Date: 06/12/08 01:12 pm Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
Ahhh...
Author's Response: I'm taking that as a compliment :) thank you!
Date: 06/12/08 01:01 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
I really don't know what to I should think about your story. The Bill x Tom part is perfect/hot/sweet/... XD, of course! I just love their teasing and the fact that Tom gets more and more... curious xD I also like Gustav and Georg, those two are really funny!
The things that worry me are Tom's dad and Andreas. I don't understand how some people don't think about how much they fuck up another person's life by raping them or anything.
Please update soon, okay?
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can hun! this story is like the way I love to write angst, with humor and fluff and hottness all over the place ,) I could probably have made it darker but that would have just made everything so...well, dark don't you think? so glad you like it though, <3 thanks
Date: 06/12/08 12:26 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
Lucy! I really love your sense of humor! Georg and Gustav are so funny (I loved the food comment). And then Tom and Bill making out in front of pretty much the whole school! Priceless. Particularly Bill's comment about most of them thinking he was a girl. And then Andi came and found Bill. A break through! He's still messed up, but understandably so and Bill's helping. that conversation was beautifully written too. I was really impressed. The sleep over... I hate that you stopped there. Bill and Tom and going to go nuts. And then you're no doubt going to have Georg or Gustav walk in on them and ruin the moment. It'll be funny though. Feel free to supprise me and not do that though. I'm glad Tom seems to be getting more comfortable w/ Bill. He sleeps over at other people's houses a lot. Understandably, but out of curiosity on average how many times a week? And what day is it? I don't know why I care. I'm just curious I guess. Friday night? Awsome chapter. Looking forward to an update and an e mail. Are you in exam week now? I am and I'm so done with school mentally it's not even funny. Half way through my math exam I lost interest and unfortunately go a song stuck in my head that I didn't know all the words to. It's was a pain. Anyway... update soon.
Author's Response: hey girl ,) God, you spoil me so bad xD love ya for it! I just had to make them make out in front of the whole school, it was simply too tempting ,) you might be surprised Queen ,) about Tom sleeping over at people's places, after Bill came along he's been spending a lot of time with him and that's why he's been sleeping there and yes it's friday, I'm not keeping to days here so that's why I don't mention them ,) I think Tom sleeps over at people's houses a lot, but not way too often cus then his dad might get angry and that's just...out of the question. in norway we are fortunate enough to only have one exam this year, and I'll get to know if I'm one of the 'lucky' ones who needs to have it on monday, if not then I'm free ,) aw poor you with the song, that tends to happen a lot to me too o.O wierd, one would think that maths is so interresting you just had to do it...NOT !!! love ya <3 luce
Date: 06/12/08 12:22 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
fuck and i was so scared to read it, because of the warnings, and what i see, the first time i cathered my courage, it paid me a frekkin... how do i say it? frekkin amazing fiction!
I NEED MORE, fuck.
Bill's character is for sure now one of the best ones O_O.
Tho, poor Tomi, he does a good job hiding his life, i've seen it quite much, how it comes out some of my friend's has a pretty awful family life as well, that i didnt know, it really surprises you sometimes really awfully how it comes out. so i really like the way your story includes everything.
so spectacular...
Author's Response: haha I felt so bad when putting up all the warnings o.O but I'm happy you read it anyway, didn't turn out quite how bad you'd expected by the summary huh? ,p I'm so extreemly happy you like this, much love, luce
Date: 06/12/08 12:13 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
Hot hot hot! Gosh, next chapter ASAP please! Oh, and you were wondering about my username, it's actually just the two first letters from my first and last name :) But it almost sounds like something from a Fantasy story haha.
Author's Response: I think your username sounds a lot like some roman queen or something, greek god lol ,) thanksies for this! happy you like it!
Date: 06/12/08 12:02 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
this. story. ROX!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.... You sure know how to keep a girl in suspense!!!!!!!
Author's Response: hihi *blushes* thank you so much! and yes, I can be rather mean about putting off the good things ,)
Date: 06/12/08 11:48 am Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
omg! =0
don't leave me like this!! i want the rest of the scene too *pouts*
but my GOD the part u did write was HOT!!=0
and the andreas part was really sweet ^_^
can't wait for more hun!
Author's Response: hihi so happy you liked it, the rest of the scene will hopefully not be too far away ,) thank you so much for this, I'll write more soon !
Date: 06/12/08 11:38 am Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
So... my first review at this site =P and this story really deserves it, it's probably the best fanfiction i've ever read. I love the characterization of all of them, but especially Bill.
Mean of you to end this chapter like this though ;) haha, ill definitely be waiting for the next =P
Author's Response: you gave me your first review? Oh my god that is so sweet of you, thank you so much! *blushes* wow ,) I'm so happy you like my characters, I work hard on them and I'm happy to see that it pays off ,) and yes, I am mean *evil smile* but I'll make up for it next time, which will hopefully not be so far away <3
Date: 06/12/08 11:34 am Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
yahay Tom's getting curious again! Bill is really hot in this story. me like :D
Author's Response: hey, my fluff(and smut) princess <3 thank you so much girl! you know how much it means to me ,)
Date: 06/12/08 11:24 am Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
OH NOES!! Why does it have to end there?
*puppy dog eyes*
Please write more soon :]
I love this and I love you!
