Date: 07/19/08 05:05 am Title: VIII
I missed you so much!! I'm glad you updated even if it was just a little bit.
Author's Response: aw, thank you! I'm glad to be back :D Next one'll be longer ;)
Date: 07/19/08 04:30 am Title: VIII
Bill make a move!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xD
Date: 07/19/08 02:36 am Title: VIII
Ooh! Nice nice nice! I'm really getting into this story!
Author's Response: I'm glad you are! ^^
Date: 07/18/08 10:35 pm Title: VIII
Very interesting chapter. Very interesting. It's so because something is starting to happen even though there is a long way to go yet. :D
Even if Bill was asleep when he propositioned Tom, obviously on some level, it's in his thoughts. It may be buried deep down, but it's there. And now, those thoughts and ideas are now in Tom's head. He's freaked out by them and vehemently denying any interest, but it's there. After Bill puts a thought like that in your head, how can one not wonder or be a bit curious?
And by the way, is Bill going to initiate Tom and show him how good it feels to have something up his ass? Because that right there? Is a hot image. Especially if Tom is still fighting it. There is just not enough Top!Bill in this fandom. *shakes head sadly*
I find it interesting that they are both asleep on Tom's bed. I know nothing is going to happen now...but I imagine that it will be a bit awkward for them once they wake up "together". Unless you're planning to skip that part. :)
So yeah, the seed's been planted (that sounds vaguely dirty, lol) and something's starting to happen--and I can't wait.
Keep up the great work!
And yes, more. Please. Soon. God, I wish you could write 24/7. I wish I could PAY you to write 24/7. Why can't I win the fucking lottery? *whines*
Author's Response: Your reviews always make me smile :D I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and hopefully I'll be able to update tomorrow ^^
Date: 07/18/08 10:22 pm Title: VIII
No, this was totally great. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you ^^
Date: 07/18/08 09:29 pm Title: VIII
LOL Things are starting to get hot.
Nice chapter
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 07/18/08 09:22 pm Title: VIII
... He never tried on the shirt!
Oh Tomi. Why are you resisting him? TAKE ADVANTAGE OF HIM RIGHT NOW! He's already on your bed!
Date: 07/18/08 08:09 pm Title: VIII
Wheres the rest of it?!?!?!?!?! lol...thbis is really good, i like the role reversal. Bill being the slut and tom looking for a relationship haha!! Never happen in real life, but im liking it in this story. Good grammar and point of view as well! Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you're liking it! :D
Date: 07/18/08 07:55 pm Title: VIII
You really going to slap him Tom? I think not...
Date: 07/18/08 06:30 pm Title: VIII
haha! lol! oops i think tom neds to come out the closet...more please!!
Date: 07/18/08 06:16 pm Title: VIII
I'm so sorry what happened to your laptop, the same thing happened to me, though it was before I came so attached to my laptop so not that much disappeared.
I can't believe how you feel, all those stories and videos *cries for you* I would go depressed if that would happen to me! I'm really sorry for you!
Well, awesome chapter, you sure are like one of the best authors I know. I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed so much, but I'm a lurking reader who adore you :D
I won't nag on you to write a new chapter soon, get everything going and stuff, we will still be here waiting for you, no matter how long it will take :D
Date: 07/18/08 06:16 pm Title: VIII
I'm not sure Tom would slap Bill if he made a move xD.
Nice chapter, i'm waiting for more. (:
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll update as soon as I can ;)
Date: 07/18/08 06:09 pm Title: VIII
I liked that! I actually thought Bill would make a move! I do enjoy this story, bitchy Bill is absolutely brilliant and Tom is always on edge around him which just makes it so hilarious!! I love how Bill is all corrupt and Tom is pure cos in real life it's kind of, the opposite so to see this is refreshing xD More please xD
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you're liking it! I'll update asap ^^
Date: 07/18/08 05:52 pm Title: VIII
I liked it =D Haha, I love the last thing Bill said. I have a feeling that he's gonna be making Tom feel good pretty soon ;)
Author's Response: Haha, thanks, glad you liked it ^^ Poor Tomi, he doesn't wanna feel good :p
Date: 07/15/08 03:48 pm Title: VI
" Hi eyes were barely open, his hair was a mess and his head was throbbing. "
his*
thats at one of the first lines of the story.
i really like this!
i hope you continue it.
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing it out ^^
Date: 07/15/08 11:42 am Title: VI
LOL I grow fond of Bill with every chapter you post.
Nice work.
Date: 07/14/08 09:47 pm Title: VII
*“I can’t be bothered to bond right now, have fun shopping.” Bill raised a surprised brow. “Excuse me?” “I can’t be bothered,” Tom mumbled, stifling a yawn. “We can bond and ‘build sandcastles’ some other time.”
-> bahahah, in your face Kaulitz xD
*Now Bill's happy, he can go shopping :P
*Shopping with Bill and Tom is FUN ! :P
*“You want me to feed you?”
“Mhmm,” he moaned, closing his eyes as he let the ice dissolve on his tongue.
“Do you have to do that?” "What?" “Have an orgasm with every bite?” “I don’t eat ice-cream often, so I want to fully enjoy it the times I do, now shut up and let me have another orgasm.”
-> wahahah xD
* Poor Tom, that's so sad.
*Urgh, stupid bitchy Bill. Just fuckin' tell him what happened with your dad, dammit!
@ end notes : Oowh, THAT shirt :) it really is different from the things Tom usually wears, I don't know if I like it or not.
I still love this story!
Date: 07/14/08 09:34 pm Title: VI
*“Tom, I can turn any guy gay, you should know that by now,”
-> That's exactly what I was thinking.
*Oeh, José did Bills back with sun lotion
* Bill, you fuckin' tease!
*“Please don’t tell me I’m turning you gay too.” “What the fuck? No!”
-> xD wahahaha !
*Good thing Tom, don't bother putting any more time in Bill, he obviously is to busy with hitting on that José guy and being full of himself.
@ end notes : I try to be patient :)
The thinking of Tom at the end turned out pretty clear to me.
Date: 07/14/08 09:20 pm Title: V
*No they did not! Bill and Gisele did have sex, come on, stupid Bill! And she wasn't even that good. Tsssk
*“She’s so… dumb, and she’s obviously a slut.” “So are you,” Tom muttered. “I know,” Bill replied soberly. “But you don’t fancy me.”
-> NICE
*So why the hell did he regret it then?
-> Maybe because he's falling for Tom but he doesn't know it yet, and he's not the kind of guy to have a relationship.
*Exit Gisele? :P
*reads on*