Date: 06/09/08 04:10 am Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
I loved this chapter
EEEk that kiss was hot!
you don't have to aplogize, your chapters are always amazing and surprising gahh
they =
Author's Response: oh thank you so much! okay, I'll stop apologizing ,) *blushes* this really made me happy you know!
Date: 06/09/08 03:54 am Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
Well apology accepted! No really, this was freakin' hot! You can never go wrong with a straddling Bill ;) More more more!
Author's Response: EXACTLY! straddling Bill NEVER fails xD thank you Saol, nice username by the way, what is that? there will be more real soon girl ,)
Date: 06/09/08 01:22 am Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
Oh, God, how I love this story!!!
But it's terrible...the way Tom leads this double life and can switch back from the horror to the normal just like that...
Author's Response: thank you so much! It's a point to the story, that Tom is so good at pretending ,) *hugs*
Date: 06/09/08 01:15 am Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
Wow. God, this just gets more and more interesting each time.
God, im still trying to wrap my mind around Tom being the one with the...thing. Its kind of a mindfuck. XD.
But i do so love it. Wow. And i wonder, is it just Tom's character that makes him so...immune to everything outside of the situation? Like, why he hadnt ended up like Andreas because of his home life. I imagine you'll explain Andreas soon to us too, hopefully. XD.
Daaaamn. Tom. God. LOVE IT.
Author's Response: hahaaaa you really enjoy reading Tom like this don't you ;p it will all be explained, in a while though ,) I'm so glad you like this, the story means a lot to me!
Date: 06/08/08 05:25 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
Gaaah, hott.
But yeah, dying to know more about Tom. I dont think this fic would be nearly as interesting if it was Bill in Tom's ppot, honestly.
Anyways. Yeah, so this chapter was good.....cant wait to read more about the eerie house and its eyes. XD.
Author's Response: I kinda agree with you, had it been Bill in Tom's spot then the story wouldn't actually have been original ,) thank you so much girl, I can promise you that you will learn more of Tom and his house in the next chap! <3
Date: 06/08/08 04:55 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
Ah Luce, this was just heavenly. The humor is perfect and hilarious and there's just enough hints to make it interesting. Well, even more interesting. Lmfao. I hope Tom takes Bill up on that offer. ;-) He really should try bottoming at least once. *hint hint*
Anyway, all in all, this is just one perfect chapter. ;D
Author's Response: are you hinting to me girl xD about Tom bottoming, maybe you'd be surprised *innocence* thank you so much for this becca, what made you pick the username 'muse' by the way ? I have a thing for usernames you see ,p *hugs*
Date: 06/08/08 02:01 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
Why didn't I read this before? Lol. Anyway, it's interesting to see all of them in this pov. I think Gustav is the only one that really matches RL, haha. I wonder about Tom's personality though. It is completely not what I expected since he lived in that 'haunted' house. I had predicted that it would be him living in there in the first chapter, but after reading about him with the G's, I kinda dismissed that idea and thought that it might be Andreas instead. He just didn't fit in that 'suppressed' and 'scared' person I thought would live in that house. It's almost out of character, lol.
Anyway, I love their interactions and the development of their relationship. I'm interested to see how the attic is related to all these too.
Update soon!
P.S. Hope you feel better!
Author's Response: Thanks, I do :) I know they're all a little ooc but I think it works that way ,) and yes, Tom is a bit casual, but there's a point to that don't worry. The attic will play more of a part in the coming chapters and also the boys relationship, God I'm so glad you liked this! thank you so much for reading and reviewing this, it really means a lot to me! Hope you'll like the rest as well, much love, Lucy <3
Date: 06/08/08 10:53 am Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
awwww ^_^
*giggles like a schoolgirl*
that was SO adorable!! i LOVED this chap =D
and tom was SO cute with his breakfast =P heheh
please update soon! i can't wait to see what happens when tom gets curious ;) although i'm not really looking forward to seeing what tom's dad will do when he finds out that his son was 'curious'...=S
but pretty please update soon? (A)
Author's Response: hey girl, thank you so much. I love writing Tom as the cute little puppy he is ,) and Tom might get curious real soon darling xD believe me ,p
Date: 06/08/08 07:36 am Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
"Tom was as straight as a pole"
I am not straight XD so isn't Tom mwahaha XD he just has to realize it.
You're impossible... You make me melt with one soft kiss o___o uh maybe it wasn't just the kiss, but the promise hidden behind it *evil grin*
Geez, Geo&Gucio are sooo rude XD but I love them ^^
And now Billa knows where Tomek lives XD I thought that he would run away, screaming his guts out :P
Your Diksi, bitten by dozens of mosquitos, waits for a new chapter. Maybe Tomasz will get curious? XD
buzi:*
Author's Response: ah, luzy feels with you love, the mosquitos are bitching over here too! I actually thought of that when writing the 'pole' thing, I knew you'd see it xD and I must say, I enjoy writing the Gs a LOT, it's so fun to have them mockin everyone ,) hope you'll like what comes along later girl, bye iza *kisses*
Date: 06/08/08 07:31 am Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
I´m scared of Tom´s dad!! What happen in that attic??
