Date: 06/14/08 05:06 pm Title: Chap. 3 : English tests
Yeah, i dont know...
Up until the last paragraf it was very nice and sweet. I realy enjoy Gay!Bill it's a breath of freach air.. Thank you!
I find it increasingly difficult to stomach abuse in fanfiction. Any fiction really...(not to mention real life)
So it is whith trepidation i continue reading.
BUT... The fic is VERY well written, no doubt about that! That is why i continue, in hope of a happy ending. Please don't disappoint me, please...
Author's Response: awww poor you, I know how hard it can be to read stuff like this, I've been through it, believe me! thank you so much, I really try very hard to write this as none-angsty as possible and it means a lot to me that you like it! do you think I pull off Gay!Bill okay? hope you won't get dissapointed, heartbroken yes, but not dissapointed!
Date: 06/14/08 04:28 pm Title: Chap. 2 : Really good friends
I do not know what to write here now.. It's... and... wow.. i'm impressed!
Thank you! :)
Tom not Bill's type... Yeah right!
Author's Response: omg you have no idea how much it means to me that you're reading this because this fic means so much to me! haha and yes, Tom's not Bill's type at aaaaal, noooo ,p duh
Date: 06/14/08 02:55 pm Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
Omnoius... Dark clouds rise at the horizon...
Bill openly Gay!!! YAAAYYY!!!
Thank you!
I am a little worried about the coming capters though...
I hate it when you, omnipotent writers, hurt Bill! Or Tom!
Author's Response: haha so glad you made your way to this fic of mine because it's one of my best I think, I just love writing it! so happy you like it as well, and yes, hurt is bad, but sometimes the fluff just gets too much ,) at least I put some humor in here for ya
Date: 06/13/08 04:54 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
I love you.. write more? *pouts*
Author's Response: hihi absolutely love ,)
Date: 06/13/08 03:01 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
Gaaaah, I love how you're writing this! Tom and Bill's relationship development is really believable.
Author's Response: oh thank you so much, it means a lot to me that you'd say that cus I've spent some time trying to get their relationship just right ,)
Date: 06/13/08 12:31 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
Hey you :-p
Finally I got time to review. Probably not so long as before because I’m dead tired at the moment. Gosh, who ever invented exams are extremely lucky that they are probably dead :-p
I’m glad that I seem to get it and thank for the explanation, it seems so obviously now ;-)
I loved this chapter it seems that it just keeps getting better and better and I thought that it wasn’t even possible :-p All the nice people that review your story are so right. You can be really proud of your writer skills ;-)
You know I like to quote sense from stories, so it’s convenient that you like to get them. It just show you what sentences stands out for my and what I feel about it ;-) Well that was my intension.
The beginning was so cute, there little tickling sessions :-p I had to laugh at the “You want to hu-ug me…”
”We’re friends, but sometimes…” A grunt from Tom made Bill chuckle. ”All right, most of the time then. We just be what we feel like being, do what we wanna do.”
What a very clear answer :-p wonder how long that is going to stay that way :-p
“He carefully lied back on the ground and stared up at the white clouds sailing around in the summer sky” I like this sentence it doesn’t mean anything to the story but a beautiful way to describe it ;-)
“Bill slipped his other arm around Tom’s waist when those full lips caressed his own, the lip-ring cool against the corner of his mouth.” I must say, I didn’t expect them to kiss where anyone could see them :-p But it was ooh so sweet *sigh*
The two of them are so cute *hug them* :-p
”Do you know about me? Is that why you’re being so nice?” When Andreas sad that I felt so sad but I guess it was normal for him to question it. He could use a friend that tread him normally.
"It wasn’t anything like how Bill’s lip would stick out, his eyes growing big and his head tilting slightly. Tom was sure that Bill could get anything he wanted with that pout, at least from Tom." Hihi, Tom boy you got it bad :-p They only seem to have eyes for each other, just how Bill can distract Tom from the movie they are watching. Without actually doing anything (for now that is) ;-)
“It just wasn’t humanly possible not to watch Bill as his pink tongue darted out to flick over plush lips. He had no control of his eyes when they wandered down to where Bill’s manicured nails stroked up and down his foot.” It seems that Tom is really distracted.
”I can tell!” Bill giggled slightly and squirmed a little in Tom’s hold, making the dread-head painfully aware of the erection between his legs. The same damn thing Bill was now most likely feeling against his ass. Tom really couldn’t have had a bigger problem.” I found this so funny, poor Tom having a problem maybe he should ask Bill for help ( Couldn’t help it (A)) :-p
“The dread-head bit his lip and prayed silently for the strength to be quiet as Bill’s hand found his thigh and the boy lifted himself, sitting down right into Tom’s aching lap. Tom felt like his pants might rip.”
