Date: 07/05/08 01:18 pm Title: VII
I pretty much don't like Bill.
Yeah, that's it.
Date: 07/05/08 06:13 am Title: VII
YESS!! I'm so attracted to the Bill you've written. I'm so glad you're updating again. As always, your fics make me so happy! :) Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story :) I'll update asap ^^
Date: 07/04/08 03:12 pm Title: VII
Are you kidding me?! It was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G-!-!-!
Author's Response: WOOT! Thanks :D
Date: 07/04/08 12:23 pm Title: VII
:D *happy dance* Yesh.. I do indeed like this. ^.^
Author's Response: *joins in happy dance* :D
Date: 07/04/08 07:20 am Title: VII
Oh Bill is such a little bitch!
but I love it.
but then I wanna slap him in the face.
Author's Response: Haha, I think so does Tom :P
Date: 07/03/08 08:46 pm Title: VII
I don't know what it is about this, but I can't seem to get enough! Haha. It's great.
Author's Response: I don't know what it is either, but I'm glad it has that effect on you! :D
Date: 07/03/08 02:33 pm Title: VII
OH YAY... a new chapter!
:DDD
This chapter was definitely not crap... and I want ice cream now.
:/
Author's Response: Hahaha, thank you! *feeds you ice-cream* :D
Date: 07/03/08 01:21 pm Title: IV
you keep describing bill with streaks i think he got rid of them tho.
Author's Response: When I wrote the first chapter he still had streaks, and I haven't described his hair with streaks in any other chapter as far as I know ;)
Date: 07/03/08 10:23 am Title: VII
NOOOOOO I wanna read more I really like this story.~_~
Author's Response: Nice to hear! I'll update as soon as I can ^^
Date: 07/03/08 09:15 am Title: VII
"Tom quickly disappeared into the cabin before anyone realized Bill belonged to him."
Favourite. Line. Ever.
OMG, Bill probably did pick it out for him in RL.
Aw, Tomi, I can't believe you thought he would just open up for u like that! You have to work a bit more with him before that happens, babe.
Author's Response: Hahaha, exactly. Poor Tomi, he'll go crazy if Bill carries on that way xD
Date: 07/03/08 07:30 am Title: VII
*joins happy dance* Great chapter :D I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update asap ^^
Date: 07/03/08 07:18 am Title: VII
Oh, that was a slap in the face! The chemestry between Bill and Tom is totally working in this fic, though! Every time they talk I can see them ripping their clothes off and just doing it right then and there. But yes, it would be too soon.
And by the way; I can't believe I missed the previous update!! I was so happy when I saw it on the most recent list, then even more when I saw two new chapters. GoodieGoodieGoodie! :D
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you're liking it so much! And yes, the sexual tension will someday drive them mad MUAHAHA
Date: 07/03/08 05:11 am Title: VII
Babe, I just love that story.
i enjoyed every word of it.
Please beauty give us more!!
Author's Response: I will as soon as possible ^^ Glad you're liking it!
Date: 07/03/08 02:07 am Title: VII
Oh, the diva goes shopping, that was fun. He's sure to draw a lot of attention.
And spoonful of orgasm, fabulous.
I wonder what happen between bill and his dad that got him snap at the question.
Author's Response: Nice to see you enjoyed the chapter :)
Date: 07/02/08 11:45 pm Title: VII
Dude, this is awesome. XD
So glad I found it!
And, bitchy!Bill is the greatest.. ;D
Especially bitchy slutty Bill. XDDD
Author's Response: Hahaha, and I'm glad you're liking it! :D
Date: 07/02/08 11:16 pm Title: VII
*jumps up and down* yay you updated =DD
Its short but it was awsome ;)
But dont leave us waiting to long now i almost died without this story =)
Author's Response: Nice to see the story was missed :D
Date: 07/02/08 07:52 pm Title: VII
AWESOME CHAPTER!!
And that shirt is hot, then again anything on Tom is hot... :)
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, Tom's the man, I hope I will marry him someday :) HAHAHA *carries on dreaming*
Date: 07/02/08 07:45 pm Title: VII
i can so imagine bill wearing that boots and, oh my, it would be so geil xD
i love bill in this storyyyy
uptade asap =D
PS: rofl. toms shirt!!! xaxa
Author's Response: Hahaha, I totally couldn't believe my eyes when I saw those pictures xD But I like Tom wearing unsual stuff. Stuff that's not Tom-like ^^ I'm glad you're liking the story and I'll update asap! ;)
Date: 07/02/08 07:31 pm Title: VII
GOD!i adore Bill in this so much. :DDD
I thought that was the shirt ;)
Loved it.
And bill's boots. ^_^
Thanks for updating.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! :D Thanks a lot ^^
Date: 07/02/08 07:19 pm Title: VII
I don't think they were OOC. After all they were forced to spend time together by Gordon. I was so proud of Tom for not jumping to obey Bill at the beginning, but then Bill totally got him back. *sigh* One point for Tom, Five for Bill. LOL
I still would have slapped him though. But then Tom would look like a barbarian if he did that--and I can so see Bill working the whole "victim" angle with the parents.
Maybe he can trying suffocating him with a pillow during the night? LOL These are just suggestions for when Bill actually does drive Tom into madness--because I have a feeling it's going to be inevitable. But you may have a completely different vision.
The ice cream scene was interesting. I think Bill totally feels Tom is this complete prude and he likes to fuck with him. The moaning for example. He didn't have to do that even if he doesn't eat ice cream often. But it was making Tom uncomfortable, so he did it. And same with the high heeled boots. He enjoys shocking people. Tom especially.
I wonder what else Bill will do to fuck with Tom's mind.
I also wonder/hope that Tom will give some of his own back. It's sort of like this strange contest of wills between them, and right now, Bill is totally winning. Tom's got to keep up, but Bill is so fast that I'm thinking he's pretty much done it all already/seen it all already that Tom is way, way out of his league. LOL!
If I were Tom, I'd go to Gordon and be all: "What have you done bringing this guy into our happy home?"
*giggles*
So yeah. Total contest of wills. It's totally devoid of any sexual attraction right now, too, so it's interesting to see how that will develop slowly but surely. I kind of don't see either of them going peacefully.
Then again, what do I know? Both of them could be flirting now in some sort of bizarre way, deep down enough that the two of them don't even realize it. Flirting isn't all about smiles and giggles and blushing cheeks. Sometimes it's raw and troubling and a completely mind fucking experience. An experience that leaves you waking up and going: "What in the blue fucking fuck just did happen?" And you're thoroughly fucked and left with nothing but an empty bottle of tequila and your memories.
Not that that has happened to me. I wish it did though. *sighs wistfully* That's just what I think Bill is going to do to Tom's mental health. He's going to fuck him up.
And I can't wait.
I adore you. Seriously. Your ideas are a breath of fresh air and I enjoy sucking up every bit of it.
And if that sounded in any way dirty, I completely meant it to. *cackles and runs away screaming into the darkness*
More, more, more!!!!
Author's Response: I love your reviews! Hahahaha. Yeah, Bill's gonna have quite a big impact on Tom I guess, for everything else you're just gonna have to wait and see ;P I'm glad you liked the chapter and I hope you will be pleased with following chapters! ^^