Date: 06/22/09 05:24 pm Title: XVI
Aww, Andi's leaving again, he begun to grow on me^^ You work as a photographer! that's SOOO Cool! :D
Date: 06/22/09 03:28 pm Title: XVI
Yes!
Bill needs to give Tom a chance. Tom will blow his mind (and maybe Bill will blow Tom xD)
Waitin' for next part
Date: 06/22/09 03:23 pm Title: XVI
Oh my God, please please do not tell me that Tom is actually going to make those fliers. *rocks in corner* Please don't let Tom lose his spine! *wails*
Okay, I love how Andi is very perceptive and he possibly has hit the nail on the head regarding Bill's attitude towards Tom...either that or Bill is just a psycho bitch. LOL! I also love how Tom is just confused when Andi gives him his advice. Tom, confused and Bill, bitchy. See? And you thought that you had lost your characterizations! You're doing an excellent job of detailing everyone and everything, so I wouldn't worry. And trust me...if I thought they seemed OOC I would definitely mention it--even if it's something I don't understand and need clarification from you. Because you know what your characters are thinking while we, the readers, don't.
So Tom's not the only one afraid huh? Bill probably deep down realizes that Tom is a really nice, great guy and he probably (maybe really a tiny part of him) holds Tom in high regard.
So that same tiny part of himself probably feels that he isn't worth Tom's time maybe? That he doesn't deserve Tom?
And at this point I'd most likely agree with Bill if that is what he's secretly thinking b/c he's treated Tom horribly. Oh my God. I just want Tom to get some loving. LOL. Maybe a nice girl he can hook up with at the party for some meaningless fling? (Or a nice guy since he's now kind of swingin' that way too. Wait. NO. Girls, yes. But the only guy Tom should be with--like truly with with, is Bill. Does that make me sound weird?) So yeah have somebody flirt with Tom or something, Sapere. *pouts* He's being so mistreated in his own home!
And maybe Bill will get jealous. *whistles innocently*
Oh whatever you do come up with, I know it will be awesome as usual. I love your stories and your characters and even though this Bill makes me want to slap him silly, I know deep down there's a damaged guy and the nails come out when he's feeling especially vulnerable.
Or maybe he's really just a bitch.
Either way, he needs to appreciate Tom more. Or have angry sex with him. *shrugs*
I swear you are melting my brain, woman! :D
Have fun at the event! Well..it's probably almost over now since I think you're what? Seven or eight hours ahead of us in the US?
Date: 06/22/09 03:02 pm Title: XVI
I loved it :D I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 06/22/09 03:00 pm Title: XVI
andreas is hilarious, tom is hot (can't believe i said that, and bill's a bitch.
nuff said
xD nah, I love the characters and the plot and everything, and i can't wait for the next chapter ^^
Date: 06/22/09 02:45 pm Title: XVI
LMAO, poor Tom. Bill is simply hilarious at the end, even if he is in demanding mode.
Date: 06/22/09 02:38 pm Title: XVI
hehehe, oh damn I missed a few of the other chapters before this, so I had to go back and read them :) hehehe, oh I just love Bill :) greatest test alive!! lol, poor Tom, and probably Simone too, what have the gotten themselves into? *laughs wildly* but oh :( Andi left... :( I luv him... he was having so much fun and keeping Bill happy and getting Tom horny...Oooo, did I ever mention how I love how you didn't make Andi an exclusive friend? So many times it seems like he is just either Bill's or Tom's friend, and I love how he sort of ended up as both :) but I want him to come back :) he's so much fun :) hehehehe, getting Bill jealous :)
“Oh, they're not random, Tom. They have to pass my test before they get invited.”
Tom shook his head, confused. “Test?”
Bill held up a finger, “are they good looking enough.” He added another, “and do they speak a language I understand.”
Mwahahaha, love it :)
“God,” he breathed, “just thinking about what he must be like in bed makes me so hard,”
Yes I do love Andi here, he's like a lovely sort of messed up matchmaker for the sort of weird and horny! LOVE him :) *squeezes* for the next part!!! Yea!!!!
Date: 06/22/09 01:34 pm Title: XVI
Haha lmao, the part about them spraking a language that Bill understands proper amused me.
I love his attitude so much in this, it's so suiting and appealing (to me, that just sounds weird saying that bitchy is appealing). When they get together (which will be soon) I really hope Bill's still a bitch, to everyone but Tom.
I don't know whether or not to be happy or sad about Andi leaving. He adds spice, he's cute and he brings out what I love in Tom and Bill, but he's fucked Bill and almost fucked Tom, which is both good and bad I suppose.
Still, he's coming back eventually, yes?
Orrr I can't wait until the next chapter, I'm thinking I'm gonna be howling at Bill giving out the flyers.
Date: 06/22/09 01:27 pm Title: XVI
Bill is gunna cause some trouble! xD
Have fun Tom!
Date: 06/22/09 01:23 pm Title: XVI
:) aah it's good. thanks for updating.
xx
Date: 06/22/09 01:14 pm Title: XVI
Ahh, one good thing about living in the UK; there will either be something good to go to bed with, or something good to wake up to! YAY. Makes a change.
I'm sad Andi is gone, I was enjoying the Tom/Andi scenario's, but so long as they're replaced with Bill/Tom ones eventually, I'll be fine. ;) The party sounds... interesting, and I totally LOLed at this line: “and do they speak a language I understand.” XD
Date: 06/22/09 12:47 pm Title: XVI
Haha. Yeah. Loved it. I'm a bit sad though... Andi should have stayed longer... :(
Anywayyyyyys, make them fuck! :D
xD
I'm horny and sitting on top of my friend who isn't horny at all, so plz gimme some Bill/Tom sexxxx. *drools*
UPDATE! :O
Date: 06/22/09 12:32 pm Title: XVI
uhhh I cant wait for the party xDDD
Date: 06/21/09 11:26 am Title: XV
aaaahhhh)))) super gut! du bist unbedingt eine von meinen Lieblingsauthoren)))
danke sehr sehr!)
Date: 06/19/09 09:55 pm Title: XV
OMFG!!!! WTF!! I NEED the next chapter!!!!! *shakes* omigawd!!! YOUR STORIES ARE LIKE CRACK TO ME !Dx
Date: 06/19/09 09:08 pm Title: XV
You seem to like leaving Tom with raging hard-ons. lol, I'm glad you're back :)
Author's Response: ooh nice to see you here :D & yeah, I like that, I really enjoy making Tom suffer MUAHA.
Date: 06/18/09 02:26 pm Title: XV
ahahaha! Tomm is so gay for Andreas(;
Date: 06/18/09 12:06 pm Title: XV
*gasp*
meanie Bill D:< i wanted tom to b fucked by andi T^T n there goes bill n stops everything! he must learn things doesn't happen the way he wants always!!! *cries*
but, the chappie was great! :D
Date: 06/17/09 08:15 pm Title: XV
oh... me likey! sory this is really late, i just arrived in india! please update more soon!
Date: 06/17/09 07:54 pm Title: XV
Tom seriously needs to get a girl! He can't be walking around like that, lol!
And Bill seems awfully jealous ;D