Date: 07/13/08 05:46 am Title: Chap. 2 : Really good friends
Loooooooooooooool ! Bill is sooo provocative xD I love that...
I wonder what exactly happenned to Andreas. I'm pretty sure it has something to do with the gloomy house
Author's Response: hihi it's so funny reading your reviews cus I know what's gonna hapen and your guesses are so close ,) and provocative Bill *drools* he is so hot <3
Date: 07/12/08 06:21 pm Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
OMG I simply love it ! I have to go to bed now (it's 00h21 in France) but I promise I'll come back soon so I can read the rest of it !
Author's Response: ooh, you're french ? sweet ,) so happy you like this, this story means a lot to me !!!
Date: 07/09/08 08:40 pm Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
Finally I have a working computer again! Good to be back again! And this is absolutely horrible! Not in the bad way ofcourse ;) It's heartbreaking and terrible, but at least it's over now!
Author's Response: who said it was over ? ,p God, I can't imagine how it would be to have a syfunctional computer ,p glad to see you back on though ! hugs
Date: 07/09/08 10:02 am Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
I don't know what to say really...It all happened to fast...
Well written, violent and sad. I like it a lot!
Thanks for not raping Bill :)
It's a thriller!
Hope you post next chapter soon...
Author's Response: nah, I couldn't rape Bill, that would just be...a little bit over the top don't you think ? anyways, thank you so much for this anders, I've really missed your reviews!
Date: 07/07/08 01:46 pm Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
oman, im kind of confused though. so the person that ran into the attick was technically Toms grandpa? idk
this story is great I love it!
cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: uhm no oO the person running into the attic was Andy, the other stuff at the end was just a flash back of what had happened in the attic when Jorg was young. next update coming soon
Date: 07/07/08 01:37 pm Title: Chap. 10 : Hold my hand ?
oooooooo oooooooo oooooo i bet its bill at the door! I just bet it is!
OOooo man cant wait for the next chapter. this story is freaking good as hell! love it!
keep it up!
Author's Response: hihi well girl, it would be sort of a bummer if it weren't right ,) thank you so much for this, you have no idea how much it means to me to hear you say that !!!
Date: 07/06/08 09:35 pm Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
Hey darling! I'm only just reading this now b/c I was away too. No safe internet access.
Anyway, is Jorg still alive? It sounded like he was. I'm so glad Andi came to the rescue in the end. Way to go Bill! For getting through to him I mean. There's no way he had enough courage to do that before. But, um, where'd he get the gun?
I bet Tom had a heart attack when he saw Bill, worse than you describe. Now that Bill knows is he going to act differently? Doesn't he need to let this out?
I'm glad we know what led to Jorg being the way he was, but, how did he ever get married? I mean, if he was such an awful guy how could someone love him enough to marry him? That was kinda mean wording, but... oh well.
Author's Response: HAHAAAAAAAAAAAAA *goes crazzzzy and throws you BIG party* you are officially my 300 reviewer YAY xD *gold medal for you* yeah, sorry bout that Queen ,) *head desk* you and your questions ,p they really help me though cus they let me figure out what kind of stuff I need to pay special attention to when summing up and explaining stuff! so all I can say is, they will be answered ! Got your mail btw, but if there's no internet access where I'm going (still not sure) then I might not mail you back in another ten days...guh. But for now, be a happy 300th reviewer ,) much love, your luce <3
Date: 07/06/08 05:10 pm Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
OH MY GOSH!!!
I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!
Author's Response: hihi *happy* thanks ,)
Date: 07/06/08 03:05 am Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
just, speechless. I wanna write something more as always, but I feel just speechless beside your amazing story. I'm happy that you're doing well with this, and that you loved my cookies *O*
Iloveyouuuuuuuuuu
*shy*
Author's Response: aw don't be shy sweety *hugs you tight* the thing about reviews is that they warm my heart by just being there! the fact that someone cares enough to actually spend a few seconds of their life to brighten mine is just so sweet! and I really, really love you for brightening mine! <3
Date: 07/06/08 01:14 am Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
O_O
this story is sickly good!
I loved it from the first letter, and your writing skills is off the charts ^^ *hugattack*
Author's Response: *hugs you back* holy shit, is blushing furiously now because of you, thank you so so so much, God I love you fot this !!!
