Date: 06/21/08 02:28 pm Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
Welcome back to civilazation. I hope you had a wonderful vacation and are feeling rested and full of energy! Did you managed to survive without a computer? But then again.. you ARE reading this so i just assume you did! And that's good beacuse this fic is way to good to stop here!
I was sitting on needles when Bill met Jorg, horified that he might try to hurt Bill!
I hope Tom finds the currage he needs, to be able to tell Bill his secret soon...!
The whole Simone-Bill interaction was very sweet and funny! More of that please... :)
Would Simone consider Tom to be a good son-in-law? I don't remember if she has metioned that!
The sex... Mmmm delicious!
Thank you!
As i have said before... Two boys in love... it doesen't get any hotter than that!
Andy... You almost confirmed my suspicions about the identity of his tormentor... please let him remember, and tell Bill (or anybody) soon... It's only self preservation on my part... I HATE to se Bill get hurt...
I'm waiting for June to come to an end, so i can read more!
Author's Response: I didn't survive ... ... ... oh who am I kiddin, of course I did ,) well you're lucky, he didn't try to hurt Bill...yet haha and about Simone, I've been trying to leave some hints about how she feels about Tom because she really does like him although she hasn't met him enough to make up her mind about him being her son in law ,) and I totally agree, two boys in love is great, and especially if it's our all beloved Bill and Tom ,) and about Andy, you'll just have to wait and see ,p well, June has come to an end and now the next chap is up ! love, luce
Date: 06/21/08 09:59 am Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
Hey Lucy
What, your gone for 10 days! Nooooooooo. *cries* You can’t do that, I can’t go without this! Okay now I definitely are going to need to go to rehab * pull myself together* :-p
But I hope you really have fun though and I wish you much luck with surviving without you computer ;-) I don’t know if I could do that hihi ;-) where did you go to? Well I will be counting down the days until you will be back ;-) At least you’re going to have a nice long review to read ;-)
“They judged her beautiful baby before even taking a second look and seeing the wonderful person that hid beneath those layers of jewelry and make-up.”
People always seem to do that when they first see someone, judging someone by there appearance. Well, everyone does that a bit it’s the way you handle that, that define you :-p if you know what I mean with that.
“”Exactly!” And that was the only answer she got before she was being pushed out the door by a very embarrassed son.”
Jeah, always embarrassing your son, you shouldn’t tease him like that :-p I really like they way you describe her, she's a really sweet mother, isn't she ;-)
“He immediately noticed the big fireplace and without warning, a vision came to mind of himself writhing on the carpet while the soft glow of the fire caressed Tom’s naked body above him.”
Bill such dirty thoughts. I must say I love the image of that :-p
“He may have noticed the way dark eyes roamed his body just as they had done in the hallway when Bill wasn’t looking. He would have probably seen the slight smirk at the corner of the man’s mouth as Jorg imagined what pleasure Bill’s pouted lips might give, what tightness hid underneath those tempting pants.”
OMG, he didn’t just thought that. My eyes went huge and I bet I stopped breathing for a second. How dear he! He has the perfect mask I must say, Bill has absolutely no idea were the men’s thoughts went. He was so damn friendly I just want to, grrr (Well you know :-p)
No wonder that Tom was shocked. I hope that Bill listens to Tom’s warning.
“He was so extremely grateful that Bill got the hint when Tom allowed that pierced tongue to claim his mouth. Bill rolled them over, immediately straddling Tom’s lap and bringing his hands up to tangle in blond dreadlocks.”
I swear my tummy just fluttered when I read from here. My eyes were glued to the screen an I had a difficult time breathing :-p You sure know how to write those sex scene. It was so Hot, so heated. Really awesome girl, I can honestly say that your one of the best at this ;-) 0_o
“The dreadlocked boy collapsed on top of his lover, burying his head in Bill’s neck and feeling the way a lazy smile graced Bill’s lips against his cheek.”
Okay now I can breath again :-p that was something, looking forward to more of this.(Can't seem to help it:-p)
“It was as if Andreas had suddenly shrunk back and just blended with the white door he was leaning against.”
