Date: 11/13/09 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1: Nightmare
I like this story so far. Please keep writing. I'm greatly interested as in to what happens next.
Date: 06/14/08 02:55 am Title: Chapter 1: Nightmare
oooo.. i hope you write more soon. ^^
Date: 06/02/08 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: Nightmare
this is really good. update soon?
Author's Response: I'm trying :/
Date: 05/24/08 05:49 am Title: Chapter 1: Nightmare
Like OMG!!! I want you to go on, it's great! Please?
Author's Response: Yay :D Thank you! And yes, I am :)
Date: 05/23/08 12:43 am Title: Chapter 1: Nightmare
YES MOREEEE!!! But i think a beta would be a good idea. I'm liking this story so far, try to make the chapters longer though...
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^ I'm definitely going to make them longer. Or...try to. If I don't get writer's block again.
Date: 05/22/08 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: Nightmare
what I meant was, that you should.... -This is hard for me to explain in english sorry...^^' But anyway, as you said, it's your first^^
Date: 05/22/08 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1: Nightmare
You should continue!^^ It's vey interesting and promising, but maybe you should use spaces more...?^^ Just a thought, the chapter was a bit short though but great!^^
Author's Response: Well, I guess I kind of posted this just to get used to things, since this is my first time posting anything on here, you know? One thing...sorry, but how do mean, "use spaces more"? Thanks for the review! :D I will definitely look into your advice!
Date: 05/22/08 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: Nightmare
This story is very interesting and i think you should continue it.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm planning on continuing, though I'm curious as to how far I'll get before I run out of ideas...again...Thanks for the review :D <3
