Date: 06/09/08 04:15 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
omg poor tom! =0
but i love his relationship with bill though =D
and the Gs are just awsome in this fic =P
can't wait for more =)
Author's Response: haha, okay: 1. yes poor Tom indeed :'( 2. thank you so much, I love writing their relationship! 3. hihi the Gs are my jokebutts ,) *hugs*
Date: 06/09/08 03:17 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
Hey, girl
Here I am again :-p
I don’t think that it is going to be as long as before but I’m going to try, since you like that so much. If it make you happy like you said because, you make me happy by updating and I like to give something in return ;-)
So I can take a break from studying. I’m rambling now :-p
Lets get to the story ;-) I think you know that I like it meanwhile, no better I am in love with it :-p
You definitely got me hooked.
“”Well, all the signs are there. The smile when you talk about him, the way you zone out when you think about him. Does my son have a crush?”
The satisfied smile on Simone’s lips should be forbidden.” A mothers intuition, isn’t it. I love how close they seem to be ;-)
“Could the boy really not remember the face of the man that had caused him all of this?”
I wonder how he will fit in this story, I do have some ideas but I’ll just wait and see, all though that’s not one of my qualities :-p
”Nothing much to tell. Tom’s ass is a little sore, though.” I just know that he was going to say something like that. Jeah, I think I figured his character out :-p
Georg, he is a bit euhm I don’t seem to find a perfect word to describe him :-p
I just love how you made him look :-p
Oh my god :o that piece with Tom and his dad. I just hold my breath all though I know what was going to happen, and I was right about this :-p
I think that those little pieces that you show of his dad make it creepier even. Those little thinks hold a bigger meaning, do you get what I’m trying to say? And how you in each chapter put a little more of his dad in the stories makes me wonder and want to see the true unravel.
”I though you hated them. Thought you hated what they do.” Jorg’s palm appeared on his back”
I wonder what he mend with them, it seems that there are still things that I don’t know, correct me if I’m wrong
;-)
I’m glad that Tom’s mind sort of leaves him behind in the attic, it’s an powerful defence mechanism. All though I think he didn't get much chose, he had to live with it.
“He had learned not to fight it years ago.” He should fight, this sentence is just heartbreaking because it shows that this happens for years now and that Tom just gave up trying to chance anything. He just felt like it would make no differents. I feel like crying now. God I want to hit his dad and slash him in to little peaces
(no I’m not violent or anything(A)) :-p So I think that you did a very briliant job with this ;-)
I’m so grateful that you made Tom go to Bill, he needed some distraction and Bill certainly fit under that :-p How you putt the tension between them it was just very vivid ;-)
Aaah, they kissed again and I thought it was even hotter.
I must say that it was a great move to show Tom his star tattoo, who can resist that :-p
Have I mentioned that I really like this story :-p I wonder if I made it longer then the one before:-p Sorry for the rambling. So continue fast , you would make me so very happy ;-)
*hugs*
Author's Response: *hugs back and wont let go* WOW !!! okay first off; THANK YOU SO MUCH! oh my God, you have no idea how much I love it when someone lets me go through sentences from the fic with their comments too them, it gives me a hint on what's good and what's not. I'm loving Simone's character, it's so nice to write a mom that is totally at ease with her son and is actually encouraging him. You will get to know more of Andi, but also about both Tom's life and his dad. when I say 'them' I mean 'gay people' Jorg sais it because Tom hates it when his dad abuses him and what his dad does to him is in a way homosexual. It's a pretty large hint, the thing about “He had learned not to fight it years ago.” so I'm glad you caught on to it. Also, the fact that Tom went to Bill was to prove their growing friendship, that Tom didn't go to any of the Gs, but went to Bill instead. God, you're just getting my every point in this xD it's so much fun! So again, thank you so much and I hope you'll like the next chapters!
Date: 06/09/08 02:44 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!! SO SEXY!!!