0_o I don’t like were this seems to be going. Wonder why Andreas seems to react that way when Tom’s dad is mention :-p Well I’m going to keep my theories for myself :-p and just try and wait for you to unravel the truth. Meanwhile I will keep on wondering if I’m right an ruminate on your story for 10 whole days:-p
I don’t think my review is as long as before but it’s still long so hope you like it ;-)
I’ll be waiting full of long-suffering patients until you will return :-p I'll try to survive ;-)
I wish you much fun and send you a big hug ;-) -X-
Author's Response: *biiiiiiiiiiig hug back* hey girl I'm here again ,D I went to Spain actually, had a really nice time, buit missed my little baby (computer) extreemly! I think Bill and Tom (in real life) are really strong for being who they are also on the outside. I've always been a person who's not afraid to show the world who I am, but at the same time no one really knew me, basically because they were too busy mocking me ,) but you're right, it's how you handle that sort of thing that defines you, I never cared and so it didn't hurt as bad, after some years it actually didn't hurt at all ,p haha and yes, I love writing Simone as the teasing mother, I'd like to have a mom like that, the ones who act a little bit like friends. God, I almost got goosebums when writing Jorg that way, I just had to put in the 'do you want muffins' comment just because I felt it was too creepy to go on with the angst oO and Bill listening to Tom's warning...when has Bill ever let anyone tell him what to do? awww you really think I'm one of the good ones at writing sex scenes? that is so extreemly nice of you, cus I really don't have that much...practical experience...none actually...so it's nice that my work is belivable ,) A part of Andreas' secret will be revealed in the next chap which is actually posted right now, so I really hope you'll like it! and honey, your reviews are like gold however long they are because the things you say are just so kind and thoughtfull, I really love that you get so involved with my story, makes me feel special ,) so lot's of hugs n kisses and I hope to hear from you soon! yours, luce
Date: 06/20/08 08:41 pm Title: Chap. 8 : Future prophesies
OMG, i'm in love with this one.
More. =)
Author's Response: weee thanksies ,)
Date: 06/20/08 03:18 am Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
Lyce my love,
Thanks for that great chapter.
Please protect Bill from that monster.
God, the boys' relationship, their love, their moments.
You re the best honey.
i want to wish you from my heart, happy holidays, and i ll be here to wait for you coming back.
bless you sweetie.
You rock my word and you make it hard!! (as your perfect story's title said)
Author's Response: aw you actually remember that one? that is so cute ,) and about proecting Bill from the monster...the story goes wherever my fingers takes it, I really have nothing to say, I just post whatever they write oO I had a really good holiday (as good as it can get without internet) and I hope you'll like the next chap! love ya <3
Date: 06/19/08 04:24 pm Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
...AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
Author's Response: hihi thanks ,)
Date: 06/19/08 04:15 pm Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
I just KNOW thats Andreas and Toms dad has something to do with eachother.. Didn't I write that in my last review aswell? Lol... Anyway, its soooo good, I love every lil bit of it, uh, and especially the sex part, its ooh so hot!
Still, your destribing is amazing, the way you always paint the pictures in my head, I'm just loving the whole thing so much..
Okay, so to guess... I really hope that Toms dad stays away from Bill, eventhough I know he wont, coz.. yeah the world just isn't that good.. And I also just KNOW that its Toms dad that has molested Andreas, coz hes a peedo, who wants to screw Bill, so he probably screwed Andreas.. Poor boy..
Okay, thats enough for my babling.. Love you, keep up the brilliant work
Author's Response: oh sweety *is smiling and wont stop* thank you so much, you have no idea how much it means to me to hear that I manage to paint pictures in your head because that is something I've been trying to do for a long time! and you're right, the world isn't good, but maybe I am? who knows ,)
Date: 06/19/08 03:23 pm Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
Hey Lucy! This was such a hot chapter! You have no idea (actually maybe you do lol). Tom and Bill were so cute together. Tom's dad didn't come across as too creepy. If I didn't know better I'd say he was nice. Was Tom ever friends w/ Andi? Before he was kiddapped? Tom's dad is totally the one who hurt Andi before. And he remembers! Why doesn't he say anything? Why doesn't Tom? He's tried to run away enough times. His dad should be in jail.
Any way, enjoy your vacation, Greece right? Lucky. Anyway, looking forward to multiple updates when you come back.
