Date: 06/19/08 02:28 am Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
Rawr x]
Author's Response: weee ,)
Date: 06/19/08 02:04 am Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
Oh my god, how could you leave me for ten days? D: ;_;
Well have fun!
This is getting more and more intense. *bites fingernails*
Oh and I love the pants down groin action of course. ;)
Author's Response: sorry, gonna write though! speaking of such, are you planning a new fic soon? *doe eyes* cus that would send me and my other friends (your fans) to heaven you know! haha 'pants down groin action' never heard someone put it that way before ,)
Date: 06/19/08 01:31 am Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
gah
SO HOT
you are amazing at this!
Author's Response: *blushes* wow, thank you <3
Date: 06/17/08 11:54 am Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
u're amazing! 4 real! tremendous talent! u're dfinitely amongst my favourites! very prolific&it's all just top quality material! I read all ya stories&I must admit I hav intensely enjoyd all, some more than once! u've got an extraordinary ability 2 write insightful, deep, but not mooshy or corny/tacky stuff! they're all fantastic&phenomenal& sizzlin' hot! if I may, I'd like 2 state a request! lol, but still pretty pls an update 4 `thicker than water`! 2 passionate&captivatin' 2 leave it unfinishd&I'm gettin' anxious&curious 2 see how u continue wit ya train of thought bout mo' xcitin' action between those 2... irrezistible cause of dat vampire component! i'm giddy just thinkin' bout it... perhaps, soon, another installment 4 `in the attic` as well... luv it! I'm feelin' it! apologies if I come off as irritatingly demandin', I'm just hookd! I admit! bsides, u'r so creative&dilligent, dat ya otha stories r all concluded, so can't give u grief 4 those! seriously, in da best of wayz, humour ya fanz! peace out! may da muses further inspire u, though I'm positive u'r set, u got plenty&respect 4 dat! keep it up...
p.s. awesome narratin' skillz, great language, aka vocab&grammar, makes dis whole xperince so much more gratifyin', easier, betta! anotha thang, i'm so down wit bill bein' dominant&on...top of tom! I agree! he can so take charge in their xquisite lil' couple time...
Author's Response: oh...my...god! okay so I'm blushing way bad over here, girl you tryin to kill me? cus seriously, I'm gonna die of praise ,) the stuff you just said about me, wow! it's so nice to know one's appreciated! so you want an update to my vamp fic huh? okay, I'll see what I can do ,p for you, I think I can make an effort an write the next chap while I lounge on the beach on my ten days vacation without freakin internet...god that hurts. haha and as for ma grammar, that's all thanks to my beta girl, she's amazing! hah, yeah I like Bill being the bossy little winksent that he is ,) I have a kink that sais bossyBill bottomTom, that's me in a nutchell xD hope to see ya around darling, and that you'll like chap 9 to this fic!
Date: 06/17/08 10:56 am Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
hey, I wanna write more, but I'm not good at writing in english, so I'm afraid of mistake.. what if I tell something wrong to you ?!?!? *sobs*
If I could use my mother language, I would write long long reviews.
so..I'm just watching and feel everything!! you're genius.
I love you and your fic *_* .......
Although I'm kind of person who has a few words to say, Remember I'm always watching you *hugs*
I LUV your BILL!! how cute...!
If I were Tom, I can't live without him. you're really lucky guy, Tom..
and I wanna cut Jorg's dick off.
Author's Response: heywhile you're at it, smash his balls as well ,) man, I don't know how many times I've said this, but GRAMMAR DOSN'T COUNT xD not in reviews anyway. No author whatsoever are gonna be annoyed by grammar mistakes in reviews, we're too blissed out about the review in itself than to check for errors ,p so thank you so so much for reviewing me, it really means a lot to me and just remember, i do not care if you write something wrong, hell I'm sure I'm making typos as big as elephants in my authors responce as well ,) *hugs*
Date: 06/17/08 07:58 am Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
Hey girl
I thought I had heared it somewhere. I only saw miss congeniality like a hundred times :-p
You made me so happy by updating, you have no idea and the start was absolutely hot :-p like fireworks, definitely ;-) Burning up here :o
“He had never in a million years expected to be enjoying doing anything sexual with a person who had a dick.”