Author's Response: hahaaaa thanksies ,)
Date: 06/09/08 01:28 pm Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
My God, Tom's dad is horrible! I was so close to crying! Is that what you wanted?! :P But i'll be okay when you post more! ^^
This story is awesome and so are you :]
Author's Response: oh my God *blushes* thank you so much darling, I really didn't mean for you to cry, that's why I try to put in all the humor and smut ,)
Date: 06/09/08 12:34 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
yeah... I have to admit the characters in your fic are good, but I just don't like you makes Jorg rape him x_x..
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umm.. I think rape scene also can be a part of an interest, but It's kinda hard to see Tom being raped. not just because of I'm a Bill abuser. Tom being weak one looks not real ..(okay, I know It's not in real life. It's just a fiction XD..)
I gotta say again, I love your fic and character, especially Bill
Author's Response: a couple of weeks back I might have agreed with you on the weak thing, but as it is now I can actually see Tom as the more potensial raped person. Bill is so outwards and sexual while Tom hides behind his clothes and bad-boy attitude, he's just so much more defencive. And he's quiet, it's always the quiet ones! thank you so much girl, know that I really do appreciate your reviews and oppinions!
Date: 06/09/08 12:23 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
Poor Tomi! I was worried about something like that. ;.; Oh well, Bill makes him forget all about it and that's something. I love how close they're getting and I can't wait for another one of those kisses! =P Yum!
Author's Response: I just love writing the kisses Summer, really just love it! thanksies girl, and yes, Bill can absolutely make him forget ,p
Date: 06/09/08 12:20 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
New chapter! *your stalker dances her special dance*
If Tom's dad raped him, why did he ask Bill how it is to have dick in his ass?:D that is the question :P *little hope that dad didn't rape Tom*
Tattoo&kiss moment was hot, turning on and oh and ah I loved it :D
ME HATES TOM'S FATHER.
Adores Gustav and Georg.
Loves Bill&Tom XD
You should write more about poles... Maybe some threesome?:D *evil laugh*
BUZI:*
Author's Response: threesome, with who? hmm, so I have a stalker...I'm gonna take a wild guess here and say it's you ,) if Bill thinks Tom is as straight as a 'pole' why wouldn't Tom wonder what it was like to have a dick up his ass? .p thanksies iza *hugs dancing stalker*
Date: 06/09/08 11:10 am Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
omg effing amazing! Loved it!
Author's Response: hihi thanksies girl ,)
Date: 06/09/08 11:10 am Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
Omg that was sooo good, had me on the edge of my seat.
The whole thing with Tom's dad, I feel like this story is going to get real juicy soon! well Juicier!
Author's Response: hahaaa omg that is so sweet of you! thank you so much, and yes, I hope this story will get...juicier ,)
Date: 06/09/08 10:59 am Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
did Tom's father rape Andreas? prolly not, but I just thought of Jorg when I thought of the word 'rape.'
Eeeuk, did Jorg make Tom give him a blow job? That's just horrendous, man. just... ew.
update soon, though. love the story!
Author's Response: uhm, okay here's the thing...Tom. Hands and knees. Drop the pants. On the bed...facing away from Jorg...*hides in shame* haha you think Jorg's name sounds like rape o.O so fun ,p I'll update soon love. God I feel like shit for this when you said a blowjob was ew...it would have been if that was what had happened, but what did happen *hides in a hell of a good place*
Date: 06/09/08 10:48 am Title: Chap. 5 : Tomi’s house
omg effing amazing! Loved it!
Author's Response: hihi thank you so much ,)
Date: 06/09/08 10:35 am Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
Again, really, I wanna keep reading this.
Author's Response: so happy you do, but if you can't due to my characterizations I will be sad to see you go!
