Date: 05/31/12 11:03 pm Title: Hungry for a ride!
Wow. This was... REALLY hot. Well done, Di-san.
Date: 08/30/08 12:49 am Title: Hungry for a ride!
That was like uber sex. The whole story was practically sex.
I luurved it.
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it! :] Thanks for reading and reviewing! I lurve it! :]rnXD
Date: 08/17/08 10:28 am Title: Hungry for a ride!
wtf?
omg
bill on top?
i didn't expect that bill/tom would be so fucking hot..
OMG thanks again for this so fucking hot lemon fic
^_^
Author's Response: Yuppyty yup! I know, right? Thank you and thanks for reviewing. (: See what a change can do? ;)
Date: 06/03/08 07:39 am Title: Hungry for a ride!
0_o I just niticed I still didn't Leave a response to your Smoking Hot story!
You know I fell a sleep right after eh:P
Man YOu kept teasing me while you were writing it and it's was great!
*pokes twins to go to the Mac more often*
(you think poking will work?)
Anyway I loved it! And that sentence,...
“That I can fuck your mind senseless just by using mine.”
Ja! was great! *smiley that licks lips;)*
Talk to you soon Pda Sis!
Tschüss!
Author's Response: Haha! Well, I dunno if poking them will work, but they just need to go somewhere by car! Not specifically at McDs!! XD Come on, Tomi, just get your bro in the car and...well...you know! XD Thankies Bets for the review!! ^_^
Date: 05/31/08 11:51 am Title: Hungry for a ride!
it was so so so so HOT
loved it
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for your review! ^_^
Date: 05/30/08 05:04 pm Title: Hungry for a ride!
hotyyyyyyy!!
Just go on babe.
you have talent!!
Author's Response: Awww! Thankies!!! ^_^
Date: 05/30/08 01:06 pm Title: Hungry for a ride!
Oh, and damn, I forgot to say smth to this:
"Bill stood still for a moment and then
he lay his upper body on Tom’s. He moved
some stray locks and placed his face in
Tom’s neck, wrapped his hands around his
chest and he was breathing in Tom’s neck.
“I know...” Tom breathed."
SO DO I! *sighs*
Author's Response: And oh yeah! We so do! *sighs, too*
Date: 05/30/08 12:59 pm Title: Hungry for a ride!
My sweet Love,
You kicked us into the serious state of wanting to start the 'clearing', 'Zenning up' and tantric session!!
Must become a kinda marathon now, because the effects
you presented me/us with, are just practically 'forcing' me
to experience the mind-level sex again, and teach them, too, how
to use it better!! *looks around and finds such greatly enthusiastic
eyes looking back expectantly* *licks lips and counts to 10,
helping herself not to pounce*
Not to mention, you made me want to sit down and write everything
we did/are doing/will do with the help of some tantric yum!!!!
DANKE SEHR SCHÖÖÖÖN, Baby! LOVEDDDD IT!!!!
And NO SORRIES, bitte! *gives a somewhat 'angry' look*
Your loving Wifey, Ada
Ps.: Good title!! *Nena-claps, Jumbi-jumps, chair-dances*
Ps.2: "That rule doesn't exist, luckily! *winks*"
Author's Response: Wheeeeheee, Babes! Well, I was actually thinking of you when I wrote the 2nd scene! You know what I'm talking about! Working for the B-cake's wishes, too! So, I guess, that my intentions were totally understood!! Time to get on with it, isn't it!!? Plus, you so have to write about these! *curious to death* And don't give me 'angry' looks! HUFF!! Anyway, yeah, the title is good cuz YOUR great mind came up with it!! So, another big THANKS for that!!! As for the rule, well.... It's fiction!! *winks* Love ya, loads!!! *smooches* b29;b29;b29;b29;b29;b29;b29;b29;b29;b29;b29;
Date: 05/30/08 08:10 am Title: Hungry for a ride!
Both of them topping is just beyond sexy. Had my brain working double-time. It almost exploded. MMMmmmm MY GAWD!! For your first sex story this was amazing. You had me convinced you've been doing this for a loong time. GREAT JOB!! *takes hankie* thanks, I needed that.
Author's Response: Imagine me when I was writing it!! I needed air every 5secs! XD But awwww thanks for the compliment! I have been doing that in my mind for a long time, but not turning it into a story! LOL! Thanks again!!!! *blushes* ^_^
Date: 05/30/08 07:14 am Title: Hungry for a ride!
Lol, hear, hear! *-*
Author's Response: hehe ^_^
Date: 05/29/08 11:17 pm Title: Hungry for a ride!
OHHHH DEAR GOD!!!! Omg yes!!!! Bill on top!!! Sooooooooo sexy!! And just when I thought it couldn't get much better than this - TOM ON TOP!! Wooo gawd!! I'm shaking now. Soooo sexy!! *drool*
Author's Response: Wheeee!! You're so enthusiastic!!! Yeah, I wanted my first sex story to have both of them topping!! ^_^ Really glad you liked it and thanks for your review!! *offers hankie to wipe drool* ;)
Date: 05/29/08 10:56 pm Title: Hungry for a ride!
Wow! That was amazing..two fucks in one! lol
I wanted that to go on forever..it was so well written. The emotion just went all through me. Defenitly a keeper *adds to favourites*
Hoping there are more of these to come =)
Danke,
Andi
Author's Response: Awwww!!! Thank you so much!!! *squeezes* Well, in my mind it just goes on and on! XD But I already have some ideas for more!! Thanks again for the review! ^_^
Date: 05/29/08 09:27 pm Title: Hungry for a ride!
O.O
Author's Response: I told you we'd get along well, didn't I!? ^_^
Date: 05/29/08 07:27 pm Title: Hungry for a ride!
uuuuuuhhhhhhhhh!!!
HFS!!!
car sex is hot, and believe when I say that when it involves these guys, Hell burn me if I lie, IT'S FUCKIN' HOT!!!
Luv it :D
Author's Response: Haha!! I agree with you, totally!! Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it! I wanted the story to have both of them topping, so that none has any complain!! XD Thanks for reviewing!! ^_^
Date: 05/29/08 06:49 pm Title: Hungry for a ride!
Meow!!! Hot hot hot! *needs a fan*
Dayum, I'll never drive in my car again without thinking of this :P
And I'm proud that this amazing story was my first official beta-read. :D
Author's Response: Awwwwwww!!! Thanks! We did a great job, eh!? Thanks for reviewing and betaing at the last moment!!! ^_^ Just be careful the combo of McD's+car!! XD *gives a fan and takes one for herself, too* Thanks again!! ^_^