Date: 06/07/08 01:40 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
O_O
I.. oh god. Ngh. AWESOME! Soon I'll break into the screen and rape Bill. Seriously. Him talking about how he "pounds his bitches" was so, so HOT X_X And the conversation after that... *_* Are we gonna get some top!Bill?! :D :D :D Now you've made me hopeful XD
You've killed me X_X Now, take responsibility for your actions and pay for my funeral.
Author's Response: *counting money, but decides to just wake you from the dead instead* he is rather hot isn't he ,) well, I don't know if you can remember any of my smuts, but I have this little kink...and it might just be something you'd like .p thanksies girl
Date: 06/07/08 01:36 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
Oh oh oh, soooooo goood!! The tension between those two is nearly orgasmic.. Lovin it, please keed up the amazing work and TYPE GOD DAMMIT TYPE!!!
Author's Response: *typing furiously* hihi thanks, I'm so glad you like it and even happier that you care to review and tell me! *hugs you* <3
Date: 06/07/08 01:25 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
Loooove it!
The interaction between Bill and Tom here is so exciting and different from anything I have read before.
You are an amazing writer!
Author's Response: oooh *blushes* thank you so Goddamn much!!! it means a lot to me to hear you say that, and I LOVE your review, so thank you! <3 *hugs*
Date: 06/07/08 01:07 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
Hey girl
I believe I actually squeaked of agitation when I saw that you updated and I never do that, well not much anyway :-p Where do I start because jet again it was an amazing chapter and I like to comment on it ;-)
First of all it was just so cute that Bill used tom as an pillow. Loved it that you putt some motherly love in there to. Must be pretty embarrassing if your mom just said “Yes, I’m Simone. Nice to meet you. I was a little scared you were only imaginary.”
Bill has some way of changing the subject "“I bet it’ll taste good, but not as good as those lips of yours." And that was enough to bring balance to the world again." Just love how you write his character. He likes to putt an red colour on Tom's cheeks doesn't he. “Tom and Bill, sitting in a tree, K-I-S-” hihi, very mature Georg, The last time I heard that was in primary school. But I couldn't help it but find it pretty funny :-p They really got the kicks of teasing Bill and Tom about that kiss. It must be quite hard to live in such a house with an history, creepy if you ask me and than I'm not even taking about what happens there now. I really felt for Tom. His dad is just creepy, especially the way you described him. "He didn’t realize their path was being followed by dark eyes. Bill couldn’t see Tom’s gaze meeting his father’s from where the man was standing slightly hidden by the doorway of the living room. Perhaps it was good that he didn’t see the way Tom cringed and bowed his head." That piece was scary, you made him seem like he is evil or something and I bet he really is to.
“I’m sorry. If you want to be able to talk about this at all, you have to get used to hearing about how I slide my dick into some tight ass.” OMG, that was so not nice of you Bill. God even I would blush at that :-p Maybe Tom got curious again and then they can...
* wiggle eyebrows * (Don't mind me :-p) I wonder what Tom is going to kook. I want more of this, gosh I want to know some of Tom secrets, what really happens at the attic all though I'm a bit scared to know :-p
Ow, I see that this revieuw is becoming very long, hope you don't mind :-p I really overdone myself with this, hihi! I'm going to stop now, I still have to study for monday. So all I have left to say is you update soon, please. Because when you do you putt a really happy smile upon my feace. ;-) *hugs*
Author's Response: *hugs back* oh my god, don't even think for a second that I mind big reviews, I LOVE them !!! I like writing Simone, she's always this little crazy birole in my stories that I have a lot of fun with. And yes, Bill very much likes to make our Tomi blush ,) So happy you liked the way I described Tom's dad, I'm trying not to get too few detaisl, but at the moment he's not playing a big enough part of the story to recieve a proper description. Oh aren't we beaing perverted ,p (but hey, who am I to talk) haha you'll get to know what Tom cooks in the next chap, which will hopefully not take too long. Thank you so much for this Kris, you know it means a lot to me! <3
Date: 06/07/08 12:55 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
Hey, just started reading this and got through all the chapters pretty quickly, I love it! It's good to see a different type of Bill for once, and a different type of Tom xD
I really like the idea and I'm curious to see what's up with Tom's dad :O
Can't wait to read on! :)
Author's Response: hihi, the fluff(and smut)princess is reviewing my work *is happy* It's really fun writing them like this, it gives me more ground to play on ,) thank you girl, hope you'll like the rest of it!
