Date: 07/30/08 02:08 am Title: Chapter 1
XD
for me, i think Bill in the end of this chap kind of cute...
update soon plz *kiss u a thousand times :* *
Author's Response: Hehe, will try to do so, aye.
Date: 07/29/08 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
That's a really sweet note. I can hear the desperation in it which I really like. Tom wants Bill back. Bad. I wish there was a way he could prove it to him.
Author's Response: Maybe there is, he just haven't figured it out yet? ;P
Date: 07/29/08 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 8
Aaah, I knew he wouldn't do it :) He should stop being such an ass, though! I understand his hesitance, but he could at least TRY to trust him a bit more. Plus, if Gordon ever found out he hurt Bill, Tom is as good as dead anyway XD He'll come around soon though, I hope? Great story, and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks :) (Oh, I feel bad just answering that to a long review, but I got no idea what to say xD)
Date: 07/29/08 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh my god! first, yay for bill not having the abortion and two, yay for tom feeling like he should! when is the next update?
Author's Response: next update comes when I write it :) Simply.
Date: 07/29/08 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 8
Maybe it's just me, but you're killing me with that cliffhanger!!! Oh gosh!! XDD I SO want to know, how it's going to continue!
The story is great so far, but I feel very sorry for Tom, even though he was an asshole at the beginning! I hope they'll have a happy end!
Continue soon! *puts story in her favs*
Rikku
Author's Response: Oh! Gratz and thanks for being the 200th reviewer!
Date: 07/29/08 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
Poor Tom!! He should be like very fucking mad with Bill when he discover that Bill didn't have the abortion!! Anyways...thanks for the update!! And don't worry girl, we, your fans,(or at least me) will wait 'til the end of time or another life if it's possible :D
Now I gotta go because I need to cook lunch and my sister is starving!! XD
Kisses and Huggles :D
Author's Response: WOAH! That is good to hear! And good luck on making food :P
Date: 07/29/08 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 8
That's not cool Bill:(
MEEN BILL!!!!!
Please give Tom another chanse:')
Next chapter soon I hope hun^-^
Author's Response: Next chapter will be soon, indeed :)
Author's Response: Next chapter will be soon, indeed :)
Date: 07/29/08 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
why does bill have to act like this?
its soo weird and mean...is this like
some kind of plan or something to
just make tom mad and piss him off?
*feels confused* lol
Author's Response: Bill is pissed at Tom... It's that simple... :/
Date: 07/29/08 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
I really want Bill to stop being such a jerk. >: (
Author's Response: Aw, so many people are.. :/
Date: 07/29/08 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
i think Bill should give Tom an chance...poor Tom :(
more please~~
Author's Response: Maybe he should ;P
Date: 07/29/08 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ugh, I seriously fucking hate Bill. >
Author's Response: Aw, don't do that :(
Date: 07/29/08 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
poor tom! he desevres some pain actually but i fell sorry for him anyway((
thanks for updating so soon)))
Author's Response: Aye :) And thanks for reading :)
Date: 07/29/08 11:54 am Title: Chapter 4
you used billabong!!!!! thats so what i wouold call bill XD XD,
Author's Response: It is my nickname for him :)
Date: 07/29/08 11:40 am Title: Chapter 8
humdidehumph... i suppose tom's gonna have to push a little farther to repair that relationship, eh? Drama, drama... ah, well, it's true to life, at least. :)
"Just fixing a little mistake I made" ... O_O gsdfj, i'm sure this girl probably won't be popping back up in the story again, but jeez.. surrrrrre, a living creature growing inside of you is a "little mistake" *rolls eyes* ...
anyways, despite the shortness you still made me dance with the quick update, i love you for that. :D great chapter, thanks for having Bill come to his senses. That whole "But I can't" bit made me smile.
Author's Response: Aye, he is going to have to do that. And that girl was a ghost-character, one to just make Bill decide, so no :) Hehe, the shortness was from someone nagging. I just can't take that.. :/
Date: 07/29/08 11:24 am Title: Chapter 8
Aw! Tom is trying to be nice but Bill wont let him! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: It takes a lot to get over that thing, yeno.. :/
Date: 07/29/08 10:27 am Title: Chapter 8
Well, he didn't have an abortion, that's good. Now he just need to get over himself and start talking to Tom. Bill, be nice! Try to give him a chance, you know you love him = )
Author's Response: Haha :P Well-o, well-o ;P
Date: 07/29/08 09:52 am Title: Chapter 7
Well, ok, someone has to stop Bill before he does something he regrets. It's not the baby's fault that Tom acts first and think later. I feel so bad for the boys = (
Also, the fact that Tom called the baby a "little thingy" is to cute for words *melts*
Author's Response: Ayeaye :O
Date: 07/29/08 09:33 am Title: Chapter 8
Yes babe !
thanks for the explanation :))
Author's Response: Oh, no problem :)
Date: 07/29/08 09:30 am Title: Chapter 6
Aww, that's really sweet = ) Poor Tom, he's so confused. I want to pet him or something... But I'm a bit worried, if Bill thinks he's dreaming, how will he react when he wakes up and Tom is there for real? Or wait, DOES Bill think he's dreaming? That's how I read it, but then again, I'm not very awake myself. Which is probably why this review suck so much = /
Author's Response: Ah, you'll see ;) Bill thinks he's dreaming, indeed :P Aw, review all OK :P
Date: 07/29/08 09:04 am Title: Chapter 8
Stupid Bill *scofs* Anyway, great chapter :D I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Thanks :)