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Reviewer: xXgustavXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/09 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1: Nightmare

I like this story so far. Please keep writing. I'm greatly interested as in to what happens next.

Reviewer: Marchoofd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/08 02:55 am Title: Chapter 1: Nightmare

oooo.. i hope you write more soon. ^^

Reviewer: Joanie Schaefer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/08 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: Nightmare

this is really good. update soon?

Author's Response: I'm trying :/

Reviewer: MagicalGirl379 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/24/08 05:49 am Title: Chapter 1: Nightmare

Like OMG!!! I want you to go on, it's great! Please?

Author's Response: Yay :D Thank you! And yes, I am :)

Reviewer: taschatokio Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/08 12:43 am Title: Chapter 1: Nightmare

YES MOREEEE!!! But i think a beta would be a good idea. I'm liking this story so far, try to make the chapters longer though...

Author's Response: Thank you ^_^ I'm definitely going to make them longer. Or...try to. If I don't get writer's block again.

Reviewer: Midnatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/08 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: Nightmare

what I meant was, that you should.... -This is hard for me to explain in english sorry...^^' But anyway, as you said, it's your first^^

Reviewer: Midnatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/08 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1: Nightmare

You should continue!^^ It's vey interesting and promising, but maybe you should use spaces more...?^^ Just a thought, the chapter was a bit short though but great!^^

Author's Response: Well, I guess I kind of posted this just to get used to things, since this is my first time posting anything on here, you know? One thing...sorry, but how do mean, "use spaces more"? Thanks for the review! :D I will definitely look into your advice!

Reviewer: oxoxbill4lifeoxox Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/08 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: Nightmare

This story is very interesting and i think you should continue it.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm planning on continuing, though I'm curious as to how far I'll get before I run out of ideas...again...Thanks for the review :D <3

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