Date: 06/26/09 10:30 am Title: XVII
We're waiting for 2 things: you and the party
xDD
Have a good time!))
-****
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! Party will be up next, I'm in london until the 29th though so there won't be an update until I'm back unfortunately!
Date: 06/26/09 09:51 am Title: XVII
this is fic is just getting better and better, omfg *___*
and I actually disagree with the people who say they hate bill in this story - cuz I love him :') I really like that Tom is not giving up on him, and that he is so irresistible to every guy he meet ^^ haha
[I've been in Germany this week, so my english is kind of crappy :3]
CAN'T WAIT TO READ ABOUT THE PARTY :D
Author's Response: Nah you're english is fine. I'm glad you like Bill! :D I love writing him lol Party will be up next, but unfortunately not until the 29th (read my bio for more info!)
Date: 06/25/09 07:05 pm Title: XVII
aww, im sad now, its cut off >.< . please contiue! (:
Author's Response: I'll continue as soon as I can, which unfortunately won't be until the 29th (read my bio for more info!) thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 06/24/09 03:10 pm Title: XVII
Best best best! one of the best stories here ever!))))
thank you so much! you make the readers nervous- and it's so great)
we never know what happens next) everything is unpredictable)
amazing!)))
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much! What a nice review :) I wish I could update for you guys NOW, but unfortunately I'll be gone for a few days :( Check my bio for more info!
Date: 06/24/09 01:00 pm Title: XVII
oh lol...
Tom is attracted to Bill ^_^
Author's Response: I'm pretty sure you're right about that ;) I won't be able to update for a while, btw. more info in my bio!
Date: 06/24/09 10:54 am Title: XVII
Ohh, what Bill showed in the last part of this chapter was PURE jealousy! XD Maybe that's... gah, what the hell, I'll let you figure out your characters for me, I'm too lazy for that today XD it's so hot! Have fun at your party, and I can't wait to read about Bill's ;) let's hope he doesn't manage to destroy anything, let alone Tom's night...
Author's Response: Thank you! And we'll see about whether someone's gonna ruin that party, or not ;) I won't be able to update for a few days, though :( check my bio for more info!
Date: 06/24/09 10:39 am Title: XVII
YAY i'm so glad you updated really quickly for this one cos I love it ;D
Tom's so sexaaay in this one. And so is Bill :D Teehee.
So is Brittany going to the party? =D
Author's Response: Maybe ;) I'm glad you're liking Tom and Bill in this! Unfortunately I won't be able to update quick this time... check my bio for more info!
Date: 06/24/09 09:43 am Title: XVII
Ok, I like the story. But, please, think about this:
-Bill is acting like a HUGE queen of all bitches ever to walk this planet and Tom hates it, but he does whatever Bill tells him to do. (I like the fact that he blew Bill when he refused to do his flayers, he should do things like that more often.)
-Every single person likes Bill. Which is not true in real life. All the guys I know hate him for looking like gay. So,maybe you should keep that in mind before making every single guy fall for him.
I'm sorry if it seems harsh,I don't want you to feel bad or anything... but I'm just being honest.
Author's Response: It's not harsh, it's just your opinion! But I'd like to point out the fact that the Bill in this story is in no way the 'real life' Bill. He is a figment of my imagination, and in my imagination he is a horny bitch who likes to fuck and has gone through a, probably, traumatising experience involving his passed away dad. And I have to disagree with the second point you made. Yes, I've mentioned a few people who would be more than glad to have their way with Bill. But no one apart from Andi (and maybe a tiny part of Tom) actually likes him. Gisele: horny slut who got what she wanted from him. Jose: hard working young man who was willing to have some fun with a hot guy that hit on him like crazy, but obviously wasn't too into Bill since he'd rather keep his job than tap that. Georg: is fascinated by the fact that he finds a boy pretty and would like to get to know him (we don't know much about Georg yet, though) and: a random gay man at a bar seems somewhat sexually attracted to Bill, but definitely not blown away by him--thus his lack of interest in the party. And actually, I also have to say Tom doesn't do everything Bill tells him to do. Yeah, he's being nicer to Bill than he deserves at the moment, but that's because he wants the relationship between Simone and Gordon to work out, and maybe even because a tiny part of him would like to figure the guy out somehow. Sorry for this long response, I was just going to let you know I didn't think your review was harsh, but you seem to have not completely understood my story or characterisations. And the point you made about all the guys you know not liking Bill for looking gay bothered me a bit. Many (straight) guys I know find him stunning and claim they could never think that of any other guy, but so what? What other people think about the 'real' Bill has absolutely nothing to do with any fanfic on this site. These stories are fiction, the characters are fiction, and how they act or are perceived by others in these stories has nothing to do with how they act or are perceived in real life. Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you like the story even though you don't agree with my characterisations of both protagonists!
