Date: 07/30/08 08:27 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
How is it possible that I forgot to write my review to the last chapter? Fortunately I´ve found out when I read it again :D
I´m happy for Tom that after such cruel and sad years spent in his father´s house he finally has a person who loves him so much and will help him to fix his entire life. THank you that you gave him the chance to live better life (because I´m sure his life´ll be better now).
Great story, I liked it so much. You delineated the passion and love between them so real that I sometimes forgot to breathe ;-)
Author's Response: oh my God, darling that is so extreemly sweet of you! thank you so much <3 I'm a sucker for good endings and yes, Tom's life will be much better now that he's without his dad and has Bill ,) lots of love <3 luce
Date: 07/26/08 07:18 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
You're amazing.
"Bill..."
"Yes?"
"...Will you save me?"
Makes me wanna do fanart again xD
Anyway, this has been one amazing journey. And this chapter was the perfect ending, I swear. I love it so much. This is simply one of my favorite fics ever. Beautiful.
Author's Response: ooh, you're an artist ? that's so cool, me too ,) have you done any TH fanart in the past? okay, sorry for da rambling ,p thank you so much for this ! actually I was hesitating a bit to put the 'will you save me' thing there, but somehow I felt it fit <3 loveya
Date: 07/26/08 07:09 am Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
Oh. My. God.
Did you have to go and break my heart? *whimpers* And still I love this. Amazing stuff.
Author's Response: oh noes *pieces heart back together* sorry honey *pets heart*
Date: 07/26/08 07:07 am Title: Chap. 10 : Hold my hand ?
I'M BACK!!!! Thank god for your story. I've missed it like crazy. And it's already fucking with my head!! So it was Jorg who raped Andi? Makes sense. Gah, gotta read the other chapters. Love this.
Author's Response: BECCA <3 you're here ,) missed you girl ! oh I'm so happy you're back again, and liking my story. yup, Jorg is the rapist, fucking bastard he is, hope you'll like the rest of this ! love
Date: 07/25/08 10:57 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
Beautiful end!, I love you.
I want more fics from you *hugs*
Author's Response: thank you so much, there will be more really soon !
Date: 07/25/08 07:41 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
oh sorry, I'va just noticed that that was the last one... Oh no !!! I loved this story !! I wasn't prepared for it to end so soon... I'm kinda disappointed now... in a good way, though, since it means I wanted more ! Thank you
Author's Response: naww, it's a cruel world huh? ,) but I'm really glad you liked this and I'm really grateful to have you as a lojal reviewer to this story, it's been a fun journey ! love, luce <3
Date: 07/25/08 07:39 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
The story's done?? You mean that was the last chapter???
Author's Response: sadly yes, but I think it was time ,)
Date: 07/24/08 01:39 pm Title: Chap. 1 : House sweet home
This, the last chapter, was just...edible, mmmm.... :D
Very tasty indeed!!!
Trauma, is not easy thing to write about correct, but I think you have managed it quite al right! Especially Andreas', his effort to try and forget every thing that happened to him that horrible week!
And I sooo can relate to Tom's breakdown... You CAN be that broken... :(
So I still wish I could get my hands on Jorg...bloody bastard... even though I think he is some kind of victim himself... But, being traumatised as a child, does not allow him to do it to other children, or other people at all, when he grew older. It does not forgive what he did... You always have a choice NOT to hurt others...
I know, I know, he is just a character in a short story, but it still gets my blood boiling....
The talk between the boys were a very nice thing to read about, but, when Bill curled even deeper in to his boyfriend's arms, I thought he was leaving Andreas out in the cold (so to speak), but... To my satisfaction he reach out his hand to him... I forgot Andreas weren't comfortable with anything more...
And of course the sex was nice...
Most people probably think down the line of:
AAAAARRRRGGGHHH You left us there!!!! AAAARRRRRGGGHHHH
But I think it was perfect!!! After a such traumatic story, the sex should NOT be very graphic and intrusive to the characters.... Well done!
This whole story has been a pleasure to read, full of love, friendship, teenage horniness, angst, humour and sweet, sweet romance... and maybe a wee bit of sex...
A huge THANK YOU!!!!! :D
It is becoming more and more difficult to grade your story's, so I will stop doing that, but it is one of the better ones.... How ever, it does not beat "Stars in space" !
But it deserves a long review, and in that i have failed you... Sorry! :(
Once again: Thank you!
Anders
Tom turned out gay after all.... YAY!!!