Date: 07/05/08 11:03 pm Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
AHH! You're leaving again! *cries* Just when my mood was improving too! You know I actually wrote today! I haven't written anything since I wrote Some Things! And I took it down to work on it again because I read it after someone gave a rather critical review and I was like "This sucks" but I haven't really worked on it yet cuz I'm stalling. =o And now you're leaving again! x-x I don't know how I'm going to survive!
I knew it was going to be Bill. Everyone knew. XD Except one question comes to mind. How the hell did Andreas get a gun? XD Not that we're all not grateful or anything and it's only funny now, since I'm thinking about it. At the moment I was just like "THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!" Bill's ass was saved, literally. Thank you Andreas for saving Bill. He must have been really grateful for Bill's friendship then, to be able to overcome his fears to go and save him. *nods* Anyway I'm talking too much so... have fun on your trip. Write A LOT! Please! *begs* Writing is fun. =o *hugs* I'll miss you!
Much love!
Author's Response: I'm sorry, sorry, sorry :'( I don't wanna go away *pout* and it's not even on a trip, I'm going off to work for God knows how long (not longer than ten days though, they promised me that) girl, why didn't you tell me you got a review like that? I would have tried to lighten your mood! remember the time when I got that hate review? you and all the others got me through it and helped me keep up my writing, you can not (and this is me being strict) not let anyone pull you down girl, your writing is your own, don't let anyone take that away from you!!! haha the gun will be answered for in the upcoming chapters, I have a lot of explaining to do oO hahaaaa this cracked me up 'Bill's ass was saved, literally' so true ,p *hugs you and won't let go* I really don't wanna leave again! loves, yours luce
Date: 07/05/08 06:19 pm Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
i love u
and I swear I love you!!!!!!!
thanks for updating
Author's Response: aw, thanks ,) reviews really make my life worth while you know !
Date: 07/05/08 04:45 pm Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
Holy shit. I was not expecting that so fucking soon. Wow.
Damn. This fic is AMAZING. I cant wait to find out what happens next. ^------^
Author's Response: hihi well, I can write fast when I want to and figured since I'm going awai again it would be mean not to write as much as possible ,) thanksies
Date: 07/05/08 03:45 pm Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
ok a little confused about the end.. but i still like the story even though its sad and stuff. update soon please!!
Author's Response: the end was a flashback of Jorg's own childhood, just to get in some of the background information! thank you so much for this !!!
Date: 07/05/08 02:36 pm Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
great chapter
poor bill and tom and andreas...
im looking forward to reading some more :)
Author's Response: thanksies, hope you will like what's to come !
Date: 07/05/08 02:00 pm Title: Chap. 9 : The perfect son-in-law
i've been gone way too long already. Let me just say i love this chapter and hopefully, i'll have time to review the oters. Much love.
Author's Response: thank you so so much, you know how much this means to me ,)
Date: 07/05/08 11:24 am Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
Omg Andreas is the knight in shining armor???? God, I got scared for a moment, thinking that poor little Bill was gonna get raped D: Aaahhhhh this story is so freaky! It's keeping me on the edge of my seat Dx Update as soon as you can!
Author's Response: okay aslthough I seriously can not picture Andreas in a shining armor xD that is what he is yes ,) thank you so much, and I promise to update as soon as I have the time !
Date: 07/05/08 11:05 am Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
I'ts great!! Jorg desevered it and i hope Tom and Bill are somewhat ok!!
Have a good holiday though ;)
Author's Response: ugh *head desk* I don't wanna go away AGAIN :'( thanks though, really happy you liked it !
Date: 07/05/08 10:42 am Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
Hey girl
Here I am again :-p
OOOh, your going? Where are you gonne go on Monday? How long are you going? Well it is vacation for something isn’t it. :D so have lots of fun. Besides I’m gone myself next week only for 3days but I won’t be having my computer then :-/ But I’m still going to miss you then ;-)
“Bill stood outside the big, murky house. It would have never occurred to him that a house so gloomy could be the home to someone as lovable as his Tom, had he not witnessed it himself.”