Author's Response: 'Tom's dad didn't come across as too creepy' what? with all the nasty things he thought about Bill and you don't think he's a freekin phsyco pedophil ??? ,D haha you're wierd girl, love ya for it <3 and no, Tom wasn't friends with Andy before, no one really knows Andy I think :'( he's a loner! I'm responding to your e-mail soon by the way, but I'm prioritating my stories first which I presume you wont mind ,) so see ya soon Queen, loves
Date: 06/19/08 02:15 pm Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
gah 10 days?! haha i guess i can wait that long
poor Andreas
i hope Jorg doesn't get Bill
i wanna poke that man's eyes out.
have fun on holidays!
Author's Response: please do (poke Jorg's eyes out that is) 'have fun on holidays' oO I'm WITHOUT my comp...my baby...how will I survive? *bawls*
Date: 06/19/08 01:44 pm Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
omg i just KNEW it was tom's dad who had done this to andi!!!
ever since u mentioned the shacles in the atick and then it was just kinda confirmed when u wrote about andi's scars...
*kicks tom's dad in the nuts*
does tom know about this? does tom know it was his dad who raped andi? is that why he doesn't want bill talking to his dad and not just because of what he's already doing to tom himself?
ok.. maybe i'm getting a bit TOO carried away...
so i'm just gonna tell u that i LOVED this chap too and can't wait for more of this! =0
Author's Response: haha, that was a lot of assumptions and theories my dear friend, I will neither dismiss nor confirm any of them though ,) thank you for kicking Jorg in the nuts by the way, he needed that! oh and you're gonna have to wait for at least ten days girl :'( sorry!
Date: 06/19/08 11:20 am Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
OMG!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I CANT WAIT! lol Great chapter!...
But Im kinda lost did they actually have sex or was it just like the touchy feely stuff....lol
Cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: hihi thanksies. No they didn't have sex, just seriously humped each other xD God, I'm so glad you like this!
Date: 06/19/08 10:47 am Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
Hot and exciting! and Tom's father and the thing with Andy, it's really starting to scare me now! Oh ten days? How will I ever survive without the lucy-goodness? ;) Well I hope you have a wonderful holiday and come home all nice and tanned! :)
Author's Response: hah, yeah I'm gonna be lying on the beach writing dirty twincest stories while my parents lounge close by...no seriously, that's what I'm gonna be doing xD thank you so much for this, I'm so extreemly happy that you like it!
Date: 06/19/08 10:03 am Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
You know, I really love that you don't rush things. You always give us tiny pieces of the story around the cute relationship between Tom and Bill and that's great! I really enjoy reading this!
Author's Response: hihi thanks, I just hope I will be able to keep that non-rushed phase as I write the next chapters ,)
Date: 06/19/08 09:31 am Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
I have a feeling secrets are going to be revealed soon! *reads note* OH NO! *clings* O_O You can't leave! What about...BILL and Tom! ;.; You can't leave them! What about me! What am I going to do without this story while you're gone! =o
*sigh* I guess you need holidays too. ._. As sad as it makes us. We'll live...I guess. x-x Good luck surviving. XD
Anyway onto the chapter. UGH! Tom's dad was checking Bill out. Disturbing! The random "Have a muffin" thing made me laugh though. XD Something about it being after those terrible thoughts made it hilarious. XD
I love how Tom called Bill 'love'. I just love when people do that. XD And it totally turned Bill on! Tom should say it more often. XD Well I got to go. This made me feel a whole lot better! *has an ear infection that freaking HURTS >< * Nothing like a little Bill and Tom to take away the pain. =]
Much love!
Summer
Author's Response: oooh my little poor summer *pets ear (if that is even possible)* I don't wanna go, I don't wanna leave you love :'( but hahaaaaaaaa you caught on to the muffin thing, I just love that word 'muffin' it's so...muffin. it just had to come in there between all the creapy things xD and yes, Bill was definatly turned on by Tom calling him 'love' wonder when Tom's gonna get the connection ,) *hugs and hugs and hugs and refuses to let go*
Date: 06/19/08 09:24 am Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
Quite some time? Ten days?
THATS FOREVER!!! *bawls*
Wow, this chapter was incredible. I kept waiting for Jorg to walk in on them. Oh my god, i really cant wait to find out how everything ties together. This is really really awesome.
For the record, i love Andi. He's so adorably post-rape-depressed. I just wanna snuggle him. xD.
What is my obsession with raping? Jeez.
