Date: 08/26/08 11:03 pm Title: X
cant wait to read more!!!! please update soon!!!! -)
Date: 08/18/08 05:08 pm Title: X
Great chapter :D I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Date: 08/15/08 04:32 am Title: X
lol, it may have been short but it was great! I'm glad Tom didn't tell on Bill, and the end scene was just too freaking funny. glad you plan to update asap anyway though. :)
Date: 08/12/08 06:17 am Title: X
hahaha!!! hilarious! bitchy!bill's the best!
Date: 08/12/08 06:10 am Title: IX
OMG!!! i'm glad i'm late to catch up with the story! that cliffhanger 's a big one!lol
Bill's soooo meanie!but i love him more when he is like that: spoiled brat!
Date: 08/11/08 11:40 am Title: X
yes! please update soon! ^_^
....wow that kinda sounded like an orgasm...
Date: 08/10/08 11:36 pm Title: X
LMAO that really funny!
wow bill is a horney little thing :P love it
Date: 08/10/08 04:59 pm Title: X
*gigglefit*
poor tomi =P i'd DIE if some1 walked in on ME like that! =0 (although i DO have a feeling that tom's hard-on was caused by his soon to be step brother to begin with, even if his conciouse mind isn't going to admit that anytime soon)
pretty please update soon? (A)
and pretty please add more sexy goodness to the upcomming chapters? (A) cause i loved it *dreams back*
Date: 08/10/08 04:16 am Title: X
Well, look at the bright side: at least you updated &^^&
Date: 08/10/08 01:33 am Title: X
Haha xD
I liked it ^_^
Keep up the good work ^_^
Date: 08/10/08 12:58 am Title: X
XD that was a good 1180 words. Tom's reaction is superb. Can't wait for more.
Date: 08/09/08 02:58 am Title: X
ROFL. You are brilliant. I've been waiting for an update for this for so long! Thank you so much :) I'll be replying to your epic email soon ;)
Date: 08/09/08 01:55 am Title: X
YAY! You finally updated! Whoo...man, I came on everyday to see if you updated XD I can hardly wait for another chapter :)
Date: 08/08/08 09:09 pm Title: X
Lol for being short it was really great!
Date: 08/08/08 08:48 pm Title: X
thanks for this it made my night!! :D
Date: 08/08/08 07:58 pm Title: X
Awesome as always.
Can't wait for more (:
Date: 08/08/08 05:20 pm Title: X
-lmao- Mwahahaha! xD
Thats was soo fun xD omg, your so god o_o
I love you! This fic is awsome! xD
Hope you'll post more soon!
Date: 08/08/08 05:18 pm Title: X
*Could have, but he hadn’t.
-> Tom is too good for this world :)
*It had seemed like the first time he had actually seen Bill.
-> Finally! :)
*Well, well, well, Bill knows guilt.
*Haha, that was to be expected, Tom jerking off in the shower and Bill barging in. :P xD
*“You know, I could help you with that,” Lol, horny Bill :P
*He was surprised to find it standing, proud and hard.
-> Great line to end the chapter with :)
Short but nice chapter!