the writing just made the scene transitions seem a little harsh. But, it was very well-written. Another lovely reason for me to enjoy reading what you write!
Author's Response: Thanks Mary! Yeah, the dashes... I put them there to make it clear some time elapsed between one bit and another. Also because this FF used to be on Yabbie and the chappies were only about 100/200 words each there. So I had to combine those chappies into longer chappies and that caused large elapses of time within one chappie. So that is why I did the dashes! Thanks for the compliments though!
Date: 06/08/08 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
:O
ALIEN BILL GOT OUT HIS CHAIR!!!
NOOO!!!!
*runs around like a headless chicken*
ALIEN BILL!!!!
Come back with meeee!!!!
I have marshmallows!!!
Aww poor Tom's lost his marbles too.
Everyones going to pot now.
HAHAHA the microwave is the speed of light device.
HAHAHAHAHA.
OMG!!! H.P. Lovecraft!!! I love his works :D
Love this.
Cant wait for more.
xxx
Author's Response: LMAO!! XD That made me laugh so hard!! XD XD XD Yeyy another Lovecraft fan! I don't know anyone who likes Lovecraft, besides me and my sister! Whee! :D This was my little tribute to him... I could never write like him (I've tried :S) so I thought I'd use it in here :) Find out tomorrow where Bill is and what happens to Tom! :D
Date: 06/08/08 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
THEY LOST BILL AND TOM IN THE SAME MINUTE!!
MEGALOLZ ^___^
(Wtf? 'Megalolz'? I'm turning in to a LostProphets fan o__o)
More please xD
Author's Response: Haha! XD Your reviews always make me LMAO!! XD They did indeed lose Bill and Tom in the same minute... I hadn't noticed that! XD More tomorrow, as always! :D
Date: 06/08/08 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ow Mah Gadd!
Where is Bill??? :O
Wæowæowæow... Please more... Today? *Puppy eyes*
Imagine Koos saying: Nope, more tomorrow...
Author's Response: Do I have to reply to this? You already know the answer... ;) But you will get something else tonight, if you're lucky!! :P
Date: 06/08/08 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh. Where did Alien!Bill go?!
You just love cliffhangers don't you. Geez. why don't you marry them :D
I hope Tom's alright. Never thought I'd ever say that :)
Love you.
Author's Response: LMAO! Thanks baby! But I was kind of hoping to marry you some day and not my damn cliffhangers... :) I also hope Tom is all right... But I know you wouldn't feel too bad if he wasn't... ;) I love you too baby *hugs*
Date: 06/08/08 04:44 am Title: Chapter 5
Wooow... Awesome! :D
*Sits down and waits for more* :D
Author's Response: Thanks Linn!! I didn't see you last night, or I would have told you it was up! :D More tonight! :D
Date: 06/08/08 03:44 am Title: Chapter 5
*gasps a lot again*
THERE WAS AN EXPLOSION!!!
*Points and chuckles hysterically*
ANIMAL BILL!!!!
I dont know whether I want a Bill clone or a Alien Bill that smiles too much haha.
He sounds like he'd fit in with me FAR too easily.
Love this.
I want to know what happens! *bounces*
Love it xx
Author's Response: Haha! Your review made me LMAO! Thanks! I'm glad you like it so much!!
Date: 06/07/08 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
EXPLOSION?! NEIN! LET IT BE OKAY! :O
MORE! >;]
Author's Response: This could be the last chappie... Who knows if they will survive... ^_- More tomorrow :) And thanks for your review! :D
Date: 06/07/08 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
The boys sigh with relief.
They walk up to the gate. A security guard stops them, but Daddy flashes him a card.
Ooh a Doctor Who reference. I read this chapter through twice and I've only just tacked on to that.
I feel sorry for Daddy about the Nazi regime business.
Author's Response: Aww thanks for your review baby! And yes, it was a Doctor Who reference... :) You read it twice? :D Cool! And don't worry about Daddy, he is making up for what he did back then with all your nice Bill clones... ;)
Date: 06/07/08 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ahh love this story. Massive explosion? ;) More :D
Author's Response: Thanks Katia!! *hugs* More will come soon!! :D
Date: 06/06/08 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ooh, getting interesting >;]
more please.
Author's Response: Thanks again! More tomorrow! :D
Date: 06/06/08 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh Tom. Take his twin away and he becomes a gibbering wreck.
Yay! Daddy! He's cool. Bill 6 says Hi.
Author's Response: *waves at Bill 6* Hey boy! How are you doing! Keep Eddie satisfied when I'm not there, ok? Daddy also says hi to you guys and thanks you for the compliment! XD Thanks for the review baby! *hugs* And thanks most of all for my banner! *besitos*
Date: 06/06/08 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
CLONE BILL!!
I want a clone Bill!
I love this update.
Aww brilliant, definately worth the wait hehe.
Cant wait for more now.
I can just imagine them running round on a plane.
Make me chuckle.
:D
Love it
xx
Author's Response: Wheee thank you for your review, again! :D Hmm keep reviewing my chappies and there might just be a clone in it for you... ;)