Anyways, I really want more about Tom's situation. I'm craving it! I know you wont let us down though. XD. Have a nice trip!
Author's Response: *gives you post-rape.depressed Andy to snuggle while I'm gone* haha I actually contemplaited having Jorg walking in on them, but I think he's the kinda goy that would just listen outside the door and find a way to punish Tom for it later oO there's more about Tom's situation to come, much more! hugs n kisses, thank you so much for this, luce
Date: 06/19/08 08:24 am Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
I knew it! I said it beforeee!
It was Tom's father who raped Andi! Uhh and now he wants to do the same to our sweet sexy Billy T___T Tom should do something more to prevent this.
The humping scene was so hooot *___* ohhh ahhh *butterflies in belly* if I didn't finish my school today, I'd for sure think about B&T's sexual adventure on every class :D hothothothot
I'll miss you, Firelucy T__________T take me with you in your pocket!
Have a nice holiday! *hugs Lucynka and won't let go*
buzi T_________T
Author's Response: *stuffs you in pocket with bill and tom action figures to play with...naked ones* when are you done in school, like for the summer? cus I was done on tuesday xD God, I'm gonna miss your crazy little reviews...and the story...and the fics...*bawls* this is so not good, hold me? OO please?
Date: 06/19/08 07:59 am Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
Hmm.. Tom's dad kidnapped Andreas? Is that it? If that's the case I hate him even more *gets bazooka out*
Omg *_* This chapter was pure hotness. Awesome!! My brain melted, I think. Man, if I could just snatch some of your skills...
Haha, Bill's convo with his mom in the beginning was so cute. I love conversations like that.
O_O 10 days without a comp?! Wow, good luck. I'd never survive that XD lol.
Author's Response: hihi I'm surprised Jorg hasn't died of fright yet, the way you keep thretaning him ,) thank you so much for this, hihi glad you liked the Simone part, she's fun to write! and I know, ten days, it's gonna be a living hell! hugs <3
Date: 06/19/08 05:45 am Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
OH MY GOD TOM'S DAD RAPED ANDREAS! :O
(have a nice holiday btw ^^)
Author's Response: hahaaa that was a conflicting review ,) thank you
Date: 06/19/08 05:09 am Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
See? I knew it! (again XD) It's Jorg the monster who raped Andreas, it has to be him! è_é
Please, can I kill that man? Before he lands his hands on Bill! If he does, he is dead! No one but Tom (and I *lol*) can touch Bill!!!
Well, after that... Again, I have to tell you how much I love this story!
I'll miss it... but it seems we'll be on holiday in the same days, so I hope to find the update when I come back from France! ^^
Ok, maybe this review makes no sense, sorry for the mistakes, it seems I'm not good at English today :P I'm worse than ever :-S
Oh, one last thing! I LOVED Bill and Tom in bed together! XD So cute, and so hot!
See you in 10 days, then! Have fun, and keep plotting! ^^
Author's Response: hihi you and your theories ,) and yes, you may kill the man! oooh france, nice. wish I could go to the parc des princes concert *pouts* hihi thank you so much for this, I'm gonna miss getting reviews for this story :'( but we'll be back soon ,) hugs <3
Date: 06/19/08 02:47 am Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
♥ There will be at least one new story by the time you get back. :)
While you are gone I will have to go and entertain myself with more of yours!
Author's Response: weeeeeeeee *happpy* xD (that was for you writing a new fic) this -> oO is for you reading more of mine...God I'm so nervous now because you see I only recently got a beta and my grammar mistakes in the other stories are HUGE, well at least some places...but I'm gonna go on holiday looking forward to finding a new fic of yours when I come home now ,)
Date: 06/19/08 02:42 am Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
Oh My Lucy!
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
TEN DAYS?
Are you crazy?
Can't you at least leave me a stash or something? Seriously!
I can't survive the long!
Well, I know I technical died and became a ghost a couple of chapters ago but... I will fade! I don't wanne be transparent when you get back... O_o
Author's Response: oh you poor creature! okay, this is how we will do it, I will go on holiday and as soon as I get home I will write over my notes (cus don't think I'm going without a note book) onto the comp and post straight away, you'll just have to haunt the rehab for a small amount of time girl, and remember, I'm gonna miss you! so don't you dare fade ,) *hugs* see ya in ten days <3