Date: 06/24/09 07:04 am Title: XVII
oooh! i liked the spanish gling on there! i'm learning myself spanish, so it's really good;D the chapter was amamzing!
Author's Response: Haha, that's cool! Thanks a lot ;) btw make sure to check my bio when u can, i won't be able to update for a while!
Date: 06/24/09 03:52 am Title: XVII
I'm really enjoying this story. It is obvious from Bill's mood swings and his comments that he secretly wants to be wanted by Tom. That whole bar scene was brilliant when Bill handed out a flier to a random guy and then when Tom was flirting with a girl he comments about inviting 'attractive people'. Um yeah THAT IS JEALOUSY! Very subtle, but I have faith in Bill and Tom. I really like the slow progression of this story. Not plot-wise, because it's very interesting and attention-holding, just the relationship between Bill and Tom; I have read too many stories where the first few chapters Bill and Tom easily fall for each other when they hardly know each other. I like that you are taking time for them to warm up to each other and really get to know each other and their facades are slowly crumbling instead of in one really fast order of events. I appreciate it; it's very realistic and also pleasant to read because it creates more anticipation and longing :) great job. I also have to compliment you on your writing. Your english is unbelievably amazing and I find it hard to believe that it is your third language! You are very talented! Also, I have to say, on a personal note, that I know some Spanish and felt special that I could understand the spanish conversations in the chapters hehehe. I'm sorry for piling all of my thoughts into one review. Please continue with this because I am eagerly awaiting your next update.
Me gusta el cuento! :]
Author's Response: Don't apologize for a great review! Thank you so much for the compliments on my writing and story, I'm glad you enjoy it so much :) I'm also glad to see you pick up on the subtle hints I leave here and there, on how their relationship is progressing very slowly. Muchas gracias por este review ;)
Date: 06/23/09 11:59 pm Title: XVII
Wow. Just wow. I simply adore this story and you, did you know that? *sighs happily*
First off, I wanted to address the topic of a couple of other reviewers saying how much they hate Bill in this fic, and while I respect everyone's opinion, I also think they're sort of missing the point. Bill is...well I myself don't like him very much right now, but I wouldn't go so far as to say I hated him. I don't think we're meant to like Bill very much right now at this point in the story. I think Bill is, for lack of a very description, a very sad individual. I think he's a very hurt person who may have misunderstood something his mother said in her grief during a really bad time in his life--and I'm suspecting it had to do with his father.
I don't know...I think that really changes a person. Sometimes for the better and sometimes for the worse. In Bill's case, it's the worse. :D
And true, Bill is a diva, and a bitch and completely full of himself and I'm pretty sure not ALL of this came from his dad's death. I think he was fiesty even before that, to be honest, and it's refreshing.
So what if Bill isn't the best person to be around right now (and oh, how he makes poor Tom suffer *wibbles*) but I think that is what makes this journey between Bill and Tom so exciting. Tom will inevitably bring the good out in Bill. Isn't that what being in a relationship with someone is all about? Being happy with each other and bringing the best out in each other?
I think Bill is too antagonistic and Tom might just be a little too laid back. I think Bill will definitely make Tom learn to stand up for himself and speak up more and Tom will eventually tame Bill. Not tame him to where he's some sappy mess, mind you, but enough so that Bill can learn to open up to people once again. I think he's forgotten how since his dad died and Simone is a little too lenient in the things she lets Bill do. Probably trying to make it up to him for whatever it is she said in her agony. :(
Now, putting all that aside, I loved the interaction between the boys in this chappie. :D Tom trying his best not to hurl Bill off of his bedroom balcony and making an effort to be nice was commendable. And he suggested they work together instead of fighting as usual. And Bill agreed! Or he sort of did. LOL But at least he stayed and "helped" rather than lying around waiting for Tom to do everything for him.
Maybe he even enjoyed himself a tiny bit? But only you know the answer to that. :D
And he went right back to his rude self by demanding Tom bring down the fliers and wait for him. Wow. The guy's got balls, I'll give you that.
Now the excursion to the bar was very interesting and I wonder if that was jealousy that Bill was showcasing there at the end. He seemed rather...territorial with Tom when he was speaking to Brittany by first narrowing his eyes, suddenly having almost no interest in the guy he was previously flirting with, getting up real close in Tom's personal space and rudely asking "Who's she?"
All sounds like something a jealous significant other would do in a situation like that.
