Date: 06/07/08 06:48 am Title: III
I like the chapter :D Billy is bored xD Haha
I hope you continue soon!
*I'm already looking forward for some action :P Gee, I'm terrible xD*
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! I can't wait to write the action ;P
Date: 06/07/08 06:47 am Title: III
oh, i wasn't waiting for un update.
That's so cool. I mean, i love bill in this story. ;)
keep going, i'm waiting for the action. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! Everyone's probably waiting for the action, and I can't wait to write it ;P
Date: 06/06/08 01:30 am Title: I
Nice start! it is rather raunchy *giggles* Yay! I will love to see where this ends up!
Date: 06/05/08 12:12 pm Title: II
OMG. WHERE IS THE REST OF THIS FIC? Why do you do this to me! Now I'm going to be thinking about this fic all the time until you post the next chapter.
How did Bill know how to say “Creo que tus labios serian muy deliciosos" ?
I can't wait till the pool party! I need to see other people's reaction to Bill, lol. He is just so confident and sexy!
Date: 06/04/08 10:11 pm Title: II
ive read all your stories, and check for reviews all the time, your stories and makes three by majestrix is all i read on here.
Date: 06/02/08 03:03 pm Title: I
omg, Bill is such a slut in this one xD.
new chapter please ^^
Date: 06/01/08 07:09 pm Title: II
okeyyy
that's soooo hard
kee it up..
i hoe u'll udate soon...
:p
Date: 05/30/08 08:30 pm Title: II
Aaahhhh I love this SO much! You're such a great author, I must say :)
I'm really liking where it's going, and I'm really excited to see the next chapter :D
Date: 05/25/08 10:23 pm Title: II
QUESTION: I know they are in Spain, but since Bill is from Germany, does he have a German accent and will we hear any German anytime soon? PLEASE UPDATE SOON too. ;) =P
Date: 05/25/08 10:22 pm Title: II
what does "Madre mia" mean???? and this is an AWESOME fic!! I can't wait for the next update!! :)
Date: 05/25/08 12:45 pm Title: II
Great chapter :D I hope you can find enough time soon to continue :)
Date: 05/24/08 09:10 pm Title: II
I like it when Tom speaks spanish *grins*
Matter of time until Bill gets to fuck the gardener xD
Date: 05/24/08 04:51 pm Title: II
that was awesoooooooome!
i really love your story!!
update asap..!
Date: 05/24/08 11:56 am Title: II
Oh, I love this! Can't wait for more!
Good luck with your exams :)
Date: 05/24/08 06:11 am Title: II
Ah, ich habe keine Wörter xD
Nah, I do. This was so cute and hot! Wow, I'm really looking forward to the 18th now. It will be the day after my oral German exam too xD Man, I should go practice.
ANYWAY! Hm, as for mistakes. You write you're in stead of your.
"My son’s hitting on you’re gardener”
That's like.. My son is hitting on you are gardner.
But it wasn't so bad that I got out of the story. Or maybe it was the story that was that good? ;)
As I said, can't wait for the 18th :) Or later...
Author's Response: Hey, yeah, I know the difference between your and you're, thanks for pointing it out though! I write too quickly and then don't notice the mistakes when I read through once more .__.' Thank you! I'm really happy you like the story :D
Date: 05/24/08 05:33 am Title: II
I like Spanish! Go on!
Date: 05/24/08 02:15 am Title: II
This is very very good. The characterizations are true to themselves.
Date: 05/24/08 01:30 am Title: II
Oooohhhhhhh hitting on the gardener and he's liking it. Way to go bill. Thats HAWT!!!!
Date: 05/23/08 10:48 pm Title: II
WOOOOOW *-*
*giggles*
I'm sure loving it....
I know Spanish, Portuguese and a little bit of German [I hate those accents ¬¬]
xD
GOOD JOB!
Date: 05/23/08 08:46 pm Title: II
uuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
sweet n' sexy