Date: 06/03/08 02:15 pm Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
YOu have to update soon!´I can´t wait to see what happen to Tom. I like it because in others fics it´s always Bill the weak twin. I see Bill like very outgoing and a strong person. Tom thinks that he´s the strong but... sorry...my english is so baaad!! Please update soon!!
Author's Response: okay, first off: however bad one's english are (and yours not that bad compared to many, believe me) it dosn't matter when writing a review! It's with reviews like with presents, it's the thought that counts. I get so extreemly happy for every new review I recieve and I certainly don't look for grammar when reading them ,) so, thank you so much for reviewing me, it means a lot to me! and yes, I love writing Tom as the weaker one, it's just something that falls right to me :)
Date: 06/03/08 02:04 pm Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
ahh! I love seductress Bill!
Great fanfic so far!
Can't wait till you update. Damn cliffhangers :B
Author's Response: I hate cliffhangers too, I have to admit. But it's cool when I'm the one writing them because I already know what's gonna happen next ;p okay, that was mean ,) thank you so much love, really means a lot to me!
Date: 06/03/08 01:54 pm Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
HOLY SHIT! i would never have
expected that house to be tom's house.
wow...now this story is gonna get soo
much better i can already tell. :]]
Author's Response: hihi, I'm happy cus I managed to surprise some of you :) thank you so much <3
Date: 06/03/08 01:43 pm Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
What is THE "Attic"? :O I need to know! XD
Does Tom live in that spooky house? Is he being abused? O.o
I need you to update! XD hehe. great chapter!
Author's Response: I will update and hopefully your questions will be answered in the ucoming chapters :) thank you for reviewing!
Date: 06/03/08 12:17 pm Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
Another great one from the luce! :) What more can a girl ask for? ;) Unexpected twist at the end, nice!
Author's Response: hihi, haya ,) thanks for this, you know it means a lot to me!
Date: 06/03/08 11:45 am Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
ITS TOM???????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HOLY FREAKING CRAP!!!!!!!!
O.O
OMGGGGGGGGGG
*dies from shock*
Author's Response: *wakes to life* sorry princess ,) I just had to do it!
Date: 06/03/08 11:35 am Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
huh? andreas is a red herring? mmmmmmm, really interesting, hope you post more soon
Author's Response: I have no idea what a 'red herring' is xD but thank you so much!!!
Date: 06/03/08 11:32 am Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
OMG i love this story... i cant wait 4the next chapter..please please hurry^^
kisskiss
Author's Response: hihi thank you <3 I'm hurrying away! :)
Date: 06/03/08 10:46 am Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
Oh, what happend to Tom ? It's what I think maybe..?? Nooooooooooo D: I'm not into hurting or raping Tom(cos I can't stand watching Tom suffering pain and pity.. It's not hot or interesting anyway..But someone could like it, so..
I'm just waiting for Tom/Bill and Bill/OMC >:D
I like this fic cos you have great writing style and Bill's character is so adorable. The way you describe characters is also good. And I love the plot :)
I can't say more cos english is not my mother language., so I can make a lot of mistakes *sobs*
keep writing, This fic is amazing.
Author's Response: dear lord, why is everyone fuzzing about their grammar xD reviews are like presents, it's the thought that counts! thank you so much for this, it's great that you like my characterizations! *hugs you*
Date: 06/03/08 10:39 am Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
Wow! This chapter is really good! I love it!
Author's Response: thanks a lot, means the world to me :)
Date: 06/03/08 10:38 am Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
TOM??????????O.o
i thought it was andreas who lived in the house!!
now i am stuck with this story you have to update soon
kisses
Author's Response: hihi I will update, I promise! thank you so much <3
Date: 06/03/08 10:31 am Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
Update pleaseeeee!!!!
Author's Response: will do :)
Date: 06/03/08 09:20 am Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
HAH! I KNEW it! I'm good right? I friggin' rock XD You thought you were being all smart but I saw through you. Mwahahaha! *calms down*
Ok, so, this chapter was no less awesome than the previous ones :D I still love all the conversations and Bill and Tom's cute little fight :D Aaaw. I love hair ruffling n_n
And I have to ask this since I read some of your other reviews from the last chapter... Are you norwegian? O___O If you are I'll die... Does someone this amazing live in my country? *faints*
Author's Response: halooooooo :) jepp jeg er norsk (æøå), men jeg liker ikke språket so here we go ,) yes, you did look right through me yaddayadda xD I'm actually glad you got the connection! *ruffles your hair* thanks girl :) and yes...*pained expression on face*...you...rock xD hihi
Date: 06/03/08 08:42 am Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
DOES TOM LIVE IN THAT GLOOMY HOUSE? but... nooo, that's impossible T_T NOT TOMIII! *gets hysterical*
You shock me all the time :O but I love it.