Oh! And not to mention Bill pulling Tom out of the bar away from poor, clueless Brittany like Tom's his bitch. Which I guess he sometimes is. Because he lets Bill get away with murder when he shouldn't. But I'll give Tom credit for snapping at him about the drink and his complaining. And Bill seemed to like Tom's sassier side too. ;) Maybe he likes it when Tom is forceful? Hmmmm.
So yeah, I am wondering what's going to happen when Brittany gets to this party b/c Bill thinks she "fucking ugly" which we all know she's not.
Someone is bothered by Tom's attention not being on him I suspect. Hee!
Great job as usual, hon. I wish someone could pay you to write this all day everyday b/c I'm enjoying this so much!
*goes to re-read*
Author's Response: Thank you, you completely understand both boys' characterisations! You really seem to pick up on every single thing in every single chapter, I love it! Bill is very annoying sometimes, I have to agree, but I definitely don't hate him. I love writing this exaggerated character; it's fun which is probably why I constantly feel like writing more and more for this story! If I only had the time *sigh*. Unfortunately I won't be able to update for about 5 days since I'm going to the UK with my brother tomorrow, I'm coming back on the 29th though, and I'll make sure to update ASAP once I'm back! I'm really glad you're enjoying this so much, I'm always looking forward to your reviews :3
Date: 06/23/09 11:14 pm Title: XVII
love it so much :B
Author's Response: haha thanks! won't be able to update soon, though... check my bio for more info on that!
Date: 06/23/09 08:25 pm Title: XVII
AMAZING!! I really really love this and reading something in Spanish makes me squeal!
Oh, btw...Corona and Coronita are different, just by the size, but they belong to the same label...here in Mexico, they both exists and actually the Coronita is way better than the Corona! Oh and it's 'una Coronita'...
I know, I know...I'm a freak...but I'm very glad you updated! :D I really really LOVE this story! Though Bill confuses me! He's too dominant and vulnerable at the same time!! But I love his character!
Author's Response: THANK YOU! I've always wondered what the hell the difference between them two was! I arrived in the UK and suddenly no one knew what the hell I was taking about when I asked for a Coronita, until I realized they only have bottles that look the same but are called Corona instead lol & thanks for pointing out that silly mistake, totally missed it when I proof-read! I'm glad you like the stors so much, unfortunately I won't be able to update soon... check my bio for more info on that!
Date: 06/23/09 07:59 pm Title: XVII
I lurrrvvveee this fic please update soon xx
Author's Response: Thank you! unable to update soon, unfortunately :( read my bio for more info on that!
Date: 06/23/09 06:11 pm Title: XVII
I really HATE bill in this. When is his attitude going to change... its getting very fucking annoying! if I was tom I would punch him unconscious! LOL
I love this story btw, Very real character.
Author's Response: oooh but I enjoy writing bitchy Bill so much! Although sometimes I want to punch him too :) His attitude won't really change though, I can tell you that! Maybe a few minor changes... ;) Thanks a lot!
Date: 06/23/09 05:54 pm Title: XVII
Me encantaaaa que actualizes tan pronto ^^...
Ya quiero ver que pasara en la fiesta
y como Bill se comportara ya que estara en sus aguas
Enjoy the San Juan niite :)
ciao
Author's Response: Gracias ;) desafortunadamente no podre actualizar pronto esta vez... más informacion en mi bio!
Date: 06/23/09 05:54 pm Title: XVII
I was re-reading the last chapter, and I was thinking that this story is the kind of story you need, you crave. When you update, I forget about everything else, because I like this so much!
Anh btw, Valentine's Day is having success here in Italy. Do you remember that I'm translating it? Well, they wanted to thank you for this amazing story, and I hope I succed in translating their coments =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's very nice to hear :D & I'm glad VD is being enjoyed by your italian readers :) I always feel like that's one of my not-so-good stories, so it's always nice to hear people like it!
Date: 06/23/09 05:50 pm Title: XVII
Bill is too bitchy lol
Please, more BillxTom during the party xD
Author's Response: We'll see about that ;) i won't be able to update for a few days, please check my bio for mroe info!
Date: 06/23/09 05:47 pm Title: XVII
MORE!!!!
xoxox
Author's Response: I wish I could give you more NOW. unfortunately that won't be possible :( check my bio for more info!
Date: 06/23/09 05:35 pm Title: XVII
Yay!Still adoring diva!Bill
Thanks for the chapter, that was fast *_*
Author's Response: Glad you're liking Bill in this :D unfortunately the next chapter won't be up so fast :( check my bio for more info!