Author's Response: hihi you should be ,) and I don't know *looks innocent* (as if I could pull that off) thanks
Date: 06/08/08 01:07 am Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
There's no need for apologies. :)
I'm loving the progression of Bill and Tom's relationship. Simone wanting to coo at the boys is so sweet, and Tom's father lurking ominously in the background is creepy.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked Simone and Tom's dad, they're still fearly small characters but what you see of them is fun to write about ,) thanksies
Date: 06/07/08 09:16 pm Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
Oh Lucy your so fine! Your so fine you blow my mind! Hey Lucy! Hey Lucy! *sings/dances* XDD
This chapter was soo adorable.
I love how clever Bill is when hes talking to Tom. All the sexual comments he makes, like he doesn't even care, but he probably does, just doesn't want Tom to think so. Though if i were Tom id might be a little scared away at first lol, but i guess guys are different in that way where they can bluntly talk about sex and not give a shit. ;D
Tom's house is really creepy btw :P I can just picture it, kind of like a movie where like Tom will go do something and Bill will get curious and because Tom's not there go snoop around and then like run into Tom's scary ass dad or something *shivers* DD:
Anyway, i can't wait to see Bill and Tom's relationship develop, when Tom finally crosses over to the DARKSIDE! Dun Dun Dun!XD
Defenitely cant wait for the next chapter! =)
Gonna be amazing, im sure
Hugsnkisses
Andi
ps. sorry about my fic its just been so beautiful outside here in Canada so ive been swimming and tanning. For some reason i can't right an angsty fic when its sunny and hott outside XD, but i have a few oneshots that have been floating around in my head. I hope those will sufice DD: because i hate keeping ppl waiting specially my fave person on THfic! Love you!
Author's Response: haha for some reason Andi I'm having a serious blast writing the sex conversations xD it just gives me the opportunity to embarass Tom and make Bill all cocky ,) so glad you like it! I was thinking about doing the snooping around in the house thing, but I'm not sure, it's a little clishey. well write your one shots then, you know I loved the one with Bill being scared of stagediving, maybe the sequel? I wanna know who were listeing to Tom's 'I'm not fucking you' comment xD Thank you so much Andi, hope to see some sort of fic from you up soon, love luce
Date: 06/07/08 08:13 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
OMG LOVE IT
worth the wait :)
this story makes me smile a LOT!
im having bad feelings about tom's dad.....scary..
Author's Response: he is rather scary ,) thank you so much, and I'm sorry for the long wait but happy the chap made up for it!
Date: 06/07/08 07:34 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
Oh Lucy! I was alost climbing the walls for another shot of mhy favorite drug!
I'm so sorry that you're sorry!
Here! *hands over pink unicorn*
This is James and he wants to cuddle you!
Author's Response: okay, you have got to stop sniffing this too fast...pink unichorns??? and JAMES hahaaaaaaaaaa worst name for such a beautiful (but pink) animal EVER!!! thanks Anne, I'll try to give you your next dose soon ,)
Date: 06/07/08 06:34 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
You don't have to apologize for anything like that, hun! We're just grateful that you still gave us and update in spite of everything. I really hope you know that you don't have to feel pressured into updating, we will patiently wait until you feel better if you need it :) Also, I love this story as well. Take care!
Author's Response: hey girl, well I felt sorry for saying I would post and then not do it, but I'm good now, just hope the chap made up for it ,) thanksies!
Date: 06/07/08 06:23 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
Like, like, like!! Definitely like! I completely love all these little conversations Bill and Tom have about this whole gay-thing! XD They're just always so funny and at the same time very sweet! Update soon again! :))
Author's Response: oh I love writing the conversations ,) so happy you like them! thank you so much and I'll try to update asap
Date: 06/07/08 06:17 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
a kiss again! :D
He's SO coming over to the 'dark side'!
can't wait for more (:
Author's Response: dark side here we go ,) haha thanks!
Date: 06/07/08 06:11 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
Oh please please PLEASE join the "dark side" Tom! You'll like it...a LOT! ;P
Oh Lucy you just LOVE to tease us don't you! XD Ugh! Can't say I don't love it though! XP Just getting those little tastes makes me grin all day! =D I've said it before and I'll say it again *worships* You're AMAZING! XD
Author's Response: I love to tease ??? you can't be serious xD nooooo not at aaaaal ,p but I totally agree with you, the dark side is a pleasurable place ,p thank you so much summer, I'll try to give the little taste sooner than last time *hugs* luce
Date: 06/07/08 03:40 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
Eh Luce!!
Thanks for no let us down baby.
Every time i login to the site, i search for an update or a new story of you.
I like the plot.
it hooked me from the beginning and hold me there.
I m so curious what ll happen next.
i m afraid of Tom's dad a bit.
He's a little weird.
And of course i adore the boy's relationship.
please if you find time update soon.
Love you (and thanks a lot for your pay back,you have my hugs and kisses too).
Author's Response: hey Chris ,) gosh, I squeal so bad when you say things like these xD you have reason to be afraid of Tom's dad girl! believe me! haha, it's so fun writing the boy's relationship, makes me happy that you like it .) *hugs and kisses again, just cus you deserve it*
Date: 06/07/08 02:48 pm Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
You're stories are sooooo addicting!!! Love them!!!
Author's Response: hihi aw thanks girl, means a lot to me! ,)