Poor Tom he seems to have a bit of trouble excepting that he gets turn on by a guy, I get why he feels that way by his dad and all. But Bill is hard to resisted :-p
“Bill’s fingers burned like fire against Tom’s belly where they were sneaking their way into his boxers. ”Please Tomi.”
He so wants it. That was should a turn on, I must say
“White flames licking up every surface of his body as he moaned helplessly and released right into Bill’s anticipating mouth. It really wasn’t fair that Tom wished he was coming inside Bill’s tight little ass, instead. Not fair that he, of all people, should turn out liking boys.”
Poor thing he is, but I think he deserves to find some pleasure in that instead of pain.
I love the way you describes it, really impressive;-)
“He realized he really didn’t have much to hide from Bill anymore. Only some things, but he hid those from everyone so…”
I wish Tom would tell Bill but I guess it’s not that simple. If he does Bill definitely wants to help and he can’t really do anything except turning Tom’s dad in. And that can be pretty hard, well I will have to wait and see how it goes but I think it will become hard to hide if they take things further. But well his friend didn’t seem to notice anything. But Bill and Tom seems to be very close to one an other in a short time so it’s different :-p I bet that Bill know some things all ready that Georg and Gustav don’t ;-) You see your story really gets to me even get me to think about it even if I’m not reading ;-)
“Judging by the satisfied smirk on the other boy’s face, Tom was certain his obvious jealousy hadn’t gone unnoticed.”
Ooooh, Tom is so cute. Hihi, well why would he be jealous :-p totally have no idea:-p
They are just fooling around don’t they:-p I bet Tom wants to be Bill’s boyfriend but that he just doesn’t have the courage jet :-p
”Would you be terribly uncomfortable if I fell in love with you?”
The dreadlocked boy had to smile at the adorable way Bill hid his face deeper in his neck after confessing that. ”No, I’d probably fall in love with you, as well.”
Hihi, trying to say something now:-p
I knew that this was bound to happen. They are just to cute.
I love the way that Bill interact with Andreas, he just seem to know the best way to acted around the boy.
Andreas really seems to loosen up around him even telling jokes and even tease Bill with Tom for example :-p
”I’m sure it is, but judging by the way he was holding your hand, I don’t think it’s just about exploration, do you?” Andreas grinned at him, just a small strip of his teeth showing.”
Andreas really hit a nerve with this, hihi ;-)
Nice move of Bill to read Andreas “future” in the lines of his hand. That way he get used to some human contact and it shows that he is willing to trust Bill enough to let him touch him ;-)even if it's just his hand. He all so make him at ease by telling some absurd things (really how do you come up with those. I had to laugh at that :-p)
“The moment it took for Bill to regain his calmness and appear as if nothing out of the ordinary had happened was enough for the blonde boy to lock himself up again. But Bill would have none of it.”
Nicely done, this could be a very awkward moment for Andreas at least and it could have ended bad if Bill had reacted different. He did exactly the right thing ;-)
”Oh, come on! I’m sure she’s a real beauty.” Bill stumbled into his shoes, urged on by his blonde and giggling friend. ”And she could always shave!”
Man, I had to laugh hard at this :-p I could almost imaging :-p
”Oh, I’m just lying here. In bed. Naked. Thinking of you.” The groan coming from the other end of the line told Bill that his attempts at making Tom react to him was very much successful.”
Oooh jeah, telephone sex :-p that was pretty hot. God, I totally love it. So much hotness in one chapter, I’m totally in a haze now :-p keep that up girl :-p can’t wait for more of this.
”I…yeah! I’m gonna…shit I’m gonna fuck you soon, okay?”
”Yes, please.” Bill knew Tom could probably hear the wantonness of his tone, could probably imagine Bill sprawled out on the bed right now. ”Night Tomi, see you tomorrow.”