Author's Response: aw love ya too hun! had to end it there to be able to have a quicker update, but I'll write more soon though, promise <3
Date: 06/12/08 11:06 am Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
GAh! so good, love it. love it loveit. Cant wait for more. update soon!
Author's Response: I will! oh thank you so much love, you can't believe how much positive reviews mean to me !!!
Date: 06/12/08 10:43 am Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
*gasp* You meanie! Leaving us hanging when it was getting so good *pout*
Yum, I loved this chapter :D Hot make out session in the grass, great scene with Andi and Bill, plus awesome ending scene! All in all a perfect chapter! I'll be putting up a tent here, waiting for more.
*sits down inside tent*
Author's Response: sowwy ! think you can forgive me if I camp out with you and bring my laptop to write the next chap ? thank you so much girl, you really think the chap was perfect? that is too cute of you ,) thanksies *hugs and huddles down in sleeping bag*
Date: 06/12/08 10:36 am Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
im....gonna........kill you.
really.
ur gonna suffer a slow and painfull death.
....how dare you..?!
HOW DARE YOU END THIS CHAP LIKE THIS?!?!?!?
OMG IM GONNA DIE!!!!!!
*cuts her wrists*
OMG!!! YOU'RE SO EVIL! I HAAAAAAAATTEEEE YOOOOOOOUUU!!!!
HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE!!!!!!
*cries*
omg.... u shoulg get hit by a truck!!! how can u do this to me?!?!?
this chap was sooo amazing... fuuuuuckkk!! why???
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYY??????????
*slams her head against the wall*
ps: i cant hate you. fuck
Author's Response: aww love you too princess ,) *kisses and hugs and pink hearts and faries* so I am guessing the constant death treath of both me and you is a sign that this was enjoyable, yes? because there will be more really soon I hope ,) maybe I'll write another one...no wait, I was just hit by a truck, I can't...your fault *evil laugh* no but seriously, new chap coming up *kisses* loveya andy !
Date: 06/12/08 10:27 am Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
i LOVED it but mostly the begining and then end not so much middle but still ^_^
Author's Response: haha thanksies, sad you didn't like the entire chap, but happy you enjoyed parts of it ,) makes me smile !!! *hugs* xD
Date: 06/12/08 03:04 am Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
it was getting really really good why did u stop
keep posting please
Author's Response: hihi gotta save some for later chaps ,) I'm posting one real soon ! thanks
Date: 06/11/08 01:59 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
woah, please keep on writing!! I readed your story in a really short time, it was just way too good to stop somewhere in the middle and read it further after a few days.
update soon??
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as possible love, thank you so much for this ! it really means a lot to me ,)
Date: 06/10/08 08:13 pm Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
SCARY
Author's Response: hihi ,) evil
Date: 06/10/08 07:57 am Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
I absolutaly loved this chapter!! I love that kiss and I feel sad for Tom..His daddy rape him??? Why?? Or is he only smacking his ass?? xDD.. I´m just kidding!! Love it!! Update soon!!
Author's Response: now why would anyone want to rape Tomi... ,) hahaaa you wish, no, only Bill get's to spank Tom's ass (okay sorry for the pervertedness but you started it) ,p thank you so much, I'll update real soon!
Date: 06/09/08 11:16 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
Oh my! Lucy that was total perfection. That kiss....WOW! More passionate and even more sexier then twincest sex itself, i must say!
And now we're finally introduced to "The Attic" quite a frightening place, it seems, by your dark description. I was soo scared for Tom. And i know this might sound weird, but for some reason when a fic has a plot where rape is invovled i can see Bill being the victim. But when its Tom, i just can't seem to grasp the concept with his baggy gangsta clothes and hardcore personality ;D, but i think it makes it that much more real and scary becuase it just goes to show that it can happen to anyone, even a macho man like Tom DD:
This chapter was very revealing and i loved it!
Can't wait for the next!=)
Love,
Andi
Author's Response: Andi, baby *hugs you* God, your review was almost scaryer than my story o.O I wanted it to be Tom who was abused because if you look at Bill he might look like a girl and all, but no raped kid would dress like he does afterwards. Tom is the kind of guy who's hiding beneath his baggy clothes and also behind his bad-boy exteriour, that's why he suits this role so well I think! haha and thanks for the comment on the kiss scene, I just love writing them when they kiss! much love, Luce <3
Date: 06/09/08 04:23 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
Hey Lucy dearest! Hope your exams/studying is going ok. I am so in love with this story! I love it almost as much as I love you!
I had a great laugh when bill made the comment about what he and Tom did/didn't do. That's the best responce ever!
I feel so bad for Tom though. And Andi too. It was Tom's dad right? Poor Tom, how can he act so normal all te time when his dad rapes him? Why hasn't he told anyone? When did it start? Where's his mom? Dead?
What's wrong w/ his dad anyway? Is he insane or did something happen to truamatize him to make him totally insane? Does Tom know about Andi? Does Andi really not remember?
Aaaaaa!!!!!! Too many questions that your just going to say, "they'll be answered later." Grrrrr....
I want more! Update soon please.
Author's Response: they'll be answered later...xD haha I'm sorry if that's all I ever say Queen, but not everyone thinks as far as you do ,) actually, I'm not studying for exams until next week hihi, but I'm writing your e-mail tomorrow! I've just had so much fun writing this fic ,D so you'll see me by tomorrow night love *hugs you*