I liked the scene when Tom was checking out Bill, ahh :D that was simply marvellous. Heheheheheeee something's going on *suspicious look*
OK diksi has english lesson in 2 hours and has loads of homework so she says goodbye. and hopes that Firey will update soon.
buzi;*
Author's Response: hahaaaaaa, sorry for shoking you...well not really, it was my intentions so... ;p firey hopes that diksi dosn't die from homework over-flow and goes to write chap. 5 love ya <3
Date: 06/03/08 08:38 am Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
I love your characterisations, especially Georg (hilarious!) and Bill (a sweetheart and a tease!).
D: Tom! Didn't see that coming, he hides it so well.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: thank you so much, I really try to make the characters special so it's great that you like them! and yeah, Tom's good at hiding a lot of things!
Date: 06/03/08 07:14 am Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
Bill is just a sweety, being so nice to Andreas. Treating him like anyone else ;-)
Bill is really shameless isn't he. :-p
I just love it how they keep on checking each other out, just adorable. How they just keep bickering ;-)
I swear that my heart just stoped when I read the last line. Poor Tom I can emagine what is bound to happen at the attic, all though I still hope it's not what I think ;-) Does he live in that house where the rumours are all about? Or didn't I get it? Now I can't stop and wonder about some things but I will just wait and see because i'm sure that it will be cleared in the next chapters, it's just that I can't wait :-p This story is just trilling and the way you ended this chapter. God, I just want more ;-) So update as soon as you can. *hugs* ;-)
Author's Response: oh kris, that is just too nice of you! wow :) I love writing Bill this way, kind and adorable, but teasing and sexy at the same time ,) and yes, poor tomi, I feel bad for what I'm about to do to him! I promise to update as soon as possible (chap 4 is in for beta, chap 5 i being written) thank you so, so much for this! loveya <3
Date: 06/03/08 06:36 am Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
Oh god. You've defiantly got me hooked now!! :3
Author's Response: hihi thanks, happy I have ;)
Date: 06/03/08 06:27 am Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
My talented babe,
Thanks for the soon update.
It already hooked me, just from the beginning.
I m anxious for Tomi now..
My favorite scene was the breathaking description of Bill's body.
I need more and more from you Luce.!!!
Update your amazing stories and give us new ones.
Author's Response: hahaaaa ,D 'the description of Bill's body' so fun that that was your favorite scene :p god chris, you spoil me so bad and I'm loving every second of it. you're one of those lojal reviewers that just review anything I write and it means so much to me! just know that I apreciate you oh so much!!! lot of love :)
Author's Response: hahaaaa ,D 'the description of Bill's body' so fun that that was your favorite scene :p god chris, you spoil me so bad and I'm loving every second of it. you're one of those lojal reviewers that just review anything I write and it means so much to me! just know that I apreciate you oh so much!!! lot of love :)
Date: 06/03/08 05:32 am Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
Oh shit! Tom?! TOM?!
I really didnt expect that.
Amazing story and you are a great writer with a good sense of humour. It's a gift you know. Most people are just dreary or dumb. But you are funny.
Update soon plz!
Author's Response: ah O.O *BLUSHES* wow, thank you so much! shit, that is really nice of you :D God I'm so happy right now, thanks.
Date: 06/03/08 05:20 am Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
Well, the beginning and the middle is hilarious. Seriously, I'm so jealous of your humor. ;D Tom is being absolutely adorable and I laughed just as bad as Gustav did.
Now, concerning the ending. Tom's living in that house that Bill was so fascinated with in the first chapter? And his father... wait, I think that one of the warnings in this fic is Pedophilia, so... oh my god, my brain just made the conncection o_O
Now you have to update. Please? *blinks innocently*
Author's Response: are you blinking innocently at me?...you're reding twincest and you're blinking innocently at me ??? ,p Thank you so much girl, it means a lot to me that I can make you laugh! haha, don't jump to conclutions now honney, I havn't said anyhting to bad yet. Maybe Jorg just wanted Tom to do his homework in the attic ?:)? *hugs* thank you for this!