Can’t wait for the chapter that you let them do just that. I really looking forward to that, like really really bad :-p
”Yeah dad, I’m coming…Bill, I gotta…fuck, I gotta go Bill.”
Don’t like the sound of that, I have some idea what his dad want from him. The more I read of him the more I want to slash him into little pieces or beat him up and then go al hostel on him (don’t know if you seen the movie but it’s pretty much torture) (no, not violent at all :-p)
Well you get my point, I guess :-p
Well, I seem to have a lot to say today :-p all I have left to say is Update soon and I would love you even more ;-)
*Big hug*
Author's Response: oh my...holy freakin mother of that bloody damn God! OO that was a seriously long review...I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!! shit you're good to me kris! actually, the thing about Tom debating his sexuality because of his dad really just struck me somewhere into the first chapters, I didn't think of the fact that after being forced by one male, having sexual relations with another might be a little hard oO but seeing as Tom mistook Bill for a girl, I really don't think it will be so much of a problem ,p ~*~ I have a plan forming on Tom's dad's future, but I'm not quite usre how I'll play it out just yet...don't think it will be in 'hostel' style though ,) but it is a vey nice suggestion xD ~*~ and I'm so happy you liked the way their realtionship is becoming about a little more than just the sex stuff <3 I just love twin love *heart eyes* ~*~ I think I'm making Bill a somehwat Mary Sue, but I'm giving explanations to why he knows how to act the right way around the right people later on, it's just the kind of person I'd wish to have as my friend ,) although minus the constant teasing xD ~*~ haha so you liked the phone sex huh? ,) knew you would ,p and your idea of what it was Tom's dad wanted with him at that moment is most likely right, God I'm being so mean to the boy oO but now I'm gonna go find a chainsaw so we can play chainsaw massacre with Jorg ,) ~*~ hugs and kisses for ya love, happy you're reviewing me, luce <3
Date: 06/17/08 07:52 am Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
omg i loved it! =0
this was SO fucking gd xD
i love the way tom and bill interact and i love the way bill keeps pushing tom just a little bit further than tom expects, but yet he loves every moment of it =D
but i can't emagine how tom must have felt at the end of the phone call... telling bill he'd fuck him while knowing he himself would be fucked by his own dad in only a few mins? =S that can't be a very gd feeling...
but i love how andreas and bill are getting closer and closer and i really think that it's the cutest friendship EVER! xD
anw, in short terms: i loved it and can't wait for more =D
Author's Response: awww me loves you for being such a loyal reviewer! thank you so much for this, it is really too cute to be true ,) I loved the way you described how Bill pushes Tom, that was just really nicely written! and yes, Tom must have felt like crap, but hey, at least he had something to avert his mind to...namely Bill. aw happy you like adny and Bill's friendship xD thank you sooooooooooooo MUCH!
Date: 06/17/08 07:30 am Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
I love this so much!
And I know I've already reviewed this chapter... But I want another one, quick x]
*looks under chair*
It's not there O.o
Author's Response: Nope, not under the chair *pout* but it's halfway done so it will come up soon I hope! thank you so much!!!
Date: 06/17/08 05:10 am Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
Okay, so... I've been away camping with my friends for a week, so I've missed a few chapters... I've just finished reading them all!
And you know what? This is THE MOST BEAUTIFUL, AMAZING, WONDERFUL fic I've ever read! I'm in love with your story, really. I'll never stop repeating how much I like it.
And see? I told you Tom was raped by his father, I KNEW IT! è_é
Now I'm wondering if it was Jorg who raped Andreas, too...
Bill is absolutely lovely ^^ I really like him, in this fic.
What else? I'd have a lot of things to say about the last few chapters...
Let's just say, UPDATE SOON! lol
Author's Response: awww, wonder where you'd gone too ,) I'm so glad you liked this though, all of the chaps! *blushes* oh my, tha is so sweet of you *beams* and yes, you were right about Tom being raped by his dad .( poor him! so, I'll update soon, till then, take care <3
Date: 06/17/08 01:36 am Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
AHAHAHA HOT FONE SEX :D
highlight of my day. x3
Author's Response: hihi thanksies ,) sweet of you <3
Date: 06/16/08 11:02 pm Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
Im loving the story so far. This chapter was so heartbreaking though, poor Andi
It also drives me nuts that Tom is hiding things from. Bill. I wonder if what happens between Tom and his dad will make it harder for Tom to go further with Bill...
