Date: 08/05/08 01:37 am Title: Chapter 9
&$*$&@&#^!!!!
Oh boy... if only Tom knew...
DDD:
Author's Response: Hehe, aye ;)
Date: 08/05/08 01:37 am Title: Chapter 9
grrr
stupid marla
stupid bill
stupid tom
stupid teenagers that are unable to just yell everything everyone else needs to know outloud.
It was a great chapter BTW :
) I love your story loads, which im sure i say in every review.
I'm just slightly moody right now.
geehh! I want tom to know about the baby, bill to be happy and marla to be dead so bad! Perhaps you could make it happen if i were to give you a gigantic batch of cyber cupcakes? they have pink icing!! :P
:]
Author's Response: Haha! That could work! :P Thanks for your review! :D
Date: 08/04/08 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 9
wow!!!!
Author's Response: :o
Date: 08/04/08 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
I wanna kick Marla's ass, lol. Poor Tom, thinking the baby is dead. *sniffles* I hope things get better soon..
Author's Response: Haha :P Aw, I guess they will ;)
Date: 08/04/08 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 9
ahhh noooo tomi come back the babys still alive...ahuuu bill for gods sake tell him the true already!!!!
any way thanks for the update it was really good=DDD and i hope you update again..soon????=DDDD
Author's Response: Thanks! Will try to be quick :)
Date: 08/04/08 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 9
please update soon. this is brilliant
nd i just have to know what happens next...
gr8 job with this...i LUV it
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! :)
Date: 08/04/08 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 9
Awwww, don't leave us there!! You need to fix this thing!!!! Stop leaving us hanging on whether or not they're gonna fix it!!! Update ASAP, or I will threaten you with the torture of watching Tom fucking a girl! (would that be torture for you? I know it would be torture for me)
Author's Response: Hahaha!! xD I'd get to see Tom naked, so not torture :P But updates for this one should be quick.
Date: 08/04/08 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 9
aaaw !
it's so good!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/04/08 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
:O well, Tom'd only been right; Bill had pretty much asked for it. It may be cruel by me to say so, but he himself had pushed the poor boy away, and look how bad he made him suffer :( poor boy, being the puppy of the bitch... I bet he'd like to be happy with Bill. Oh please post soon! :D ...and can I ask for the pirates, too? *puppy eyes*
Author's Response: Aye, Bill and Tom have been pushing each other away when they just want to be together, ayeaye. And yes, you may ask for it, but I think there will be some time before the pirates sail on :/
Date: 08/04/08 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 9
Alva, girl
i am gonna kill you :))
Tomi do you hear me , the baby is alive.
oh god he doesnt hear me...
tell him alva and i ll give you many many cookies.
great chp honey, like always:))
Author's Response: OH NOES! XD Thanks :P
Date: 08/04/08 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
This was great!
I can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 08/04/08 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh my gosh! You have to update soon. Please?????? That was a mean cliff hanger.
Author's Response: Heh, will try :)
Date: 08/04/08 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
beautiful story... i nearly cried(((
Author's Response: Oh, kiitos :)
Date: 08/04/08 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh my dear!!! i dont know what to say...update soon!!!
Author's Response: Haha, will try :)
Date: 08/04/08 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 9
nooooo!!!! whyu did it have to stop there????? please update soon!!!!!
gosh marla is such an unworthy piece of shit >;C damn treating bill's man like that
Author's Response: Haha, sorry xP
Date: 08/04/08 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 9
This is so sad. I want them to make up :-(
Author's Response: :/
Date: 08/04/08 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
that skool is cold seriosuly lolz i loved it please update soon
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 08/04/08 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
O_O this is the first mpreg story I've read, and I can say one thing, you've converted me :O
I need more! oh my god, this was so good! I think my heart stopped a few places back here! *_*
Author's Response: Haha! Well, that was nice of you to say! :D Thank you so much!
Date: 08/04/08 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh. Tom needs to get his ass kicked hard. How dare he get Bill pregnant and then act like a jack ass! not even trying to change to show Bill that he can be a good father.
Thanks for the update. I hope Tom realizes Bill didn't give up the baby and dump that SLUT he's with.
Author's Response: Haha! I love how people turn on Tom now xD Thanks for your review.
Date: 08/04/08 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 9
Ohhh, CRUEL!!
The chance for the truth and Tom leaves? Ohhh you're killing me. Bill was finally lighting up from the bitchiness, thank god, and then... the chance is gone. Humph. Is there any happiness coming along soon? Like Bill walking up and slapping Marla? Or even Tom slapping that bitch? :D You would make me smile very much. ^.^ But I smile and squeal enough when I get the "updated favorites" e-mail and it's for this story. I seriously clapped my hands and squealed "yay" amidst my horrible migraine, which is surprising since I'm, like, dead right now. Anyways.... I'm so happy you updated. You made my day. Thanks for the longer chapter, I loved that. :D Keep it up.
Author's Response: There is some happiness along the way, yes :) And, yeno, this review made MY day! See how we work like that? :P