When I read in the former chapter that someone was at the door I just thought that had to be Bill and I so hope I wasn’t write. I hold my breath almost the entire time, that was just so trilling… don’t know how I can describe it otherwise O_0 I was like the entire time OMG OMG OMG OMG :-p not really informative:-p
“Big, brown eyes stared back at him, scared as hell. They searched his very soul at that moment, finding everything they needed. Tom was whispering, a mantra Bill could not make out through the creaking of the stairs. ”Run…I love you…run!”
O_0 OMG he‘s trapped now. My heart was beating like crazy.
“”The blonde was easy. Too easy.” Jorg smiled another sick grin. Bill felt goosebumps appear all over. ”But you look like a fighter, much like my little Tom.”
O god, I knew where this was going and Tom can’t do anything against him. I was like noooooo please someone stop him!!!
“What he found was even better. Tom’s eyes, full of such love for him that it almost tore his chest apart. Tom’s whispered words of ’zone out, Billa, think of me’. Bill thought of Tom.”
This almost broke my heart.
“The blonde had never forgotten who his rapist was, he was just too afraid to tell. What had Jorg done to the boy to break him so?”
Yeah, I wonder to that man is just….. just the devil himself. He’s is just a crazy psycho person :-p
“Andreas had always been as pale as a ghost, but he had never looked more like a heaven-sent angel than he did right then. Standing there with the smoke of the fired gun curling slowly around his right arm and his eyes glued to the victim of his administrations lying on the floor.”
Andreas as a hero. I’m so relieved that he come. But I wonder how he know that he had to save them.
What happens now, Is Jorg dead or just wounded. I want to know, I want to know :-p
Gosh, I just read to chapters and I want an other one all ready, great job girl. Luv you for this ;-)
“He took his mother’s life, now his father took his”
I’m glad you putt this little piece in, it kind of explains why he become like this all though I don’t think it’s an excuse for what he did. But I get why he is who he is. Baby’s weren’t born evil. But he was in control over what he did, he let his dad take over his live. Tom never did.
I wonder how this will go on, so much :-p
Really girl I can’t seem to find more compliment to give you so I keep it with this :D
Ooh I just read your respond to my former review and I like to answer them to :-p
I so glad I make you happy ^^
Ooh thanks girl, you make my blush now ;-) And I think that your right about Tom and Bill. I think that that’s what really matter that people love you for who you are ;-) and I definitely respect them for being who they are ;-)
So I think that’s it :-p I have only one thing left to say and that is that you keep writing :-p
Ooh and I’m going to read the next chapter of Thicker than Water, just that you know:-p
*kisses and hugs*
-xXx-
Author's Response: nope, not going away for holiday this time, but to work on unknown time...not longer than ten days though, maybe shorter I'm not sure :'( oh sweety, I never meant to try and break your heart, just shake it up a bit. But th pieces of this that you have highlighted...God did I really write this? oO I'mso...mean! oh and I have to tell you yet again how imensely grateful I am that you let me follow you through the fic, it is just such a nice thing to do for an author! aw I just had to write Andreas as the hero in this, his appearance will be explained in the upcoming chapters, promise! I had to write the part of Jorg's former life, not to gain sympathy for him but as you said; understandment. One can understand that he would do this, but he still had a choise, he could have chosen not to and that is what makes us who we are, our choises! thank you so much for this kris, it always makes me so extreemly happy to see your reviews to my stories, you really make me smile you know! hope to see you soon again, much love, luce <3
Date: 07/05/08 10:25 am Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
omfg! =0
i actually screamed out my relief so loud when andi showed up, my sis came to ask what was up...:$
and my jaw just about hit the floor when the flash-back showed up... my heart filled with sypathy for someone i never thought i could ever feel sympathy for... jorg needs instand psychological help, not a shot to the head!
*sits down comfortably and waits for more* don't mind the fact that it might take a little bit longer for the next update to show, i'm just gonna wait here =) *sinks down in her chair, ready to wait however long it takes*
Author's Response: awww that is so cute (hope you didn't tell your sis though lol) and yes, he really does need help, somehow I think every monster like him has a dark past! now, you might have to wait for some time so *hands you cookies and soda and chocolate and popcorn and whatever else you might need* thanksies
