Date: 05/30/08 07:44 pm Title: Satin Spar
O.O *feeds review monster*
Be nice to Billa and Tomi Toasty!
They're sweethearts, and yet you enjoy fucking with them!
Author's Response: OH AND YOU'RE ONE TO TALK! XD hahaha always killing them or something O_O
Date: 05/30/08 07:39 pm Title: Satin Spar
Hm. Quite interesting. Well, it sounds absolutely awesome so far, I'll admit. XD. And different from the norm. So, i look forward to the next chapter! ^^
Author's Response: Thanks a ton yingles! .. I'm so proud of this story ^___^ only 1 chap left too
Date: 05/28/08 12:21 pm Title: Porcelain Doll
Write MORE!
Author's Response: more is coming I promise! wasn't allowed online for a couple days there O_O
Date: 05/26/08 11:20 am Title: Porcelain Doll
There there, pretty monster. Have a cookie!
Well done (I always wanna say that, but it just sounds so smug, don't you think?! And yet, I said it). Simply put: I like this a whole lot. You'll write more, won't you? Huh? Huh?
Author's Response: lol yes I will definitely be writing more ^___^ *glomps*
Date: 05/26/08 04:57 am Title: Porcelain Doll
*dies a little inside*
O_O
( i'm sure that's a good thing xD )
Author's Response: oh no my wifey!! *drags in the defibrilator* CLEAR! *shocks wifey's dead bit back to life* lol -luffff youu wifey-
Date: 05/25/08 11:42 pm Title: Porcelain Doll
By akward I meant from my personal poit of view. I'm not criticising the writing. It was the situation combined w/ the negative reaction on Bill's part that made me feel uncomfortable for some reason. I don't know why, that almost never happens, unless I'm watching some wacky movie or something. Sorry. I like the idea, I just felt... strange. I still want to read more. Update soon?
Author's Response: lol oh I figured you were sitll interested in it. thanks for elaborating on that ^___^ it is a strange bit though. was meant to be all O_o LoL
Date: 05/25/08 05:34 pm Title: Porcelain Doll
GASP!
*feeds the review monster*
IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!
Author's Response: lol wait til the next oneeee *bounces insanely*
Date: 05/25/08 03:24 pm Title: Porcelain Doll
oh that'so hot so yammy
Very good and delicious just like your name.
continue like this, girl:)
Author's Response: lol I will XD and why does everyone want to eat me?? O____O .....
Date: 05/25/08 01:22 pm Title: Porcelain Doll
Wow. Holy shit.
Ughsskcnsdwkemlosmph. Torture. And you said there's more? Cant wait.
Author's Response: lol yingles! XD yes there's more :D
Date: 05/25/08 01:07 pm Title: Porcelain Doll
Haha, oh my god, poor Tom! xD
This was so much fun reading, and I'm looking forward to another chapter ;D
I couldn't help but feel sorry for both Bill and Tom, haha, this was great x) :D
Author's Response: teehee wait til the next part!!! *rubs hands together evily*
Date: 05/25/08 12:18 pm Title: Porcelain Doll
That was absolutely a turn on, very hot :-p the way you described it is just fabulous. I'm glad you don't just keep it as a one-shot. I can't wait for the next chapter and see how Bill feels about it all :-p But poor Tom I have a feeling that it ain't going to be easy for him. Update soon! ;-)
Author's Response: yes yes I sure will ^_^ glad you enjoyed it and yeah I am just like O_O over it all haha
Date: 05/25/08 12:08 pm Title: Porcelain Doll
This was kinda akward to read. Mostly b/c of Bill's reaction. Once he gets over the shock how will he feel? Update soon.
Author's Response: awkward? :\ feel free to IM or email me to elaborate on that one please ^_^ I'd love to know. and the nxt update iwll be sooon I promise ^_^
Date: 05/25/08 12:05 pm Title: Porcelain Doll
Great, I was doing work then read your story and couldn't turn away. Damn, shower sex is in my series!
Author's Response: lol sorry about that XD
Date: 05/25/08 11:23 am Title: Porcelain Doll
I meant to say this in my previous review..Horny much? :)
Author's Response: DX all I write is smut! XDD it's all I am capable of :| so yeah I guess so haha *continues humping abc's leg*
Date: 05/25/08 11:12 am Title: Porcelain Doll
well
very well written i must say
it was a good read!
very very very good =]
im glad i stopped to read it
*thumbs up*
Author's Response: glad you read it ^_^ stay tuned for the next chap O_O
Date: 05/25/08 11:10 am Title: Porcelain Doll
What?
I honestly expected Bill to love the idea of Tom jerking of over him.
Although I am glad he didn't, it makes a welcome change to what's normal on here.
Was brilliant like.
Author's Response: thank yous!!!! *squeals* oh you'll see how badly Bill takes it in teh coming chapter O_O
Date: 05/25/08 11:09 am Title: Porcelain Doll
Uuh.. Uuuhh, this was like.. OMG!HOT! I think I died and entered heaven! CHRIST! :D
Author's Response: NNGAHH!! I KNOW! OMG! LOL
Date: 05/25/08 11:00 am Title: Porcelain Doll
*feeds the monster* ;)
Oh, that was so hott! I had to stop halfway through, when I was validating it, 'cos I was reading it word for word, lol. Reall, really sexy, but poor Tom! *hugs him* Can't wait for more of this, Toasty. ^_^
Author's Response: lol omg I had plans before to just get Tom out of there before Bill caught him.. but I was thinking on it last night and I got struck by brilliance for ideas so I'm like YEY over this one haha