Date: 06/16/08 10:51 pm Title: VI
Oooh. Wild, heavy stepbrother sex!! Yum. That sounds good. Hopefully in good time we will get some of that. =P
Author's Response: I hope so too, I can't wait to wirte it :D
Date: 06/16/08 10:46 pm Title: VI
Still likin' it.
Good luck on your exam!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 06/16/08 10:04 pm Title: VI
Love it! Gosh, Bill is such a little bitch. Poor Tom, he's genuinely a nice guy :) And I love how your updates are pretty good; keep it up :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try ^^
Date: 06/16/08 09:49 pm Title: VI
please try to update soon.hope u feel non- tired later . how bout some rest? cant have a great author not write cuz they are tired ^_^ love the story
Author's Response: Haha, thanks. I have only one more exam left, and tomorrow by this time I will have all the time in the world to rest and write :D
Date: 06/16/08 09:44 pm Title: VI
You can't rush greatness! I love this!! More soon??
Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'll update asap ^^
Date: 06/16/08 07:38 pm Title: VI
“I’ve almost fucking got the guy ready, he’ll be history in no time, then we can talk and bond and build sandcastles together, ok? Good.”
I love that line. It made me laugh, especially since I can't picture our little prima ballerina sitting in the sand and building castles. He's such a bitch.
I have to give Tom credit, for putting up with him. I don't think I'd have the patience for that, let alone the wherewithal to go out of my way and try to be nice to him. Seriously, kudos, Tom.
Anyway, great chapter! I didn't find it confusing or unclear at all, and I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you're liking it :D I'll update asap ^^
Date: 06/16/08 07:28 pm Title: VI
i looooooved it xD
can't wait for more and i hope u'll give it to me soon (A)
i didn't think it was unclear at all and i love the fact that it's moving so slowly. i hate it when they just kinda hate eachother and then wake up one day and suddenly decide they wanna fuck eachother ^o)
so yeah, i love ur fic =D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're liking it so much! :D I'll try and give it to you soon ;P
Date: 06/16/08 07:20 pm Title: I
Oh and I forgot! GEORG!!! Does he have the hots for Bill!! WOOH! Lol Georg, I always love how you make Georg's character. Keep up the AMAZING work!!!
Author's Response: Haha thank you! I can't help it, I find Georg hilariously funny in real life (everything he does just makes me laugh, I love him xD), and I simply can't not write him funny/silly/weird in my fics xD
Date: 06/16/08 07:18 pm Title: VI
LOL, Bill is totally hilarious!!! Tom is a little whiny, but I can get use to it. i can't wait to see what happens! Make it good! UPDATE SOON I love this fic like crazy!!!!
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! Glad you're enjoying it so much! :D
Date: 06/16/08 07:16 pm Title: VI
OMG, I am so enjoying how quickly you update this fic! I think all the other authors should learn a lesson from you, lol.
Author's Response: Haha, I hope I can keep it up in the summer ;)
Date: 06/16/08 07:15 pm Title: VI
MAZING!
as ive said before, i read the valentines story, it says there will be another one too it, will there still be *crosses fingers* so after reading it over, your stores are the only ones ive ever read on here :)
Author's Response: Aw, I feel honoured! (seriously) Thank you so much! I've been working on a new fic, I hope it'll be enjoyable too ^^ and I'm gonna try get started on that sequel to valentines day ;)
Date: 06/16/08 05:07 pm Title: V
i think someone is starting to feel closer to being a brother.
Author's Response: Maybe... maybe not ;P
Date: 06/16/08 03:59 pm Title: V
I waaaant Bill and Tom to kiss (a)
Author's Response: Oh it will happen, don't worry ;)
Date: 06/16/08 03:10 pm Title: V
ooooooooooooh i love your story.
im not even kidding, yous are all i read.
Author's Response: aw that's nice to hear :D Thank you ^^
Date: 06/16/08 01:16 pm Title: V
yo....
it is so bitchy slutty yo....
i like it...
danke babe
^^
Author's Response: Haha, glad you do ^^
Date: 06/16/08 09:16 am Title: V
Okay, apparently I'm obsessed with this, because I just read this latest chapter again. Have you read it? It's great stuff. It's by this girl called Sapere aude. LOL. Kidding, kidding. :DDDD
No seriously I keep finding new stuff to mention. So I think this chapter is speaking to me on a particularly deeper level, because not only does it show Bill does have a conscience, but it shows him completely being a hypocrite.
I mean he tells Tom to basically just get over stuff--that shit is just not that important to be dwelling on--yet he actually took time seeking Tom out in order to apologize! Then, once he found him, was actually trying to make him understand how Bill's psyche works, and was also trying to make eye contact.
Amazing how Bill couldn't see that his actions completely belie his words. Actions do speak louder than them, after all, right?
I just squealed a little on the inside as Bill, mentally bitching all the while, braved a crowd of party-goers who had the nerve not to move out of his way, got "accosted" by a love struck Georg, and still didn't get distracted from his mission. Which was to find Tom.
Bill, honey? I think some part of you does find Tom interesting and that part is already smitten with him.
*bounces with excitement* I can't wait to see what you come up with next. :D
Author's Response: hahaha, you're really getting everything! And yes, actions do speak louder than words, and I purposely made Georg stop Bill but not make it distract him from his 'mission'... if that made sense oO Anyway, you got it all right :D And I've already written the next chapter, but I'm not sure whether I like it, so I'm gonna come back to it in a while, read through it again, and then make the changes it needs before I post it ;P
Date: 06/16/08 08:32 am Title: V
Ewwww! Please don't ever do het sex. Even the mention of a girl in a fic is a total turn off.
Lol @ georg. What a lewzer.
Haha, Bill is GUILTY! That's so cute! get over it babe, you like him. Accept it, and I quote, "move on".
Author's Response: Haha, I can't stand het, and I'm never going to write het sex, so don't worry about any detailed boy/girl sex appearing in this fic, or in any of my fics, it won't happen :) Thansk for reviewing ^^
Date: 06/16/08 12:21 am Title: V
Naughty Sexy Bitchy Bill ;)
Danm it that sucks that we are not alowed to hate gisele Grrrrr >=(
If tom threw himslef at me id be more than happy =)
Neways update soon :)
Author's Response: Oh you are allowed to hate her! I hate her too :D Glad you're liking it! I'll update asap ^^
Date: 06/15/08 10:13 pm Title: V
lol Bill! you have a conscience afterall ^_~
Author's Response: Don't we all ^^
Date: 06/15/08 09:16 pm Title: V
Oh yeah. I also forgot to mention that this fic is putting dirty thoughts into my head involving possible scenarios between the boys--and it's not even full on smut! It's just visions of them fighting about something and suddenly they're sharing this slow, openmouthed kiss against a wall. And Tom isn't used to having these feelings for a guy so he's freaking out and pushing Bill away but Bill is just as angrily yanking him back and it sort of just goes on you know? Hot. So I blame you entirely. Your fic is making my brain just fill with sexy images of them.
Thank you. Seriously. LOL!
If I lurk under your bed tonight will that encourage you to update soon? I know you just did, but this fic is like crack. Seriously. It's that addictive.
I simply love your stories.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! Hahaha, I'm really glad you're liking it! I can't wait to get to the 'intimate', 'closer' and 'smutty' parts either xD I really enjoy writing this fic and I've been itching to write more since the moment I posted chapter 5. I'm taking a break from studying right now, so I might as well start with chapter 6 ;)