Date: 06/09/08 09:42 am Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Author's Response: oh thank you so much ,)
Date: 06/09/08 09:41 am Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Author's Response: oh thank you so much ,)
Date: 06/09/08 09:26 am Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
Who is going to top in this story? Tom or Bill? I need to know because topping Bill makes me uncomfortable. It's a good story, great even, just yeah, seems like it's headed in the direction of topping Bill.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry, but I can't tell you. I am very sad if those scenarios makes you drop out of reading stories, personaly I stick with things I like if their worth the uncomfortableness that sometimes occur. thank you for reviewing, again, sorry that I can't tell you who's topping
Date: 06/09/08 08:32 am Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
O.O ..... he's gonna stay in Bills home.......... *faints*
in my mind: *screams* AAAAAAAAHHHHH THEY KISSED AGAIN! THEY TOUCHED! THEY AAAAAAAAHHHH!!! THEY-THEY-THEY AAAAAAAAAHHHH! *is crazy*
YOU.....make me........lost control over my mind.!!!! i cant stop thinking about this thing!!!
i cant wait for the next chappie hun!!! *squeals*
I LOVE THIS STORY DAMMIT!!!
*faints again*
Author's Response: uhm...*pokes* Andy ? okay I thought I was the one fainting xD and yes, he is going to stay over at Bill's but remember; they are just 'friends' (yet) next chap will hopefully be up soon ,) *faints beside you just cus she feels like it*
Date: 06/09/08 06:47 am Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
Ugh, I think you just turned my brain to mush along with theirs! Sorry I haven't commented for a while Lucy. I've been really busy. And desperately trying to get over my WB too... :(
Yet again, I'm intrigued by this story! You're so good at weaving mystery and intrigue into your story lines in such a lovely subtle way... Poor Tom and what his father does to him in the attic, and Andreas too, what an awful story... I wonder, if, and how, their stories interconnect?
Author's Response: hey Emma, haven't seen you in a while :'( but you're here now so that's good! NOOOOOOOOO (that's to the wb) but...but...I want treasure boxies *pout* okay, me serious now: Thank you so much for the comment on my...weaving! I try to over-dose this with humor just because the 'all angst' thing has been done so many times before. The answers to your questions will be revieled girl ,) thank you *chases after wb*
Date: 06/09/08 05:37 am Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
yay new chapter! I really liked it, how you kind of revealed a little more about what goes on in the attic but not completely! And how Bill and Tom are getting more comfortable with each other.
I'm liking it ;)
Author's Response: oh thank you so much! I like this 'leaving hints' thing ,) and I just love writing the boy's relationship! gosh, it means a lot to me to have an authour like you liking my fic! :)
Date: 06/09/08 05:28 am Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
Tell you what I thought of it? Why, m'dear, have I ever done anything else? ;-) When I read about Tom about and his dad (love the title of the chapter by the way), I thought for sure it would ruin my day. But, what with the rest of the chapter, it totally made my day instead. ;D Love Georg and Gustav's conversation, love the kiss between Bill and Tom (it was perfectly perfect xD).
As for my username, Muse... Well, I was listening to Muse when I found this site xD lmfao It seemed appropriate. Muse is not my favorite band, but they are good and I do love them. =D
Anyway, update soon
Author's Response: no you have not, bonny ma-less ,) and I thank you greatly for doing so this time again! I'm so happy I managed to bring your spririts up again after that horrid scene, I'm trying to take it slow so that I can get used to writng this. I love writing kisses xD and with those two it's just so great, what with the piercings and all! hahaaa no wonder I didn't get your username, I had no idea that was a band o.O I'll try to update real soon hun, thanks!
Date: 06/09/08 04:27 am Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
Luce babe,
nice to read you again honey!!
i m so angry of Tom's monster-father.
Please punish him,for what he does.
I like boy's growing love. like hell.
Dont apologize sweetie,you re just the sun of fics, so you are welcome any time.
love you (remember that)
Author's Response: shit...christina *blushes and whines* God you're great to me <3 he will get his punishment, if it is done on earth or in hell that's a whole nother deal ,) I'm the sun? oh my god xD that is just too damn cute :p love you too girl, for just being who you are!