Date: 07/21/08 06:21 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
this was a great story! I really loved reading it:D you write so well!!
Author's Response: thank you so much, it really means the world to me to hear you say that !
Date: 07/21/08 05:01 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
Oh I'm so glad there's a new chapter ! That's great that Tom manadged to tell Bill about everything and that they went ahead ! Now they have to tell Bill's mother... and the police, if it's not already done...
Thanks !
Author's Response: hihi I can imagine that telling Bill's mother is going to be more than hard ,) but the story is done, so I'll leave that to your imagination. thank you so much for reviewing this ! hugs <3
Date: 07/20/08 05:46 pm Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
Loved this story, it was so enjoyable to read! I loved Bill's character in this and I'm glad everything went well in the end. very well written ^^
Author's Response: thank you so much ! I had a lot of fun developing the chaacters and I'm glad they made a difference for the better. very happy you liked it <3
Date: 07/20/08 03:04 pm Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
HUBBA HUBBA HUBBA HUBBA !! WOO WOOOOOOOOOOO!! *drool*
Author's Response: I seriously hope that's a good thing xD
Date: 07/20/08 09:09 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
Aww, I can't believe it has ended =(
Oh well, all good things must come to and end =DDD
Author's Response: they must :'( but I'm very happy you reviewed, thank you so much !
Date: 07/20/08 08:04 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
This is it Lucy, you re here and you re absolutely perfect!!
Thanks for that wonderful chapter, so intense, so intimate,so beautiful.
i enjoyed this journey more than anything else.
"i love you, you know that right"?
For your beautiful stories which make my Sundays better:)))
Author's Response: aw, christina <3 I love you too girl ! I am so endlessly happy that you liked this story, I really believe it's some of my best work so far. Thank you so much for being such a lojal reviewer, you fill my heart with joy <3 love, luce
Date: 07/20/08 08:04 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
Aww.. it's over. So soon. I've really loved this story all the time. You made me giggle, you scared me, you made me smile like a dork, you... you get it. It's been a wonderful story and it's definitely one of my favourite twincest stories ever.
The character development was awesome and the slow pace in which you gave us more and more information killed me sometimes xD
I hope you won't stop writing awesome things in the future, I can't wait to read them ^-^
Author's Response: oh my God OO *blushes...like really, really bad* thank you so, so, so much ! it means so much to me, you have no idea <3 God, this just made me oh so happy, you should see the look on my face right now *awestrucken* lucy loves you big time ,)
Date: 07/20/08 07:37 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
O: ITS OVER!
im sad...but glad at the same time.
I loved the ending!
Author's Response: thank you so much, I think that's the way one should feel about a fan fic don't you ,)
Date: 07/20/08 05:51 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
Great! Wonderful ending! Loved it!
Author's Response: thank you so much !
Date: 07/20/08 05:50 am Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww *heart melts*
thank u SOOO much§!! *hugs u until ur ribs start cracking*
this was SOO unbelievably sweet of uuuu!!!11
and i feel really spoiled now (A) but omg! i kinda hope jorg got some kindof peace though.. peace from the fact that he himself was abused.. but yeah, he got what he deserved >_<
thnx SOOO much again (A)
Author's Response: hihi, well I have to take good care of my fatheful reviewers now don't I ,)
Date: 07/20/08 05:32 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
What a nice end :D it makes me smile. You have written a good story! ^^
Author's Response: oh my, thank you so much <3
Date: 07/20/08 05:08 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
Oh my God, this story is one of the best ive ever read.
Just perfect, sweet and lovely!
Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you, it means so much to me ! <3
Date: 07/20/08 12:09 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
It's done? Awww man! I feel like you were just telling me about this new story you were working on that was gonna be better than anything you'd ever written and now here I am reading the last chapter.
Well first of all, let me say it definately is the BEST story you've ever written (I'm including the one shots in my thinking). I was a bit skeptacle b/c I loved Body Language and My Little Brother but this one really took the cake. It was super original (not the abuse idea so much as your twist, I loved it). It was also wonderfully funny! The chapter where Bill is pretending to tell Andi's future was absolutely brilliant! And it was sweet and romantic too, for obvious reasons.
