Date: 02/25/09 06:00 am Title: Chapter 3
“I’m allergic to the sun.” He lied.
Dude, that totally cracked me up!
Date: 02/25/09 05:57 am Title: Chapter 2
this story is great!
Date: 02/06/09 05:10 am Title: Chapter 5
Aww, you had to stop there? Please continue.
Date: 06/28/08 01:35 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh, I love this story, please do more.
Date: 06/25/08 11:24 am Title: Chapter 5
"Bill angrily punched the floor. “I don’t like him. I don’t like him at all.”
Keep telling youself that Bill.
Then why are you so work up about Tom fucking someone :-p
I hope you go on pretty soon, can't wait ;-)
Date: 06/20/08 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
Denial is a jerk, and Bill seems to know it. :D Please update the soonest (or I'll go nuts xD)! Can't wait to see what happens next..
Date: 06/19/08 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
Bill was jelouse! Ha! This should put a bit of a damper on their relationship. Update soon.
Date: 06/16/08 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
The porn is bound to happen. *squeals* Please update soon or I'll go crazy! :}
Date: 06/16/08 05:43 am Title: Chapter 4
Aw! THEY BELONG TOGETHER! They are honestly acting so couple-ish! It's so adorable!
Date: 06/16/08 04:18 am Title: Chapter 4
nicely done Bill :-p The two of them are so cute together. I love how there relationship progresses:-p It seems that Tom is influenced by Bill. He had no sex since the third day that Bill joined the team, mmh interesting I must say :-p
Update as soon as you can, please! ;-)
Date: 06/15/08 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
very cute! More soon please!
Date: 06/15/08 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really like how Tom is all protective over Bill, good job in making me fall in love with this story.
Date: 06/15/08 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
This was so funny! Bill and Tom are so like an old married couple. The thing where Tom showed bill how to swing was really cute, but then he had to go and ruin it. I'm glad Bill's having a positive effect on Tom. Is he still upset about soccer/relating it too his mom? Or at this point is he just mad b/c Tom's being a pain in the ass? Upate soon.
Date: 06/11/08 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
Amazing chapter as always. Keep up the good work! :]
Date: 06/07/08 05:17 am Title: Chapter 1
*giggles*
When's the romance gonna happen? xD
Author's Response: Soon. I just don't want to take the romance too fast because then it just seems more unreal and more impossible for that to happen. Anyways, thanks for the review.
Date: 06/07/08 03:30 am Title: Chapter 3
Bill should kick some asses back there :-p I like how Bill and Tom bicker against each other. I want to know what happens nex so update soon!
Date: 05/31/08 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Tom! That's blackmail, babe!
Date: 05/30/08 04:12 am Title: Chapter 2
I don't know. This chapter was pretty violent, and.. I don't like violence. :/ But I'll continue reading as long as you update. xD Oh yeah and Bill's hot. @_@
Date: 05/30/08 04:03 am Title: Chapter 2
This make me think of Bend it like Beckham, loved that movie, don't know if you know it;-) I think this fic can get really great so I wonder what will happen next :-p Update soon ;-)
Date: 05/29/08 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
He'll play! :D
Update soon! ^-^