Date: 06/06/08 11:57 am Title: Chapter 6
awwwwwww poor bill. cant waitto see what happens next!
Author's Response: yeah poor Bill.... but don't worry Bill will be fine... next part will be posted soon...
Date: 06/06/08 11:38 am Title: Chapter 6
nice nice nice...
but Bill didn't say it was them
damn it!!!
itwas so sweet that Bill tried to save tom
I love it
keep going!!!
Author's Response: thank you.... ya bill is really sweet....
Date: 06/06/08 11:36 am Title: Chapter 5
those stupid A-holes...
firstly beating Bill
and secondly framing Tom
just send them to jail
they deserve to be there
Author's Response: woooo calm down... ya i know they deserve it but dont worry they'll pay for what they did at the right time.....
Date: 06/06/08 10:56 am Title: Chapter 6
Its good =]]
Author's Response: thanksie.......
Date: 06/06/08 10:46 am Title: Chapter 6
Good chapter. Poor Bill
Author's Response: thanksie.... yeah poor Bill.... that was really mean of those guys...
Date: 06/06/08 10:07 am Title: Chapter 6
OMG! Bill is such a sweetheart! But you promised they will be punished! :'(
Author's Response: yep he definitely is.... i know i promised but don't worry, they'll be punished at the right time.... :D
Date: 06/06/08 08:20 am Title: Chapter 6
Eheh Tomi, what's your problem? You've got a crush! :D I hope he'll change his mind when Bill returns him the wristband T_T
Author's Response: yep... he's got a crush... a big crush... sooner or later he'll have to change his mind...:D
Date: 06/05/08 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
are they framing tom? y is tom nice all of the sudden? what happens next???!!!
Author's Response: wow so many questions......... well ya they are trying to frame tom... n tom is not nice its just that he doesnt like to raise hand on people, he just like to hurt them verbally..... and what happens next is a mystery.... ;D
Date: 06/05/08 10:50 am Title: Chapter 5
omg its so good, i cant wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: thank you..... next chapter will be posted soon.....
Date: 06/05/08 10:41 am Title: Chapter 4
oooooo bill kicked his ass.........lol good story
Author's Response: thanksie
Date: 06/05/08 04:40 am Title: Chapter 1
i'm clever obviously!! ;)
Bill is a nice guy so he'll tell the truth!
the thing is, will he be able to????
I CAN'T WAIT
Author's Response: ya i guess you are..... bill is very nice but the mystery is: will he tell the truth or will he lie???
Date: 06/04/08 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
was that Tom's wrist band? O_O oh shit. I hope not. they're gonna blame him, I bet; and the cops are gonna try to arrest Tomi boy. but Bill won't allow that, will he? Nope. no he won't.
haha, sorry, making up my own little story there. wonderful job you're doing! keep it up!
update soon!
Author's Response: ya it was Tom's wristband..... what Bill will do is a mystery that will be revealed in next chapter... thanks... it'll be updated very soon
Date: 06/04/08 08:08 am Title: Chapter 5
that was good..
Author's Response: thanksie
Date: 06/04/08 07:36 am Title: Chapter 5
Those damn bastards! Don't let them get away with that! Please, write more, this story means a world to me!
Author's Response: thanksie nije..... i dont think they will get away so easily, certainly not after they beat Bill up... dnt worry the next chapter will be up soon...
Date: 06/04/08 07:13 am Title: Chapter 5
just started this fic!
it's great!!
hopefully Bill will say that Tom wasn't there even if his wristband is there!
can't wait for more
Author's Response: thanksie... im gla u liked it.... i'll let u guess what Bill will say... hihi... well how did u kno it was Tom's wristband???
Author's Response: thanksie... im glad u liked it.... i'll let u guess what Bill will say... hihi... well how did u kno it was Tom's wristband???
Date: 06/03/08 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
mmm >_< the mixture of present and past tense seems to bother me lol... and it seems like this is almost being rushed O.o
anywho, =P it's a good story
Author's Response: thanks... well in what way is it being rushed?
Date: 06/03/08 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
D:< why the hell did Tom say that???? T_T grr
Author's Response: well like its said in the story, tom likes to hurt people... thats why he said that... :D
Date: 06/03/08 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
wow... i love it
i'm so glad that Bill kicked Toms ass
*yay*
more please!
Author's Response: thank you...
Date: 06/02/08 10:09 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh, God, thank you! My biggest wish became true! *Blowing a kiss*
Author's Response: nope im the one who has to thank you... coz i've already written chapter 4 but when i read your review, i changed it and i made Bill a little bit naughtier... thanks for reading so far... :D
Date: 06/02/08 01:18 am Title: Chapter 3
tom is meanie.... great story
next chapter please!
Author's Response: thanks... well the next chapter has already been posted...rnu can check it out :D... hope u'll like it