This chapter was a good ending too. Does Jorg regret what he did? That peice at the end of the previous chapter about him being abused explained his actions but he didn't learn much from it, other than how to become the exact same way. You explained Tom's mother's view of Jorg well enough, though I would have liked to know what she saw cause right now, regardless of what happened to him I don't feel any sympathy. Thanks for not killing him btw. I like it much better when the bad guys have to go to prision and suffer instead of getting out of it by dying.
Poor Andi. I'm glad they didn't get pushed for questions the day the the incident, thoug hin real life I doubt the police would be that nice. Can Andi finally begin to heal now that Jorg is in prison? It seems that he's on the right path friend-wise but he's still go a ways to go.
As does Tom actually. I'm worried about Tom. As long as Bill's there he's ok. And Bill will probably always be there, but he has to heal enough to be independent too. What if Bill were to die? Would he become like his dad was? Honestly I doubt it b/c of the way he was in school with his friends who loved him and his generally strong personality. However people who are broken like that take a long time to heal. Sometimes they never do. Bill's the band aid but still... I just hope Tom will recover in the end (might I suggest a shrink?).
Bill on the other hand seem's ok. I know comparitivly nothing happened to him, but he didn't see very traumatized by Jorg trying to rape him. Did he just push his feelings to the side b/c of Tom and Andi or is he just really resiliant? He's just really resiliant isn't he?
Did they tell Bill's mom? What about Andi's parents? I'd assume so. How'd they react.
The end of the story didn't exactly fix everything but it ended on a hopefull note, making it sound like if all went well everyone would be ok. I liked that.
Looking forward to whatever your brilliant mind comes up w/ next. Any chance of hearing from you soon? Or is the third trip too soon?
Good job, as always, darlin!
Author's Response: okay, when I said 'please ask questions if there's anything you wonder about' I was actually aiming for you, knowing that you would have at least a hundred of them ,) so here goes: I needed Jorg to go to jail, because just as you I find that death is the easy way out! if he regreted it or not really wont matter as he will be in jail for a good amount of years (in my mind he dies there) and Tom will never forgive him, that's very important. He might see the paralells when he have nightmares of how his father treated him and understand that he caused the same pain to his own son, but it really won't matter cus no one's there to hear him say that he's sorry anyway (and yes, I am cruel and cold) As for Andy, I think he was on good way healing after Bill gave him a shot and became his friend, this whole thing might put him back a bit and he's going to a shrink for the whole shooting incident, but all in all it will take a lot of time, but somehow he'll make it through and live happily ever after, if not a little more shy and withdrawn than most people. Bill sort of took a second right after the incident when he was in Tom's arms to come to terms with the fact that in many ways he had been raped, then he calmly pushed it away and laid it in the past before moving on to more important things like healing Tom. Because Tom can't do it alone as you say, not just yet. I think that in time he will go back to being the same old same old he used to be and with Bill by his side (because you can't seriously believe I'd kill off Bill ,p) he'll be alright. As for the shrink, most definatly, but somehow I think that after so many years of dealing with this and now having Bill to support him, a third part would be rather useless. Bill told his mother everything, and being Simone of course she understood and took it quite calmly after she had cursed Jorg beyond oblivion. Andreas' parents found out about who the rapist was and went to the triel to stare daggers at Jorg. you will hopefully hear from me today, cus I'm going on monday I think. thank you so much Queen, see you soon <3
Date: 07/19/08 11:59 pm Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
That was...AMAZING! Loved every word of it. I love your writing, you know? I seriously loved this story and that end scene will give me nice dreams tonight. *sigh* I love happy endings. GREAT JOB! =D
Author's Response: aw, thank you so much. It really does mean the world to me to hear you say that! hugs, luce <3
Date: 07/19/08 10:34 pm Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
LUCY! This was an AMAZING ending, though when i came on here, saw it was updated and that it was finished..i almost cried DD;
I don't want this to be over. It was sooo good, that i can't belive i'm never gonna see it in the "recently updated" stories anymore.
