Date: 01/04/09 07:09 am Title: Chapter 21
Wah! This was so hot! :O I enjoyed every second of it! You're so good at this.. Please update soon! :D
Author's Response: Aw, thanks ;D
Date: 12/10/08 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
plaese update soon. i will die with out this story
Author's Response: Hm, I've read that before.
Date: 12/07/08 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 21
Duh, loved it :D I love Bill like that xP A well, it's what they say, shallow waters go deep *or something xP* I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Still waters run deep, aye ;P
Date: 12/07/08 02:33 am Title: Chapter 21
no Bill and Tom action
*tear*
Author's Response: ;P
Date: 12/06/08 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 21
update! i love this!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 12/06/08 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter, Bill is so cute with self confidence :)
the only thing I have to say is that it would be so nice if
the chapters were just a little bit longer ,
is that possible?
Author's Response: Depends... That would mean slower updates. I usually write until I am done with one "episode" in the story. It is like one scene, and if it is short, sometimes two. It's a "system" I have and in order to manage to write more, I have to update, like to get a fresh start. But the length all depends on what kind of story it is, too. And what the situation in the story is. So to answer your question; yes, it is possible, but it would cause trouble for me, in a way ;P
Date: 12/06/08 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 21
Pssht, did I cringe much!
Bill failed so bad!
I was embarrassed for him.
I've been wanting sex in this from the get go, proper, sweet sex, with Tom being so god damn gentle, so fucking caring, but noo, you couldn't do that could you?
Pssht, I should have known better than to get excited from the beginning of the chapter.
But there's gonna be sec in the next one, isn't there? Please.
Although, this chapter was rather cute, Tom's so fucking amazing in this. He makes me awww and bless so much, almost too much.
Still, HOW COULD YOU END IT THERE!?!
I'm glad there was an update and all, but sex, *sigh*
I'd have thought that Gordon would have walked in on them mind. Like, if they were bollock naked, that'd have well amused me.
I still love this so much.
I love everything that you're writing, always have done always will do - unless you kill of one of the characters I like, then it's a different story.
Before I forget, how many months along is Bill? I'm really bad at remembering things like that.
Author's Response: Come on! When they are ready, they will be ready ;P Maybe in the next one. Depends on the length. I ended it there mostly because I got visitors. If Gordon had walked in on them, there would me trouble :/ He is just over three monts now :)
Date: 12/06/08 10:24 am Title: Chapter 21
ALVIE!!!!! You're so funny and good at this. I think I've learnt how to flirt now... when i try... people laugh at me and say that I'm cute... then they walk away... anyway. Great chappie and I really hoped for some hot sex... until Gordon interrupted... Well, you're fuckamazing and I really love this story more than ever! *standing applause* fuckamazing
Author's Response: Haha xD Don't take my advice from this! I am terrible at flirting xD And once again, you've given me a big lump in my throat from smiling xD
Date: 12/06/08 07:21 am Title: Chapter 21
åååårh, de måtte bli avbrutt ... >_< men anyway, veldig bra chapter, looking forward to next one :DDD
Author's Response: Takkskalduhasann :)
Date: 12/06/08 02:35 am Title: Chapter 21
k;jdlfjhadjd;kjafhd.
Meanie. >:O
Author's Response: Aye, it kept me awake all night.
Author's Response: No, it didn't.
Date: 12/06/08 02:19 am Title: Chapter 21
i loved this chapter, cant wait for the next!!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 12/06/08 12:18 am Title: Chapter 21
-EYES HURT-
I read to here ... I love this story its amazing.
Author's Response: Haha ;P Aw, thanks! Glad you liked!
Date: 12/05/08 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 21
*pouts* lol. They were soooo close and then Tom's dad HAD to call! *grin* Update soon pleaseeee!!!
Author's Response: MurderDad. His new name.
Date: 12/05/08 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 21
.......darn Tom's dad. D: i really hope Tom isn't planning on leaving Bill.. i dunno why but when he said " “You might in the future,” "..he isn't planning on leaving after some time. ;_;
Author's Response: Ah, remember that line. It will be important.
Date: 12/05/08 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG!! Gaaaagghhh... Stupid dad. Just when it's getting so hot!! Aaarrrgghhh...
More, more, more!!!XD Ahm enjoying it a lot!XD
Author's Response: Haha ;P Parents are murder to sex, I say.
Date: 12/05/08 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 21
AW YUM XD
Author's Response: :)
Date: 12/05/08 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 21
stupid dadi, it wuz just gettin good!!!!
Author's Response: Yeeeeeeh, dey du dæt xD
Date: 12/05/08 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 21
mean, mean, MEAN. lol. kinda. not really. i'm just happy for the update. so hot. ^.^ I think my cheeks were flushed when Tom's were... *ahem* oy, too bad that was interrupted. Mean dads. Hmph. Ruining all the fun. Oooh, wait, if Tom's dad called Bill's house for the first time, does that mean he's suspicious and may know that Bill is the "she" that Tom impregnated?! Oooh, foreshadowing? Maybe? Or am I just looking way too deep into your writing? Gahh, thanks for the update. ^.^ Loved it. Awesomesauce.
Author's Response: It is just me who isn't explaining everything at once. Glad you liked it :D
Date: 12/05/08 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 21
dude, that killed it.
Author's Response: Dads tend to do that. If that was what you meant.
Date: 12/05/08 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 21
XDD Ohh, the cheesey sexual lines.
Author's Response: I love 'em, eh ;P