Date: 10/05/07 05:10 pm Title: Closer
That was good! I love Billa and Tom together! xD It was short though, maybe a longer one sometime soon?! :D
Date: 10/05/07 04:39 pm Title: Closer
that was hawt
good job
more
Date: 10/04/07 11:21 am Title: Lara's Return
i'm a bit confused about chapters 3 and 6,yes,but whatever!!!
Date: 10/03/07 07:52 pm Title: Lara's Return
OH MEINE GOTT! I luuuvvv this fic! its amazing! please keep going! and i understand chapter 3 und 6 :)
Date: 10/01/07 03:56 am Title: Lara's Return
Well, I'm not exactly 'confused', per say. I know that it's in the future, and I know that in order to find out what happens, I have to read on. =D I like the mystery so I don't think you should even TRY to explain any of that now. If we are confused at the end of the story, then you should worry. =P
Anyway, the plot's coming on nicely! I like how their relationship is described. Strangers and yet so familiar. But trouble's brewing, yea? Lara won't be pleased to find Tomas in Billa's bed, lol.
Date: 10/01/07 03:44 am Title: Lara's Return
I really, really like this story. The first few lines of chapter three confused me, but I worked out that three + six are set in the present and the others when they first met. The confusion over how they got between the two points only adds to the intrigue of the plot. I do love this so much! :D
Date: 10/01/07 03:39 am Title: Lara's Return
i like Bill in this story,he's so sweet
and yes i'm confused by chapters 3 and 6 a lil'
i like Lara too even she's so arogant but it's her father fault
i hope she gets pregnant
Date: 09/30/07 11:32 pm Title: Lara's Return
Chapters 3 and 6 is the present and obviously the boys have become...um...a certain something. (I don't want to say in case it's still a surprise for anyone else). So I'm assuming the story will eventuallly explain how they came to be that. At least, that is what I was getting from the story. I could be completely wong. :) Good job so far. Please write more. And are you going to update Forget It anytime soon? That's another one that I love.
Author's Response: A couple of other people have mentioned what they may have become, so no biggie. I'll see what I can do on Forget It. With both that and Eternal Echo, I've just had killer writer's block. But I'll see if I can plow through it like I did with Just Another Night. Thanks for the comment and you are very very right on all levels there.
Date: 09/30/07 09:29 pm Title: Lara's Return
I'm confused on Chapters 3 and 6. But I'm sure you'll reveal all in good time. The story is amazing so far. I love it a lot.
Author's Response: Yes...all of the secrets of the universe shall be revealed! *lightning flashes and thunder cracks* But yea, if you don't get it now, it will come clear in...the next few chapters.
Date: 09/30/07 09:22 pm Title: Lara's Return
somewhat confused.. as I get it... couple centuries they stay "alive" so they might be vampires or something.. since Billa belongs to the Roma people no wonder it;s the Dracula domain - they might have gone to find his family or something... but I AM confused why his jeans are bloostained... I can see no reason or explication for that...
Author's Response: Try rereading chapter 3 and see if you can figure out why the jeans may be bloodstained. Thanks for the comment!
Date: 09/30/07 09:04 pm Title: Lara's Return
im not confused by chapter six. just wondering, are they supposed to be vampires or something, and this is telling how they became vampires and got away from laura and all that? either way, yay
Date: 09/30/07 07:16 pm Title: Lara's Return
I was only a little confused. But I do love the story. And hate Lara, of course. lol.
Date: 09/29/07 03:03 am Title: "I still see it sometimes."
ur story is very good
poor Tom left alone in the wedding night
Bill is so sweet like usual
lovely
post more
Date: 09/28/07 09:15 pm Title: "I still see it sometimes."
mooooooore.. please? ^^
Author's Response: Of course!
Date: 09/28/07 09:04 pm Title: "I still see it sometimes."
These bits confuse me. x]
Author's Response: All shall be explained.
Date: 09/28/07 05:18 pm Title: The wedding night
This has to be one of the best ideas for a fic and you describe everything so beautifully :)
Date: 09/28/07 02:07 pm Title: The wedding night
YAY this story is lovely! :D
Date: 09/27/07 09:49 pm Title: The wedding night
but are those really healed ? ))))
i like it...
Author's Response: *shrugs*