Bill isn’t making it easies now is he :-p only turning him further on :-p
”Bye…” Bill’s muffled voice from behind Gustav was followed by an almost inaudible moan coming from a certain dread-headed boy. Gustav couldn’t help but to chuckle. Yeah, Tom really was a lucky guy.” God, way to end it :-p now I’m jumping up and down on my seat and begging you to continue as fast as you can ;-) please please please please :-p
(Well this review is not that short, all though I did quote a lot:-p and now I’m going to do absolutely noting. God it feels good to say that. Tomorrow is something else:-p)
*Big fat hug* send to you ;-)
Author's Response: Have I told you how much I love you? because girl, it is A LOT! seriously, this review is one of the greatest I've ever recieved xD *happy lucy* okay, first off; exams sucks, like big time! oh and the 'you want to hu-ug me' thing, that's actually from miss conginiality, she sings this little cute song that goes like that ,p haha I just had to make them kiss in public, just a way to show their growing comfort with the relationship (and of course the fact that they can only see each other so other people don't really count xD) hihi I didn't know if anyone would get the 'stroking up and down on the foot thing' just my perverted mind taking over for a brief second ,) and yes, Bill is absolutely being a tease, I love him like that <3 don't you worry, the rest of that scene will be up as soon as I have time to write the next chap, but I'm going away today so it might not be untill tomorrow :'( until then *big hugs and lots of love* lucy <3
Date: 06/13/08 09:32 am Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
O_O I NEED MORE *shakes violently* OMG I love this story, OH MY GOD!
it is just so hot *drool*
Update soon please? I'll give you cookies, and waffles, and.., and.., all you may want *puppyeyes*
Author's Response: *me wants waffles* hihi thank you darling, glad to see I've managed to make you...exited ,)
Date: 06/13/08 07:41 am Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
o_0 I was sure I wrote a review longer than that! XD Lol, the site ate it up. ANYway, let me try to remember what I wrote, lmao.
I love how spontaneous their relationship is, it's really like what Tom said, that they're just having fun and following their instincts. I like the Andreas side plot too, because it shows a different side to Bill and that makes the character more well-rounded, imho.
Update soon! XD
Author's Response: haha guess the site monster was hungry o.O it's fun writing 'no strings attached', but I don't know for how long I'll hold it up ,) God, I'm so glad you like this one! thank you so much, love lucy
Date: 06/13/08 02:30 am Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
great chapter!
lol @ randomly watching porn.
great work :)
Author's Response: aw thank you, well I didn't really think jessica alba alone would make the Gs leave the living room so... ,)
Date: 06/12/08 11:59 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
Gaaaaaaah! *stumbling and falling into a corner with foam dripping from my mouth*
Author's Response: bebubebubebu <-- that's the ambulance by the way ,) thanksies anne *kisses* you make me smile
Date: 06/12/08 11:41 pm Title: Chap. 6 : Daddy
Oh My Lucy!
How in hell did I miss this update?
More drugs for me! Yay!
I loved it!
I love Gustav!
I love Georg!
I love Tom!
And I most certanly love Bill!
And now I'm gonna read the other chapter.
You might as well call the ambulance now 'cause I'm pretty sure I'm gonna OD on the next chapter!
Author's Response: you probably missed it cus of the dose you got last time ,) I love you ! haha hope you'll like the next one as well *calling ambulance...and rehab clinic*
Date: 06/12/08 11:15 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
HOTT. God. Why'd you end it there?!?!? I needs some poooorrrrnnn.....XD.
Author's Response: well, they watched porn didn't they ,) thanksies girl, next chap will hopefully not be too far away !
Date: 06/12/08 09:02 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
NEEIIN! CLIFFHANGER!!! LUCE, how could you do that to me?!DD: lol jk! This was so hott, but i had a feeling you were gonna leave us hanging :P
Although Bill and Andreas' convos are infrequent i can tell that they are significant..i don't want to ruin the story, but i have a strong feeling that Tom's dad was the one that raped Andreas, if not then i have no idea :P
But omg! i came on Thfic and was like there better be some good fic updated for my birthday, and i was looking through all the recently updated fics and saw this one..i pretty much yelled "IN THE ATTIC! FUCK YEAH!" Hope my parents didn't hear O____O XD.