Date: 06/07/08 12:53 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
wow, I love this story! xD
Author's Response: thanksies ,)
Date: 06/07/08 11:49 am Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
*presses her hands against her bloody nose and runs away* AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH PERV PERV PERV!!!!
omg......luce baby..u.....ARGH.....and yes...i actually said i was horny...
damn.
you win.
i give up.
this is too much of a turn on.
im just a poor teenage girl with needs and a lot of imagination.
and then u write this....
AAAAHHH
*gets a nosebleed again*
Author's Response: *hands you tissue* oh daling ,) I never meant to make you horny (nooooo not at aaaaal) hihi hey by the way princess, we need to disguss the next chap of our fic, I've been so wrapped up in this thing that I almost forgott o.O scary! sorry babe ,) bout the nosebleed!
Date: 06/07/08 11:45 am Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
OMGOmgOmg new chappie
you made my day.
Thank youuuuuu
Author's Response: whish I had posted it sooner though, but I'm so happy it made you glad! :)
Date: 06/06/08 08:59 pm Title: Chap. 4 : Waterproof
I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE! I FREAKIN' BEG YOU! I BEG YOUUUUUUUUUUU!!!
Author's Response: hihi and I comply, as soon as the next chap is done...which is about soon ,)
Date: 06/06/08 07:59 am Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
Oh my god!! It´s friday! I can´t wait!!
Author's Response: haha, you're crazy ,) but I'm posting real soon, just have to write number 5 and send it off to the beta and then I can post number 4 (yeah, crazy I know) that way I know I always have a chap for you!
Date: 06/05/08 08:28 pm Title: Chap. 4 : Waterproof
OMG Luce! I haven't been on in so long and i was going through all the recently updated stories, when i came across this one.
I pretty much jumped up and down and felt bad at the same time becuase already four chapters were posted and i hadn't commented on any because i've been sooo busy with end of the year projects and exam reviews that i had to start at like the 15th page to catch up with all the fic being updated DD: So i hope this makes up for it.
But...
Lucy! Lucy! Lucy! You've truly outdone yourself with this one. I absoultely LOVE it already, though that usually happens with all your stories :P
This is so hilariouse but soooo serious at the same time.
I loved how in the earlier chapters you were hinting Tom's secret "home" life...and from the first chapter even after you introduced Tom as a "gangsta/playa" I knew he was the one living in that house being abused by his father, it was so subtle i almost didn't catch it ;)
ALSO! That kiss...WHEW! I was like sweating i was getting so hot ;) Tom's nervousness and constant blushing made me giggle and blush profusely *blushes...again*
This is so mysterious and sexy, one of the best combinations, i think ;)
I seriously CAN'T friggen WAIT! for the next chapter!
Update soon bitte!
The always missing, but never gone,
Andi
Author's Response: ANDI thank God, there you are, you've been gone like...forever *sniffs* don't leave me like that without telling me again okay? *hugs you and won't let go* I am so freakin happy you like this story because I just simply love writing it. I get to explore some humor and at the same time some angst, it's real fun. And you know me, can't have Tom any other way than blushing ,) I swear, he's the worst poodle of mush in half of my stories xD I will (hopefully) update today, and ou better review me girl! ,) I've missed you so much! oh and by the way, don't you have a story to write??? ,) *pets you* tell me next time if you're gonna leave like that again, I need to know you're ok! love ya, Luce
Date: 06/05/08 11:29 am Title: Chap. 4 : Waterproof
really exciting story! love it:D
Author's Response: thank you so much, means A LOT to me!
Date: 06/05/08 05:13 am Title: Chap. 4 : Waterproof
i ABSOLUTELY loved it!!!
it was really really good.
please post a new one soon!
im dying here!
=D
Author's Response: aw, we can't have you dying now can we? guess I'll have to post another asap then ,) thanks doll!
Date: 06/05/08 01:34 am Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
yay just read!
