Date: 09/06/08 11:18 pm Title: Don't Make It True
I like the idea. but as others have said it was too rushed. I would like to see it elaborated though :)
Author's Response: ya im going to go back and look at it when i am out of school and have a little more time. thanks for the review tho!
Date: 06/23/08 10:25 am Title: Don't Make It True
awwww i loved it. xx
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 05/28/08 07:13 am Title: Don't Make It True
I like the idea. But I think you maybe could have elaborated a bit more on Bill's emotions etc. But the plot is cute :-)
Author's Response: Thanks. It was just to see what I could write. There's a lot that needs to be redone, but I dont know if i will at all.
Date: 05/27/08 11:11 pm Title: Don't Make It True
It was a little rushed. You probably should have described things more, dragged it out a bit longer. Then maybe the emotions would have come across better. But I liked the idea.
Author's Response: Thanks. I just kinda did it. I'm surprised I got out that much lol.