Date: 11/04/08 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 18
awesome story so far
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Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 11/01/08 10:58 am Title: Chapter 18
:o nein! Tom has to catch him before he goes away! Damn, make Tom run after him or something, he has to tell him the news and all T_T
You know what, I think Bill should consider home schooling... just do another month or someting, and then quit normal school when his stomach starts to show and pass to internet school or something :o it'd be wise, wouldn't it?
And Tom should make up his mind, tell Bill and quit with the stupid show T_T the coldness in the beginning of the chapter made me shiver :(
FLUFF. Pweze. :(
Author's Response: With the schooling, I have it covered ;) And fluff? Hmm... Will think about that one.
Date: 10/31/08 01:31 am Title: Chapter 18
Oh Tom that was dumb to say you're not gay or bi. Why can't you just say you're Billsexual? lol. I love this so much!!
Author's Response: Haha, billsexual is my fav word! ;D And every male is ^^ Thanks!
Date: 10/29/08 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 18
great chapter!! cant wait for the next one!!
Author's Response: ;D
Date: 10/28/08 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 18
stupid tomi.......
Author's Response: Hmhm
Date: 10/28/08 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 18
gawd
i love this
Author's Response: Glad to hear that! :)
Date: 10/28/08 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 18
Very nice chapter, continue please :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 10/28/08 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 18
I liked how you used a puppet metaphor with Tom and his relationships... :)
Author's Response: Oooh, thank you! :D
Date: 10/28/08 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 18
Yay, eating for two update!!! *fangirl squeal* eee, i love this story. you know that, though. :D i'm sure i say that it in just about every review for this.. :P ahh, well...
anyways.
tom found his answer. and you didn't tell us yet! gah! i hope it's a good answer... i really, really hope so. otherwise the story would be a bit too angsty, wouldn't it? if he ended up saying "I'M STRAIGHT" and that's the end of that.. then it'd just be a story of a teenage, pregnant bill wallowing in his pain while the player goes and has his fun. yeah... not much of a story. unless, of course, you were to use that answer and have some other plot of action that i'm thinking about. :P i'm rambling. sorry. lack of sleep after driving home from the TH concert (yayment!!).
Anyhoo, awesome chapter, as always. I loved the whole puppeteer metaphor thing with Tom and the strings with Marla and Bill... nice comparison. Very.. oh, i don't know... analytical? Lol, I have no idea. But it was good. :D Thanks for the update. I loved it.
Author's Response: I haven't decided on the answer. Tom hasn't told me either. (Yes, in this story, they are real in my head) Ooooh, TH concert! Did Bill look pregnant? ;P Aw, glad you liked the metaphor, because I felt a bit unsure about that one :p
Date: 10/28/08 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 18
Tomi better not break up with Billa >.>
Author's Response: Or Bill with Tom! *Snapsnapsnap*
Date: 10/28/08 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter Ö *opens mouth, closes mouth x5* Stupid Tom *VERY angry* I hope you continue soon!!! *too flabbergasted to say anything else, srry hun*
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! And I will try ;P
Date: 10/28/08 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 18
I fucking shit myself. The authors notes, the page took ages to load and all I could do was go over how many bad things could happen, trust me, there was fucking tons.
I never got my email *glares at screen* but I buzzed when I saw the banner.
Tom's an arse
That's all I've got to say on him right now.
I feel bad for Bill and Andreas, spending less time together and what not, but to be fair, the reason as to why that's happening is more than worth it.
I don't know what to think with the angst in this, I get that it's just mood swings making it worse, and Tom being an arse, but when Bill's pregnant, Tom has to be the most caring person towards him, like he has been, in my own opinion.
I don't think I would mind too much if they became social outcasts, since they'd have more time for each other, which would lead to more fluff, but on the other hand, TOM NEEDS TO BE POPULAR.
I'm really worried about the gay/not gay situation, personally, I adore when Tom's just gay for Bill, actually, I adore when Bill and Tom are the only ones for one another, but it sounds like it could really fuck them up.
*Sigh* Angst, not good. Even if it's from an amazing author, and in an amazing story, fluff just owns its arse.
Author's Response: I will tell Tom to be more caring.. Yes, I do tend to talk to the characters of my fics xD It's nice to get to know them. Bill's pregnancy and hormones will probably create angst, so ye be warned. I'll dedicate a fluff-chapter to you sometime, then :)
Date: 10/28/08 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 18
Ahhh. One of those, "I'm not gay, but I *somehow* like you," things. -tsk- Poor Tom. So confused, I suppose. Bill and his mood swings...*giggles*
Author's Response: Yeah, one of those... But I wanted to focus more on the "transicion" this time. I've noticed that they suddenly become gay sometimes in my fics..
Date: 10/28/08 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 18
Stupid Tom ._.
Why is that line in like every review I write for your fics? X''D
Author's Response: Tom tends to do stupid things in me fics, I guess ;P
Date: 10/28/08 11:37 am Title: Chapter 18
Poor Bill. Tom will figure it out eventually. I guess he's going thought the mood swing part of pregnancy huh?
Author's Response: Yep, he is :)
Date: 10/28/08 11:32 am Title: Chapter 17
They should have erased what Marla wrote, it would have saved them some grief and agony. At least they're happy together.
Author's Response: If they could, they would :)
Date: 10/28/08 11:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, Sorry Alvie, forgot to say the good things;D
I really love the mad Bill and how Tom is reacting.
I LOVE THIS STORY MORE THAN EVERY ALVIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Aw... You! <3
Date: 10/28/08 11:05 am Title: Chapter 18
OmG!!!!! Alvie.... Everything went to good and now... *Cries* I hope for Tom that he's gay or else I'll come and beat him up and make him wish he had said he was gay...
Alvie, please make the pain for the three of us go away:(
Author's Response: Hahahah! ;P Will try my best...
Date: 10/23/08 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 17
I just read all 17 chapters tonight and I love this story. I generally don't read m-preg, but this is amazing. I love how they are with each other and how you write the story. I'm excited to read more.
Author's Response: Oh, wow. Thank you so much! ;D
Date: 10/22/08 10:01 am Title: Chapter 17
The ending was gorgeous u.u I like how their relationship is developing. Am I the only one to feel the absence of psycho-preg-Bill? XD I'd add more of that ;) and I'd change the food too. Lol, you can say I'm a nerdie on mpreg XD MOARRR!
Author's Response: He'll come as he realizes the pregnancy and the food will change. It's only been two months ;P We have seven to go.