Tom. Tom just killed me in this chapter, his submissive, lost, and scared persona just blew me away. When he asked Bill to save him..UGH! *dies* It was so fitting.
And then when he finally let go, becoming brave and dominant...Ahhhh, *melts*
Of course, Bill just being their for both boys was like awww "der geht meine hertz auf, ahh" ;D
I was peeing when he was like "OF COURSE IM FUCKING READY!" cuz thats what i would be like ;) LOL i mean who wouldn't be? ahahaha.
I can't believe your leaving again. I'm soo sad D=
BUT! I'll survive. =D
I hope you have awesome times where ever you keep going. =P
Can't wait for more amazing stuff from you!
Hope your awesome, and hope your summer's going well =)
Sincerely Yours,
Andi
Author's Response: Andi *squeals* how are you? God, right now I am so sick of traveling all over the place and now I'm going up into the mountains into some godforsaken forest to stay there whoever knows how long :'( it's killin me. oh my God, I'm so so so happy that you liked the whole 'rescue me' thing cus I really hoped that would fit in! and Bill ,) dirty, supportive, wicked, sweet (very wierd combination) Bill, I love writng him like this! God, I'm gonna miss this so much *head desk* soon I'll be home again though. so, much much love, yours truly, luce <3
Date: 07/19/08 08:39 pm Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
*le gasp* an update! And it's complete, too! That story was quite intresting. The characters were...pretty uniquely developed. I would've expected Tom to be broken and un-open to love, so it was interesting to see that he was quite open to loving Bill :p I like the way the story ended though; I feel like you ended it not too soon, but not too slowly, in just the right place :) Thanks for a great fic! Now I'll be looking forward to an update from your Bill-being-a-lapdancer story ;)
Author's Response: that is so nice to hear, because I was sort of nervous about the ending and people not liking it, seems I worried for no reason at all ,) I think Tom (in my story) is the kind of person who seperates stuff, he will never think of making love with Bill being in the same cathogory of getting raped by his dad. And his father never loved him the way he loves Bill so there is no common link, if you get what I'm saying. thank you so much for this, love <3
Date: 07/19/08 07:00 pm Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
omggggg!!!!!
i don't want it to end *lower lip trembels* any chance u might write a little something that's like.. just to tell me a bit about the whole legal side of things? or like.. just a coart-case of every1 explaining their bit?
prdy plz? (A)
this fic was absolutely AWSOME!!!!! really! it WAS! *huggles u* u deserve smg nice for this *thinks hard* erhm... i don't really have a lot right now =S but i have chips =D would u like some chips? (A) *hands u the bowl*
ps. please considder what i said? (A)
Author's Response: fic scene for Tokio4life : all rise everybody rises as the judge takes his seat. Andreas' family, Simone and Bill, Tom, Andreas and their defenders (or whatever), Jorg and his defender, the judge and the jury are all present. Mr. Jorg you are hereby accused of long term abuse of your own son, Tom, violence, sexual and mental abuse. You are accused of kidnapping a boy, Andreas and abusing him sexually. You are also accused of sexually abusing another boy, Bill. the case is lain before the judge, times of events and evidence put up before him and the jury. What is the jury's desition? the courtroom grows quiet. Guilty of all charges the judge looks at Jorg, his eyes showing the utmost hatred to such a cruel man prison...lifetime and then Jorg dies lonely in jail some twenty years after. ,D
Date: 07/19/08 06:40 pm Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
I Loved It! It Was Very Well Written!! Thank You For Writing It!!.....xxxx
Author's Response: thank you for reding ,) and reviewing, it means the world to me !
Date: 07/19/08 06:35 pm Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
Aw, i loved the ending.
It was so beautiful. (:
Author's Response: thank you so much <3 means a lot to me !
Date: 07/19/08 06:17 pm Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
Aw thank you for this lovely story ♥ I really adored the twins (who aren't twins lol) in this.
I'm sad that it's over, but I'm glad they got a happy ending. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I still feel very honored you read my story, and reviews always brighten my day ,)