Date: 04/01/09 07:16 am Title: Quality time
Ahh dude! Are you kidding me??
When are you going to updates soon??
I was so into the story the BOOM!
You better update soon! Please! Do not
abandon this story!!
Author's Response: An update, for you, hun! :P
Date: 11/18/08 07:07 am Title: Quality time
Oh good, I liked this chapter. It should be very interesting at the show when Brad is there. :)
Do you have a beta? I have noticed some grammar and syntax errors. I only mention is because This is a good story and I dont want little things to detract from it.
Keep up the great work though, I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry.. I don't have a beta. I have thought about getting one many times but somehow I never have.. I really should especially since english definitely isn't my first language.. m' really sorry. I see what I can do :3
Date: 10/25/08 11:35 pm Title: Quality time
Oh yays!! I'm so happy you made another chapter! It's so exciting everytime!! =D I really enjoy reading this please continue!
Author's Response: :) You really made my day, I'm happy to know that! I'll try to write soon
Date: 10/05/08 08:10 am Title: Quality time
Great story :D I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Thanks! I will try to write fast! :)
Date: 10/04/08 03:32 pm Title: Quality time
Dont worry Billa, he'll b back. Tomi just has .. Uhm ... company they he's got to entertain first.
Author's Response: ;D Yeah, that's right! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: 08/31/08 09:03 am Title: Talking plus honesty, equal intuition
yaaaaaaaaay hello. it was veeery nice indeed. you must write about sanfransisco keikka. that will be very much fun indeed. i like whole bill making to jealous with brad situation. i like your writing style, pal. i could have wrote this in finnish but NNOOO you wouldn't let me. nyyh yhhyyy. but back to the real review. it was very nice indeed dear old mate. you have improved much since the first chapter yaay yaay party. you describe eeeeeeeerybody very well. you really can imagine all the people. so, the whole thingy is veri pleasing. and i like when they play ps cause i like to play ps as well! i love singstar. and cause everybody always wins bill in every car and guitarhero jne games, BUT if they playd sing star, bill would win and i would be happy. yaaay so do that. but the whole thing kokonaisudessaan was very nice! and sorry when there are some finnish words in, i couldn't remember/ couldn't write correctly. have a nice day, mate!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks, duuude! Yes, I agree that I cartainly have improved since the first chapter.. that wasn't too pretty... I'm glad you FINALLY decided to take your sweet, precious, oh-so-much-more-important time, to read this! And I'm gona ask your help in the future, so be aware! ;)Yeah.. and maybe they will play SingStar in the upcoming chapters!rnrnThanks for the review, it means a lot, mate! Keep them coming, please? :)
Date: 08/29/08 01:59 pm Title: Something new
JEEJEE BILEET
Author's Response: Weird.. but thanks! ^_^'
Date: 08/19/08 01:27 am Title: Talking plus honesty, equal intuition
OMG! This is great! I love this! =D
Very thought through! Very entertaining.
Author's Response: Yeah.. I'm not so sure about the thought through part.. But thank you! I'm glad you like it! :)
Date: 08/15/08 04:55 am Title: Talking plus honesty, equal intuition
yay! two chapters! i like this. i'm nervous for bill...but i must admit i love angst...so i look forward to seeing where this goes. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like this and I promise to try my best on every chapter. Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 08/12/08 08:03 pm Title: Talking plus honesty, equal intuition
Fuck. I agree with Tom, fuck is the best way to describe it. Shit gets near too.
Shit, I like this too much for my own good. Your way of writing is captivating. Makes me interested and I really get involved in the story. I totally block any sound coming from the real world.
Keep it going and I'll feed you gummybears.
Author's Response: Yummy! I've always loved gummybears! ^__^ rnWow, that review was among the nicest ones I've ever received! Thankm you!!!rnI will try to update as fast as possible.
Date: 07/18/08 11:55 pm Title: Confusion
Awww... You're leaving? But I want another chapter. The next one sounds like it's gonna be really good! At least Bill's gonna do something. They need the twin time back (and then some). Update as soon as you come home.
Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't do it right away...sorry... but I did my best! (hopefully)rnThanks for the review! :))
Date: 07/18/08 05:30 pm Title: Confusion
Go on!!!
Author's Response: :D Will do! Thanks for the review!
Date: 07/13/08 12:43 am Title: Morning special
So far I really like this story, I hope you haven't abandoned it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :)) Yes, I know it has been forever since the last update but no worries. New chapter's coming up..
Date: 06/16/08 10:25 am Title: Morning special
Its great, really
update soon
Author's Response: Thankies!! :)) I'm glad you liked it and took your time to review it!! :Drn
Date: 06/16/08 05:32 am Title: Morning special
awww, jealous tomi is my favourite. Now bill is going to give tom a hard time flirting with another guy. Yay, can't wait to see more.
I wonder why I haven't notice this fic sooner. It's very good so far.
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you found it now and like it, at least so far! :) And yes, jealous Tom is my favourite too so, that's what I wanted to write. rnThanks for the review, it means a lot to me! :))
Date: 06/15/08 07:57 pm Title: Morning special
Where are they now? Are they still in the states? I really liked this chapter. It was pretty funny. First the alarm clock, then a panicked Bill, then the wresteling scene (Tom's loosing it, quickly, he need's to let Bill know, or just loose control, that might be more entertaining), and then there was the remark that anyone would beat bill, blindfolded and w/o arms. It made me laugh. I hope Bill can't see Brad any time soon. Update soon.
Author's Response: Yes, they are still in the States, I'm sorry if I left that unclear..rnAnd I had the feeling that you guys are not gona like Brad, neither do I, but can't help it, he's kinda part of the story!rnI'm glad that you liked those scenes! :))rnThanks for the review!
Date: 06/15/08 05:10 pm Title: Morning special
Ooooh!! AWESOME CHAPTER!! It was funny how Tom's sitting there thinking about Bills body and has to mentally scold himself for it. Bill running around frantic trying to get ready was a funny mental image 2. Lol. :)
i love this fic. No need to thank me for reviewing. I do it gladly because 1) it's so hilarious and one of the best fics i've read in a while. makes me giggle. and 2) i like to help people out the best i can by giving them either critisism or a 'happy-happy' comment for the day. My pleasure. *hugs*
Author's Response: Yeah, I pictured that scene in my head too and got some intresting menatl images as well :DrnWell, maybe you gladly review and I gladly thank you ;) rnSo nice to hear that you still like this 'cause I still like writing this :)) Thank you! (remember, I like to say 'thank you')
Date: 06/11/08 09:01 pm Title: Interviews and photoshoots
I will be really happy if you update soon^^
I'm starting to love this :) *hugs you*
Author's Response: *hugs back* I'm glad you like this! n__n I will try to update faster this time. Thanks for your review! :)
Date: 06/11/08 08:49 pm Title: Something new
It sure has :)
More^^
Author's Response: :D More cominggg! (hopefully soon)
Date: 06/11/08 07:21 pm Title: Interviews and photoshoots
Oooooohhhhh! Brotherly feelings.
Ohhh dear. HAWT!
Author's Response: Yup! n__n Thanks for you review! :))