Can't wait for the next chapter, i have a feeling its gonna be amazing ;D
Your one year older than she was yesterday crazy fucking fangirl for your fic girl,
Andi
Ps. Almost finished the next chapter of Der Regan Fallt! Should be up by the weekend =)
Author's Response: hahaaaa *sings you happy birthday* heya my one year older than she was yesterday crazy fucking fangirl for my fic girl, happy to hear from ya ,) and yes, the next chapter will be rather...amazing *winks* YAY God I've been missing your story girl (like I haven't told you that already) I'll keep my eyes open for it! and you're right, Bill and Andreas' convos do mean something, I'm trying to leave hints all over the place here ,) thanksies andi, you know I love ya <3
Date: 06/12/08 04:57 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
Oh God! Next chapter!! next chapter pleeasee!! :D
Author's Response: in a while ,) hugs
Date: 06/12/08 04:39 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
Tom is a lucky guy, indeed. I love this chapter. No, I'm in love with it. Actually, I'm just so in love with this story. It's just so interesting, hot, funny and full of suspense at the same time. I don't know how you pull it off. Anyway, please, PLEASE update the next chapter this weekend, so I can see what happens when the Gs have left, because I'm going to England on Tuesday and won't have access to internet till... the end of July. So please? *puppy eyes*
About my username, yet again, how can you not know about Muse? I mean, that's like... THE indie-rock band. My favorite songs are Starlight, Hysteria and Supermassive Black Holes. Check em out!! =D
Author's Response: okay, I promise (as long as nothing big gets in the way) that I will update the fic before you go! shit, that's a loooooooooong time without internet acces girl! *pets you* poor becca! haha I'll definitively chek em out girl *hugs* love ya, luce
Date: 06/12/08 03:19 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
Luceeeee!!
i just love the way, you make angst stories,i just love the way you make twincest stories,i just love the way you make stories,with delicious sex scenes.
i just love your way to make everything so beautiful ,so unique, so real.
I want to thank you for sharing all these with us.
Very special story,i cant take my eyes of it.
please my talent babe, go on :):)
Author's Response: christinaaaaaaa *whines* oh my god, you're never gonna stop are you? *blushes* shit! ,) seriously love you for it though, it's so nice to hear that one's apreciated! and yes darling, I will most definatly go on! hugs
Date: 06/12/08 02:31 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
hehe.....love it.......^_^
Author's Response: happy ,)
Date: 06/12/08 01:44 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
HOW COULD YOU END IT IN SUCH A HOT MOMENT?! Oh Lucy, Lucy *shakes her head* *points a finger at Lucy and yells "SHAAAMEEEE"*
You left me with a huge hard-on in my pants T___T
I was thinking about your story every freaking lesson today. :D i am not only your stalker, but Lucy-addict, too :D
I loved this chapter *____* you don't know how much :D i like when one of K-twins is teasing the other and everything is still so unsure, oh&ah :D pwp etc, etc is not so interesting, even if there's a hot sex scene. Teasing [and fluff] is the best. ^^ and Bill teases Tom so deliciously *puddle of saliva on the floor*
Heyyy but I can't sey no to some hot scene... Diksi is happy when Bill is happy. And Bill is happy when he gets laid ^______^ soooooo i am waiting for the new chappi n_n
buzi:*
Author's Response: I am so very sorry girl, but it was the choise between stopping it here or posting later, next chap will be up by the weekend though (I hope) sorry bout your...pants ,) I have to agree with you, I write pwp alot but I'm not up for writing it if I can't have a story line around it .) and when Bill gets laid Tom's happy and when Tom's happy lucy's happy <3 thanksies iza, loveya ,)
Date: 06/12/08 01:29 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
Oh you better make up for it! I have a little issue as of now thank you. >.< *pouts angrily* Oh how I count on your entertainment when I'm supposed to be doing important things. XD
Amazing as always I have to say. I feel far more appreciative for your wording for some reason so I'm going to sit here and praise your writing skills! =D
The way things are going between those two is just driving me nuts! Tom's reactions to Bill make me want to scream! =] And Bill is such a tease! Yum! I love it! Wish I could say more but I better go before I get busted. =o I'm supposed to be working on something. -_-; Damn deadline. Though I can never pass up the chance to read one of your updates! =D Hope my reviews aren't getting too repeptive and that you're not getting tired of reading my rambles. XD
Much love!
Summer
Author's Response: girl, with all the nice stuff you say in your reviews, how could I get tired if you repeat it ,) and I am very sorry about your little...problem ,) I'm actually having so much fun writing about Tom's reactions, he's so cute when he's confused about his feelings .p aww, poor you with your work, hope next chap will cheer you up again ,) love ya, luce
Date: 06/12/08 01:26 pm Title: Chap. 7 : Sleeping all over the place
OMG amazing.. cant wait to see what happens XD kiss
Author's Response: hihi thanksies, *hugs n kisses* luce