Author's Response: I hate it when the boys are hiding things from each other too, but that's a very good wondermeant (if that's even a word) and it will be answered ,) thank you so much for recvieing this, I'm so happy you liked it!
Date: 06/16/08 07:20 pm Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
Luce, I need to tell you again how fantastic this chapter is! I had a heck of a time doing the beta because I kept getting caught back up in the story. And the sex! OMG Girl. When Tom actually fucks Bill the first time, it's gonna blow the roof off...LOL
You keep getting better and better...
Author's Response: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa is it like your quest in life to make as many as possible blush so bad it's bound to get permanent? hihi I'm so looking forward to writing the sex thing xD hell I'm having a way too good time just writing kissing scenes oO anywhooo gonna reply to your e-mail when I'm done at school ,) hugs
Date: 06/16/08 07:14 pm Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
That was some hot phone sex ^^ I feel so bad for Tomi though...
Author's Response: hihi thanks, and yes poor boy *hugs*
Date: 06/16/08 04:27 pm Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
i LOVE it it is sooooooooooooo AWESOME!
Author's Response: hihi thanksies, happy you do ,)
Date: 06/16/08 04:12 pm Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
Aww, I just wanted to hug Andreas soo bad when I read that. I don't know why but I have this idea in my head that the guy that kidnapped Andreas, and Toms dad is the same person? Dunno, its just in my head, but the guy is obviously evil!
I love the way you discribe and how I can so easily picture every movement and ever picture because you tell everything so well..
I hope that they do have sex soon and I think its soo cute that they're falling in love but theres gonna be so much drama, whan Bills dad finds out that Tom is bi.. I feel sorry for the boy already, he's probably getting beat up at home, which is why he wouldn't swim with the other boys..
Anyway, keep it up, its really really good :D
- Steena //
Author's Response: you're right about the beating up at home part, but there's much more going on in that house :'( poor andi huh? God, I can't believe I'd do this to him oO I'm mean aren't I? omg *blushes* wow you just seriously spoiled me so bad, love ya for it xD thank you so much for this! mean the world to me <3
Date: 06/16/08 03:34 pm Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
Lucy, babe
i m so sorry but if you continue to write such a worderful stories,i cant help it,but i m telling to you again and again, that you re a specialist of fics.
What can i say first??
I just loved the way that their relationship grow up slowly.
I melted by the hot phone sex.
i loved the way Andreas open himself to Bill and trusted him.
I m all yours truly and you know that.
Please my darling,when you find time update this miracle.
love ya for your inspiration:)
Author's Response: yeah so I probably have a permanent blush stuck to my face don't I ? and it's all your fault xD my God you're way too cute to be true! I'm having a lot of fun writing the development of the boy's relationship, but I'm feeling really bad about treating andi this way :'( haha happy you liked the phone sex ,) never done that before. I will update as soon as possible chris, I promise! much love, yours luce
Date: 06/16/08 03:20 pm Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
TEN FREAKING DAYS? whyy? TT___TT
it means... ten days of suffering from boredom! :O huuuug meeeeeehhh...!
But let's think optimistic... You'll be free from me n__n ohhh I hope that when I am back from polish sea and Germany there will be 88743264872374 new chapters of your story :D you've got a lot of time ^_^
And yeah, you're right, being a boy sucks when you think about Bill/Tom in public... they're too arousing ;-D
Dixxi is pretty damn sure that she will miss Lucynka :(
buzi;*
Author's Response: and luce is pretty damn sure she'll miss her iza as well! ten days of sun and sea and...no computer oO so there will only be plotting on my part, and some handwritten stuff ,) I'll try to make at least one more chap before I go, possibly two but I'm not sure how much time I've got. and then when I come home I'll be pretty buzy for another week but I might have time to write something then as well ,) definitively gonna miss you girl! hugs, lucy
Date: 06/16/08 02:50 pm Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
Oh My Lucy!
