Date: 07/08/08 02:15 am Title: Chapter 12
*sobbing* i can feel their pain
Author's Response: Aww. I felt sad writing it also. Let's hope the final chapters bring them some happiness! xx
Date: 07/07/08 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aww Bill was so mean. I want them back together. :(
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm really back into the feel of this story now, so I hope to have the next chapter up soon. Thanks so much for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying it :)
Date: 07/07/08 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 12
God, I hate Bill.
Why do all of you good writers make me hate Fiction!Bill all of a sudden?
I love the story though! .
Author's Response: Aww thank you, I'm glad you like it. Yeah Bill isn't acting very fairly right now! Lol, I think you'll forgive him eventually ;)
Date: 06/13/08 02:17 am Title: Chapter 11
oh poor Bill but this is good
update soon :)
Author's Response: Aww thankyou :-) I'll update over the weekend I hope. X
Date: 06/12/08 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awwww nooooo Tomi you BIG meanie!!! xxx
Author's Response: Isn't he? Poor Bill. I felt kinda mean writing it LOL. X
Date: 06/12/08 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 11
I can't believe this has just ended there!
I need to know what's happened.
It's actually great!
Please, don't stop writing it.
I've only just started readng this. That's my excuse for not reviewing before.
But, wow, I loved it.
Author's Response: Aww thanks so much! I really wanted to write a longer chapter, but I've been awful busy. But I'll get the next chapter up in the next few days, promise :-) X
Date: 06/10/08 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please continue writing this story it's just getting interesting. Just a little tip: Keep up the angst(the first part of the story lacked that a bit) that's what makes a story worth reading:) and finish with a happy end - that's what makes you want to reread it!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, and also the advice. Tips are really appreciated as I'm completely new to writing fan fic. I've definately been inspired to take this story to it's conclusion now :-)
Date: 06/10/08 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 10
Well, actually I'm not sure yet what to think of your story.
I really like the idea of Bill and Tom trying to spend peaceful holidays on an island and being disturbed by the others. Bill such a girl sometimes, but I can deal with your way to write him.
I also like Gustav's conflict, now that he has seen the twins. Georg and Gustav are usually okay with the twins' relationship, aren't they? So if the drummer isn't okay with it, that'd be quite a change for me xD
But the shark thing... I mean, that's possible, of course but it's so unusual that it made me stop for a moment. It turned out to be interesting, though, now that Tom's so badly scarred that he doesn't want Bill to see his body.
So, I'd like to read the next chapter. I just discovered your story today so I can't really feel sorry for not having commented on the other chapters but I promise that I'll try to comment on new chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks for the honest opinion. Yeah, I knew it was a bit different - I mean sure, it's not probable, but entirely possible, so I decided to go with it. But I knew from the start it wouldn't be to everyone's taste. I think now the actual event of the attack has occured, the rest of the story will be less unusual, but yeah, I'll see where it goes. I'll try to get the next chapter up soon. Thanks again for the review :-)
Date: 06/10/08 06:56 am Title: Chapter 10
awww silly Tom and poor Bill, he didn't know Tom act like this because of love him so much to don't let him see the big ugly scar *pet them*
more pls!!
Author's Response: It makes me sad writing about them arguing lol. I almost feel guilty! hehehe. rnrnI'll update asap. X
Date: 06/10/08 05:41 am Title: Chapter 1
"Tom walked over and knelt beside has twin's bed, taking his hand." Ö.ö i dont know if thats smt...but... i think ur mind was smw else when u wrote that. maybe it was Bill who walked over the bed? x) Good story.
Author's Response: Gosh I don't know how I made a mistake like that. Lol.Yes, of course, it should have read `Bill`. Well, thanks for pointing it out - I corrected it.
Date: 06/10/08 03:04 am Title: Chapter 10
OMG DON'T STOP! I love this story! Seriously. I'm sorry I never commented before but...I'm not really the commenting type. I'm shy. ^__^
But I will comment every time now if you keep this story up. Please!
Author's Response: Gosh thank you. It's really encouraging to hear that people have enjoyed it. Hopefully it will inspire a really good next chapter :-) X
Date: 06/09/08 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 10
=0 Don't scrap it! I really, really, honestly, like this. It has the perfect amounts of fluff, a bit of angst and a little light smut or whatever. =] I like it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you've enjoyed it, and I'll certainly write on.
Date: 06/09/08 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
dont say your making a mess with your story
in fackt i love this chapter
and i want you to continu to write it the way you do
dont be to hard with yourself ;)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you for saying so. I appreciate it. Well, if one person is interested to know what happens next, then that's a good enough reason to write on! :-)
Date: 06/09/08 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 9
That was really horny...I'm all flushed now!!! xxx
Author's Response: It had the same effect on me when I wrote it, lol. XX
Date: 06/05/08 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 9
THAT WAS SO SEXY!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I can't even look at a couple kissing without thinking Bill and Tom since starting this story! Lol. Thanks for all your comments, they are really appreciated. XX
Date: 05/28/08 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ahhhh thank god he's ok can't wait for more xxx
Author's Response: Aww thanks. I hope to have another chapter up really soon - maybe even tonight. xx
Date: 05/27/08 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
Curious, curious...It's getting so good. I <3 Tom in this, I <3 how he's the protective older brother/boyfriend. It's adorable...Though I'm worried, now the Gustav knows...That could be very bad. +Fav
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I love that you mentioned Tom, because that's exactly how I wanted him to be viewed. He's got some tough times ahead of him, but I have a feeling he'll still end up being the one who takes care of them both!
Date: 05/26/08 12:40 am Title: Chapter 7
TOOOOOMMMMIII!!! No no no no!! Please be okay. Pleas b okay. Dont die. Dont die, dont die!! *sobs uncontrollably*
Author's Response: I can't tell you how guilty I felt writing this Chapter! The next Chapter is almost finished. I have to sleep now, but I promise I won't keep you waiting too long. I'll finish it before tonight :-)
Date: 05/25/08 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
Hoollllyyyyyyyy scheisse!!!! *dies*
THAT WAS HAAAAWWWWTTT
Author's Response: It made me blush writing it! Lol.
Date: 05/25/08 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
OH SCHEISS GUSTAV!!!! Uh oh!!
that kiss was sexy tho. Hee
Author's Response: Trust poor Gustav to be in the wrong place at the wrong time! * rolls eyes *