Author's Response: *head desk* 'Tom turned out gay after all' ,p that is so...you xD anyways, you worrying that this review isn't long IT*S LONG OKAY AND I APPREACIATE IT SO, SO, SO MUCH !!! <3 I really wanted the trauma and emotions to be expressed in a more 'quiet' kind of way, like 'silent tears' or whatever. so happy that worked out nicely because I was a little scared I'd get something wrong and write it a little too...sugar coated! *hands over Jorg' now, you must exuce the extencive burn marks and the wounds all over the place, oh and sorry for breaking all of his fingers, I just couldn't leave him at peace, sorry, but he's all your now though, have fun ,) aww, so glad you liked the part of Bill holding Andreas' hand, I think in those kind of cases it must me hard not only being Andreas, but also being Andreas' friend and not being able to offer any more support as it would only hurt the boy :'( hihi and what a nnice summary of the story's plot ,) God, I'm still squealing my tail off that you liked Stars in Space, that story means SO much to me ! seriously, thank you so so much ! much love, luce
Date: 07/24/08 01:15 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
awesome.seriously.but incredibaly hard to read and type a review on San iPod.anyway great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!;)
Author's Response: I have no idea what that is oO but I'm really happy you reviewed none the less ,) thank you so much !
Date: 07/23/08 12:12 pm Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
I'm so glad that you're back and care so much for your story and for your reviewers that you even ANSWER to our questions ! Thank you !!
Author's Response: haha, well there's only one way to keep you as my reviewers and that's treating you nice ,) so, as long as you keep leaving me these wonderful reviewers I will keep having the pleasure of answering them ,) loves <3
Date: 07/23/08 09:22 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
What?! *stares at computer* This was the... last?? *falls to the floor crying* Nooo! :( But it was the perfect ending, it couldn't have ended better. It's been an amazing story, you should be extremely proud of this one.
Author's Response: I am ! *pets story* it's my little baby <3 thank you so much for this girl, you know how much it means to me ,) and yes, the last and final chapter, but I felt it was time and I'm so happy that the ending worked for you *hugs you till you squeak* thanksies <3
Date: 07/23/08 09:02 am Title: Chap. 11 : Break, Broke, Broken
Omg, Andreas I love you! I could imagine that scene so clearly... He really did look like an angel there *nods*
xD lol.
Oh, and the ending reminded me of Lost. Haha, I'm such a Lost-nerd xD
Author's Response: the knight in shining armour ,) I really wanted him to be like that, but still have this 'mad man' thing about him, that's why he shot Jorg and not only threatened him or something ,p thanksies oO never watched lost so I'm gonna take that as a compliment ,)
Date: 07/23/08 08:50 am Title: Chap. 10 : Hold my hand ?
Now I'm reading what I missed during my vecation and I can't believe I missed this. Omg, this is too exciting!! O_O
*runs to the next chapter the fastest she can*
Author's Response: hihi, so happy you're back girl ! and I really hope you'll like the next part, hihi have a nice vacation ? I know mine has only been messing with my writing ,p
Date: 07/22/08 07:44 pm Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
Aw, man, it killed my review. I went to check if you responded, and i was like, wait...where's my review? T^T
Gawd.
Well. I did have some questions about Andreas, i was wondering what happened to him, if he was still friends with Tom and Bill, and if he's "better" now. Also, is Tom's dad in jail for sure? I think i missed it...
Also i really adore Bill in this, he's so great for Tom. This was a GREAT fic, and i cant wait for the next from you. ^^
Author's Response: it does that sometimes *glares at site* anyways, Andreas staid friends with them and I think life got easier for him now that his rapist was sent to jail, I think I wrote a court room scene in a review here somewhere, cus someone wanted to see Jorg burn ,) anywas, he got lifetime or something, or at least so many years that he won't live to see the daylight again. I don't know how they treat child rapists in jails, but I'm picturing him sharing a cell with someone called Bret, or Duke or something, someone scary ,p thank you so much for this, so happy you liked the story ! loves <3
Date: 07/21/08 05:15 pm Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
AMAZING ENDING!!!
:)
Author's Response: thank you ,)
Date: 07/21/08 04:47 pm Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
jdhflgjkhdgf
amazing.
epic.
loved it.
Author's Response: hihi thanksies ! ,p
Date: 07/21/08 03:42 pm Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
Ahhghdkfh!! so fucking hot!!
Goooooddddddddddd......
Author's Response: naww ,) thanks !
Date: 07/21/08 02:33 pm Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
firelucy, you master artist you! Sorry I couldn't review the very DAY you updated but I was away, camping. x-x My sanity relied on the thought that when I got back hopefully this chapter would be waiting for me. =D And it was! .> So I better go.
It was a fun ride! =]
Much Love!