Sorry to tell you but the ambulance didn't make it in time. I am now dead and by the looks of it, I must have gone to heaven. There's pink unicorns everywhere and little, naked Bills and Toms playing the harp everywhere.
And my one and only god, (you) is sitting on a big throne made of sweets.
But I will come back and haunt this website everytime you update.
I need my regular dose of the A-drug, to keep the pink unicorns alive.
Gaaaaaaah! (that's me coming to haunt you) ^_^
Seriously! I loved the scene where they're sitting at Andreas' house!
God! I love you humor!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: okay so that little piece of review could very well be a fic xD seriously HAHAAA!!! good thing I'm not afraid of ghosts then ,) and OMG little naked Bill and Toms everywhere *suicide and goes to heaven to live with you and the porn and the pink unicorns* wanna share my throne? *hugs*
Date: 06/16/08 02:36 pm Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
Hey Lucy! OMFG! You have no idea how much I laughed after the Andreas part. The pet, the true love (that made my day). Honestly, you should have heard me! I was laughing so hard I nearly cried.
But then you had to go an ruin it. I wish you'd stopped there. The phone sex was fine. But I just knew Tom's dad was gonna intervene some how. And he did. Does he hurt Tom every chance he gets. You're gonna explain why right?
I emailed you a wicked long epic btw.
And I'm don't w/ school as of three hours ago!
Update soon. And do more funny stuff! You're making my life!
Author's Response: hihi so happy I can crack you up ,) and yes, I have seen the novel you wrote me, but havn't had the time to read it yet, I'm gonna though, tomorrow ,p I have one more day at school so it's up bright and early tomorrow *pouts* and yes, I'm gonna explain Jorgs reasons to hurting Tom! see ya soon love! luce
Date: 06/16/08 02:11 pm Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
I feel all hot and bothered now... Need to take care of it, please wait...
Yes... That felt absolutely wonderfull. Thank my godess for a cold shower...
Now i can concentrate again!
Blowjobs and phone sex (YAY), yes i was right about the sex!;) It would be great! And it IS!!!! Thank you! :D
Bill is soo sweet and kind and gentle, i can't do anything but Love him!
(I think my boyfriend might be a little jealous though... ;)
Tom still a bit confused... Going from totaly Strait to Bisexual (maybe even gay) in less than a week, beacuse he found Mr. Perfect... Yeah i would be confused to;)
I'm not a violent man, but if i came across your Jorg, i would beat him to a pulp, and then i would cut his heart out whith a spoon!
Why a spoon you ask?? Beacuse it will hurt more!!!
(Thank you for that one, Mr. Rickman)
YAY for Andreas (and his surprised mother...) Why didn't Andreas introduce Bill to her? I though that was a bit rude!!! Poor boy...:( Yeah, yeah, i know, pitty doesn't help (i, of all people, should know that), but i can't help it, i feel for the kid...
You asked me, if i think you pull Gay!Bill off ok!
Yes, i do, if youre intentions were to write a Bill that is compleately secure about his own sexuality! If you didn't, then there is someting wrong!
I better hope not! He is wonderfull!
A lot of ramblings from me today... I hope you can find it in youre heart to forgive me... please :)
Once again: Thank you!
Author's Response: and thank you to ,) haha yes, Tom is definatly confused, but he's coming along nicely I think ,p as for Jorg, I would be happy to assist you on that quest actually, but I think I'd use a chainsaw oO Andreas didn't introduse Bill to his mother because as every bothered teenage boy he was scared she'd say something stupid. much like Simone did to Tom the first time he was over at Bill's place ,p and if I can find it in my heart to forgive you? well, let's see! I got to read a wonderful long review, I got more praise than I probably deserve, I'm smiling so bad right now...yeah I think I can forgive you for being one heck of a nice reviewer xD thanksies