IT WAS SO GREAT
the kiss made me melt and tom grabbing bill's ass! haha priceless.
Author's Response: hihi thanksies, reviews always mean the wold to me! :)
Date: 06/04/08 08:15 pm Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
But.... but...
It's good when I od! It's like... Well... Like I'm in heaven... ^_^
Author's Response: awww *cooes you* very well then sweety, let's give you what you need right ? ,)
Date: 06/04/08 06:48 pm Title: Chap. 4 : Waterproof
Hey dude! Ha! Are you hitting your head against the desk again? Great images! Anything to annoy you dearest. I'm so happy Tom showed up. At least his dad didn't lock him in the attic or anything. I was afraid he wouldn't be able to go out that night. He wears the big/baggy clothes to cover bruses I guess?
And the kissed! Tom so wanted to! He knew what was going to happen but he went w/ it anyway. This chapter made me smile so much (I almost forgot about the paper I'm supposed to be writing, yay for distracting me!) Giorg is so funny! I'm dying to learn more about Tom's home life, and I can't wait until bill finds out.
I so don't want you to work on your other stories right now! Don't listen to me, I'll regret what I'm saying later, you know I'm dying for an ending to MLB and the vampire fic, but right now I'm totally in love w/ this story!
I swear, I'll be a good girl and write to you tomorrow (I have some interesting things to tell you). Update this story soon!
Author's Response: Queeniiiii xD I just had to make them kiss once without being involved with one another, that way I could still have Bill teasing him afterwards ,) you will learn more about Tom's homelife in the upcoming chaps! the ending of mbl is in beta right now so that one's done, the vamp fic will get another chapter after the kaulitz residence, but this story is high on my priorities right now cus it's so fun and easy to write! aww *pets you* be a good girl and tell me! God, when people say stuff like that I get so curious xD hihi see ya Queen, loves <3
Date: 06/04/08 04:25 pm Title: Chap. 4 : Waterproof
Oh you have fun with this don't you. XD God that kiss! Loving it! I could practically taste it myself and I was drinking strong coffee at the time I was reading it so. XD If that's any indication of how well written it was. I was in heaven reading it! Very sexy! ;] I do hope you update soon. =o I'm dying to know what happens next!
Hugs, kisses and much love! =D
Summer ^-^
Author's Response: hihi, thanksies :) oh my Summer, you do realize you're too good to me right ? ,) seriously, you spoil me in the most wonderful of ways! next chap will be up by friday hopefully! hugs <3
Date: 06/04/08 04:11 pm Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
Yeah, you look good in anything you wear ^_^
Hmm, so you say that I could blame Bill for my bisexuality? :D i realised it not so long ago, so it could be his fault :P
Yeah, Firey, you tranlated it correctly! *gives Firelucy a candy* it's a motto of some german shop... i transformed it many times XD (http://djszatan.deviantart.com/art/reklama-xO-66056148 XD)
I already translated half of "Educational Purposes", so I will post it soon on my forum XD *gets excited*
Please update The Kaulitz Residenceeee! It's the sense of my life :D
Author's Response: shit *hand slaps over mouth* I knew there was something I had forgotten about o.O that story will be first priority then, after my little brother's next chapter is betaed and done! hahaaaaaaaaaa that is just so cute...rewe xD Tomi's great! and yes, blame Bill for your bisexuality, I blame him for mine ,)
Date: 06/04/08 03:08 pm Title: Chap. 4 : Waterproof
awwwww ^_^
they're SO sweet together!!! i can't wait until Tom finally grows a pair and admits that he might be bi and that he thinks Bill is HOT =P
i loved their first kiss and loved the way Gustev reacted xD although i wish it had been alowed to go on longer though (A)
i hope u'll update soon (A)
Author's Response: hihi, thanksies :) if I had made that kiss any longer there would have been serious groping involved and we can't have that now can we...oh wait, maybe that's why you wanted me to have it longer xD by the way, what's with the (A)'s ?
Date: 06/04/08 02:50 pm Title: Chap. 4 : Waterproof
-dance around-
-loves how Bill makes Tom question his sexuality- >D
Author's Response: hihi, it's Bill, he makes everyone question their sexuality xD thanks