I'm in love with andreas!!! and I'd gladly slap bill at the moment XD
btw the chapter was great! I loved it!
Update as soon as you can please!! ^^

Give me more now!!! I want more now!!! I really like your fics.

I loved it :D I hope you continue soon!! *Billi is jealous xD Muahahaha xD*
xx Chi ^^

YAY!

hahahahaha. bwahahahahahaa.

Ooo!! Bill's gettin' jealous :)


Bill flipped him off and stalked away into the house.

just like Billa :) Poor Tom though, hanging around with two best friends who have great benefits to each other :P

Well I must say that I am not minding Andi in this fic, so that's a testament to your writing abilities b/c I usually loathe him. LOL.

I think it's because he's not making snap judgments just because Bill demands that he make them about Tom, you know? I mean, usually I wouldn't begrudge someone for sticking by their friend when they feel they've been wronged, but in this case, Bill is just making all that shit up. Tom hasn't actually done anything to warrant Andi to be pissed on Bill's behalf. I hope I just made sense b/c I'm too tired to go back and re-read. LOL

So I find it a bit interesting that Andi is so into Tom and even more interesting that he actually got a bit annoyed at Bill for chasing him off. Part of me just wanted Tom to snap at Bill to go fuck off or something in the pool b/c Bill was acting like a right brat, but Tom is just too nice. *sigh* I feel really badly for him. I also notice his feelings coming out more and more--albeit unbeknownst to Tom--because let's face it. If Tom had no interest in Bill, by now he'd just have told Bill to go fuck himself and gone about his business. But Tom is sort of moping around a little and wondering why Bill hates him so much and what is he doing wrong? He wouldn't do that if he didn't care about Bill in some way. :D

I like that Andi appreciates Tom's niceness and hotness, but I also wonder if some part of Andi is just going after Tom to get Bill to admit some things or does Andi really, REALLY like Tom? Just curious. :)

And Bill storming into the house after Andi accusing him of liking Tom was priceless--and a big tipoff. I have a feeling though that things will just get harder from here on out though. Bill is one fiesty bitch and he'd probably rather have his balls cut off than admit liking Tom in any way or fashion at this point. *sigh* Silly Billy.

Now, I'm more curious as to Tom finding Andi cute. That means Tom is opening his mind up even further because he never showed interest in guys before, so that was a small breakthrough. :) And I also wondering if there will be any Tom/Andi kissage in the future. Not that I'm a Tom/Andi fan, mind you, but I think it fits the plot here you know and I'm not insane... yes, I predominantly love Tom/Bill, but I can take a little other action on the side if it means bringing T/B closer together in the end. You know? And poor Tom needs some loving. Maybe not sex loving but he needs someone to appreciate him. *pets Tomi*

Maybe if Bill walks in on them kissing or something he'll be forced to jump into action. Or claw Tom's eyes out. Whichever. ;D

Keep up the great work, chica! And I read your bio and think it's sweet that you and your brother are so close. A lot of people don't have close relationships with their siblings and I think it's sad. I mean, who else are you going to gang up against your parents with? LOL! I am sadly an only child but my friend is close to her sister like that (twins) and I always was jealous you know?

Also, there is absolutely nothing wrong with your hips! You have an awesome curvy figure and a beach bod that people would kill for. If I were a guy? I would totally go for you. Seriously. :D Embrace your figure, my friend, before old age eventually catches up to you. LOL!

Author's Response: Hey! Well I have to say I'm glad you're starting to not mind Andi being in this fic! And yes that first paragraph made sense to me haha. And you're right about that! You're right, Tom is just the same as Bill. They both claim not to like each other but Tom keeps thinking about Bill wondering what he was doing to make Bill not like him, if he truly didn't give a damn he wouldn't care why Bill didn't like him. But we know Tomi is a nice guy and he wants his dad to be happy so he tries his best :) Bill on the other hand is just very stubborn and clearly in denial and turns into a vicious bitch when he's (clearly) confused, even though he might not realize it himself lol. & yes, Tom saying Bill is beautiful and thinking Andi is cute & wanting Andi to like him/pay some attention to him... hm, Tomi, are you starting to play for the other team? :p About the Tom/Andi kissage... you'll just have to wait and see ;) I agree that Tom needs some loving, the poor guy is being kinda neglected! Thanks for the compliment by the way, I know nobody is perfect and I embrace my figure as much I can, but sometimes those hips... *waves angry fist at them* & I'm very grateful for the good relationship I have with my brother! Mind you it wasn't always that way LOL Anyway, thanks a lot for reviewing! :D

Oh Andreas... I can totally see you playing some trick on your bestfriend...
Nice chapter, I'm really interested to see what will happen now, I have a feeling that Andreas woke u something inside Bill...

Author's Response: Well I sure hope he did because Bill's got a big, fat IN DENIAL tattooed on his forehead! Glad you liked it :)

This is sooo nice! Great storyyy!)))Thank you very much!)))))))))

Author's Response: Thank you! :)