Date: 07/14/08 09:09 pm Title: IV
*He’s never had somebody from Brazil before…
-> Omg, Bill..
*“Don’t laugh but… your stepbrother is hot.”
-> Duh, of course he is
*“You like her or you want to fuck her?”
-> Lol
*“Look, I know you want to get into my pants, but it won’t happen ok? So I suggest you go find Tom and get into his pants, he’ll let you.”
-> xD wahahaha, nice line !
*“Are you that desperate to get fucked by me?” “Yes,” -> xD
*“You’re a slut, you know.”
-> You kinda are too, Bill. :P
@ end notes : I don't hate her, I'd like to get fucked by Bill too, yes and by Tom too. Now I'm sounding like a slut, but hey, they're really hot and good looking and sexy and.. after all :)
Date: 07/14/08 08:57 pm Title: III
* Nice phone conversation with Andi.
And poor Bill, horny and not getting any action, while Andreas is.
*Okay, Bill, now you've made your entrance, happy?
* Tssk tssk tssk, Bill, Bill, Bill, you're quite picky, you know?
Liked it!
Date: 07/14/08 08:48 pm Title: II
*Bill is so hitting on José :P
*Woops, Simone saw him hitting on the gardener :O
*Tom asks if he may throw a pool party, but he already set up everything, nice one Tom, I don't even have to try something like that with my mom and especially not with my dad :P
*“All I’m looking for is a good fuck, and I really wouldn’t mind him doing me,”
-> Bill is pretty straight forward :D
*Bill converts straight people into gay ones or what? :P
Nice chapter!
Date: 07/14/08 08:35 pm Title: I
Great great great!
I already love this so far!
Bill is being a complete bitch, so well-described.
It's funny!
*reads on*
Date: 07/14/08 07:22 pm Title: I
i'm hooked from the first chapter! i love it
Date: 07/14/08 04:42 am Title: VII
I'm dying for the next chapter!!-))))))
and catch my great respect, because I know how hard sometimes writing in foreign language can be_))))
Date: 07/12/08 09:40 pm Title: VII
I love this! It's fun to read a fic where Tom's a good boy whereas Bill is the mean, hormonal one. Do you speak Spanish or do you get the sentences from someone who does? Cause I was expecting bad Spanish and it's really, really good!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, I speak Spanish, I'm just not very good with the accents ;P My laptop has pretty much died, for good this time, some guy's trying to fix it, I hope I'll have it back soon so I can update :(
Date: 07/12/08 07:28 pm Title: VII
I love you! This fic is great!
More now please :)
Date: 07/10/08 10:50 am Title: VII
Bitchy Bill is really something. I love this story. Update soon, yeah?
Date: 07/08/08 07:04 am Title: VII
it's great!!!! bill's characher is amazing, really! I'm waiting for another chapter-))))
Date: 07/06/08 03:43 pm Title: VI
bill/josé pairing is so hot! i'm glad you don't rush anything
Date: 07/06/08 03:26 pm Title: V
lol georg!!! i imagine him smiling dumbly !
Date: 07/06/08 02:57 pm Title: III
i like this chapter...i'm full of apprehension now lol
Date: 07/06/08 02:46 pm Title: II
wonderful wonderful!! it's getting more and more interesting! i'm all excited already lol bill's just impredicable and it makes him the boss lol
Date: 07/06/08 02:30 pm Title: I
OMG!! i love it when you guys write about bill being a diva! Tom is soooo polite, well manered and simple. He doesn't give sharp answers nor sarcastical ones.boy ,you are an aazing author you never cease to surprise me!
Date: 07/05/08 06:00 pm Title: VII
Bill is such a shit! :O I mean... he MUST have a reason for his behaviour, I can't believe he's just this bad by nature... you HAVE to explain it! :O I mean, Tom's patience must be wearing out soon, and I hope he'll throw a historic tantrum right at Bill's face! He looks like one who'd been spoiled ever since he'd been born as for a replacement of... something? Please untie this knot in my head O_O
Date: 07/05/08 05:44 pm Title: VI
Ew, Bill! He's a total, HUGE skinny shit! :O I believe there MUST be a reason for him to be like that, isn't it? Maybe something in his past... because he can't treat Tom like that just because :O ps. Bill/José must be hot!
Date: 07/05/08 05:16 pm Title: VII
hihi, Bill really knows how to get what he wants XD
I predicted that they will drive each other mad :-p
Can't wait to she how the tesion billed between them and about all the rest to of course ;-)
so please write some more *begs*