Date: 02/07/09 09:30 am Title: Masks can only cover so much for so long...
Ha, my ideas were nothing like what the other reviewer mentioned, but I must say I love the way you work the language in this. The ideas of his mask slipping, of his incurable disease not having him, and of the audience always watching... gah. Amazing. I too am disappointed that you've gotten so little praise for this.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much for commenting on this, dear. I'm very glad that you enjoyed this! As for the reviews, I don't mind at all, I just like putting my work out. :]
Date: 06/12/08 01:28 am Title: Masks can only cover so much for so long...
He lives inside his head. The audience, his abuser- both were created by his own mind to torment him. The mask is his was to please himself because he is convinced he isn't good enough. His disease, wether its an actual drug addiction or metaphor is self imposed because he his afraid of himself and the demons of his past. He is an actor in every sense of the word.
That's what I think.
This was beautiful, you know. Inside every melancholy tale, there is eloquence, and you have painted it perfectly.
Congratulations. I am dissapointed that more have not read this. They are missing out.
Author's Response: You were amazingly correct with your guesses! And thanks so much for the kind words, dear!
