Date: 08/08/08 04:43 pm Title: X
You are the most amazing fic writer ever.
Date: 08/08/08 04:18 pm Title: X
HAHAHHA, that ending was so funny, i feel bad for tom. that must be awkward. lol yay for updating asap. i also hope that tom and bill get together, asap. lol can't wait to read more!!!
Date: 08/08/08 03:40 pm Title: X
Ohhhh...so short. Sapere, you're killing me here lately. :) It's just your stories are so good and I want more, more, more. I keep pushing the down button on my computer in the hopes of finding more fic! But short is better than nothing, so I AM grateful, don't think that I'm not. At least you are updating. That's more than what I can say for other authors lately.
But more! I need more! Of all your stuff. It's like crack, and you're my dealer, and I need a fix. Fix me, woman! *cuddles*
Okay, the story....OMG! I was dying when Bill just walked in on Tom in the shower. The guy just has no sense of personal space or boundaries. He just waltzes right on in. I'm surprised Tom hasn't told him off about it or started locking his door. But why should he? it's Tom's house, right? Bill just doesn't respect that. LOL!
Maybe Tom should just start walking in on Bill as payback--but I don't think Bill--as an exibitionist--would really be bothered by it. Poor Tomi. Stuck with this crazy guy who just saw his bits in the shower. *cackles*
But...I wonder if Bill liked what he saw? How it compares to Jose's or whatever you know? LOL And I'm also wondering if Jose and Bill finished what they had started--or was the mood completely ruined when they heard Gordon. Wonder if they'll try a second attempt later or will Jose be too spooked?
Just my mind rambling with questions.
So yeah, still loving this. I think things are starting to heat up now, obviously, but still at a good steady pace that is realistic. Bill and Tom are not as disgusted by each other as they'd like the other to believe--even if the fools themselves haven't realized this yet.
It's all building to something delicious I can tell. And when they finally do something--just kiss even--it will be something to remember. I have complete faith in you to make this story believable, hot, humorous and entertaining. So far you have and it can only get better.
I'm going to make you my third wife. I'm already getting married to Majestrix and Haylz. But that doesn't mean I adore you any less.
Now please please write more! I know your time will be even more cut down when you head off to university, so please don't leave us hanging.
*squishes and offers sweets*
Author's Response: Your reviews always make me grin. I'm sorry it's so short, I'll update this as soon as possible and make it longer. I won't leave you hanging when I'm off to uni! I'll probably need some time to settle in, but I don't think I'll last long without writing ;) Oh, and I'd love to be your third wife :D
Date: 08/08/08 03:18 pm Title: X
hahaha!!!! LOL!!!! loved it...more soon please!!!
Date: 08/08/08 02:14 pm Title: X
yay! 10 points to tom for saying 'get out' instead 'get in'))))
Date: 08/08/08 01:56 pm Title: X
this chap was great!!! =D jijiji xD WAS SO FUNNY...ROLF xDDDDDD
please more ;D!
Date: 08/08/08 01:52 pm Title: X
hahhaa nice :) I love ur fic so much :)
I love all of them
Date: 08/08/08 01:44 pm Title: X
Im a new reader to this and I love it!
update soon please!
Date: 08/08/08 01:43 pm Title: X
!! WHY WOULD TOMI SAY NO XD
Date: 08/08/08 01:27 pm Title: X
:O okay, Bill is the BOSS of the queen of the bitches! He was about to probably loose anything by disappointing everyone like that, and still he hadn't cringed even a bit... well, what the hell, he is a big shit :O I hope Tom will really do something (or maybe nothing, that's what pisses Bill off the most :D) to yank that huge mask off Bill's stupid face, so that he'll show a bit of a gratitude or simply a person who isn't that shitty! Jeez, now I feel better that I exploded all my feelings about this fic here XD jeez I hope you'll update soon, this story really keeps me tense! Can't wait for the moment Bill will suffer :D
Date: 08/08/08 01:11 pm Title: X
This wasn't boring... And that ending was SO far being just 'entertaining'.
That was great... I'm looking forward to another update of this, as always!!!
Date: 08/08/08 01:02 pm Title: VII
great story so far. i ah-dor it.
Date: 08/08/08 12:31 pm Title: X
hahahaha!XD it was hilarious when Bill walked in on tTom *coughs* you know... loved it!
Date: 08/08/08 12:03 pm Title: X
Tom should have let Bill help him out with his erection.
God that was a good chapter.
Date: 08/08/08 10:38 am Title: X
Oh they certainly weren't boring words!!! Interesting, captivating, heart warming, hilarious are what I'd describe them as; especially the shower scene! Oh that was priceless!!! I sense a mastercard advert ;)
Looking forward to more!!!
Date: 08/08/08 10:36 am Title: X
Oh Bill is bad! And I have a feeling that there's quite a few that agreed with Bill, just let him take care of it! ;)
Date: 08/08/08 10:27 am Title: X
Wah thank you for updating *_*
I really love this fic and I've been missing it :)
Lovely as always! *_*
Date: 08/08/08 09:22 am Title: X
LOL I actually thought Tom would take up Bill's offer. But he's a tough guy xDDDD
Date: 08/08/08 09:02 am Title: X
Ow, I have been away, so I was missing some chapters xD
Oh, so excited to see how this turns out! :D