Author's Response: aw, summers, havn't seen you in a while...most likely because I've been away for so much *grumbles* anyways, thank you so much for this, you know how much it means to me ,) lol 'camping' what, like in a tent and such ? xD
Date: 07/21/08 10:11 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
Hey girl!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
It's over *cries* I was so sad when I saw the completed *cries harder*
But than when I read the chapter I just thought it was a perfect ending ;-) It warmed my heart that it was an happy ending and everyone got a second chance. That Andreas can start healing and Tom can start leaving without the fear to go home everyday.
I would have liked a bit more inside in Jorgs mind but then I thought that it wouldn't help a bit I would still despise him, It doesn't matter what he's been threw your responsible for your own actions ;-) I think I already said something like that ;-) I so hope he rots in jail :-p Glad he isn't dead thought that would be to easy, I hope he gets tortured in jail (A)
If you don't mind I'm going to quote a bit to ;-)
"Bill had pleaded with her with his eyes not to, and being a good mother, she had agreed on waiting until the morning. "
I so adore that woman really ;-)
"Andreas never told them, never spoke to anyone outside the witness box about what had happened in Tom’s attic that week in the summer. Bill didn’t wanna know, though. Tom knew too well."
I really feel for him though. But know he can move on. But I bet he needs some help to overcome everything.
“Bill…”
“Yes?”
“…Will you save me?”
OOOOh, that was just heartbreaking, poor Tom. He needs to deal with so much, he's been abused for his whole life but with Bill by his side I'm sure he will make it. He's strong, he must be because he survived all those years!
“Tomi.” Bill leaned down, rubbing his nose against Tom’s cheek and kissing along his jawbone, oh, so softly. “I’ll always be ready for you, I always have been. Nothing can change that!”
hihi, loved this! I'm glad that Bill seems to be okay but I guess it's just is because he's with Tom ;-)
"And the universe paused. In what seemed like centuries upon centuries as well as it seemed like mere seconds, the world just halted."
I just love this sentence. It just said it all XD
“This is it Tomi, we’re here.” Bill cracked a smile through his panting"
Jeah, they certainly are ;-)
"Bill’s lips met Tom’s ear at the same time as his ass kissed Tom’s hips. “I love you, too!”
What a sweet ending indeed. *sigh*
Girl you already know how much I loved this story so I'm going to say it again ;-)
I just love you for writing this you know ;-) And I'm going to miss it but I hope that you are going to write an other story pretty soon *puppy eyes*
Oooh and I read Hekki so all my questions are answered with that, hihi!
ps: I read one of your story in dutch (FanFictionFantasies) :-p I thought at first she stole it but she said she had your permission. Well luckily, I wouldn't have liked that ;-p But I must say I liked they original better (A)
But I got that with everything ;-)
Well I guess this was it that ;-) How was work by the way. I have to work tomorrow to :-/ fun :-p
You know I really loved your Author's Responses ;-)
Can you be sad and happy at the same time because that's what I feel at the moment ;-)
*sigh again* I guess this is goodbye for now ;-) Hope to hear from you soon!
*a pile of hugs send your way* ;-)
XXX
Author's Response: just...I'm gonna mail you about something okay oO anyways, to the review xD I LOVE YOU !!! God it's so great reading your reviews they ALWAYS make me smile so bad ,) I thought about putting more of Jorg's mind in here, but I think I'm gonna leave that for another fic, maybe I'll write something like this sometime. It's just...I don't know, hard getting into the head of someone who isn't quite...sane. so I gave that one little flash back as a way of, not sympathizing with him, but getting some reason as to why he choose to punish Tom the way he did. But then again, I didn't want it to come out as an exuse for his actions, he choose to be bad and not good and that's reason enought to send him in jail for life ! aww and sappy scenes ,) I was really nervous about the whole 'save me' thing, but I'm so glad it turned out okay ! that was an important point to the chapter. okay, so you pretty much got me blushing really badly for something I had written in the first place...which is totally whacked by the way oO 'Bill’s lips met Tom’s ear at the same time as his ass kissed Tom’s hips. “I love you, too!”rnWhat a sweet ending indeed. *sigh*' oh my God, the way you said that was a 'sweet' ending...only a fangrirl can say that to a situation like that xD I'll have a new story up and running by the end of today I think (hope) and I hope you'll like it as much as this one ! haha and work...not fun ,) *hugs the pile of hugs and sends one back to you as well* check your e-mail then ? much love, yours lucern
Date: 07/21/08 07:34 am Title: Chap. 12 : Finally, we’re here
I'm sad to see it ending, but at least it was a good one :) Hope you're having a good summer and more goodness on the way ;)
Author's Response: aw, thank you so much ,) really happy you liked this one and that you're having a better summer than I am xD