Date: 07/02/09 02:03 pm Title: XVIII
Oh... well yeah I think that it's undeniable ... I LOVE YOU :P keep it up :D:D
Date: 07/02/09 02:02 pm Title: XVIII
Tom, the hero! I like it *_*
Date: 07/02/09 01:57 pm Title: XVIII
AAAAAAA))))))) I'm drag-addict))) my drag is this story)))
you're wonderful) the plot is so goood) I like it more and more with every chapter))))
my heart beats so fast now)))waiting nervously for the next chapter)
I wish you a lot of inspiration)
you made my day))
thank you sooo much!!))I'm your FAN)
Date: 07/02/09 01:06 pm Title: XVIII
GIVE ME MORE!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07/02/09 01:03 pm Title: XVIII
Hihi, so Bill does have a heart xD But only figured it out now xP I loved it!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 07/02/09 12:50 pm Title: XVIII
I enjoyed very much! Update soon!
Date: 07/02/09 12:49 pm Title: XVIII
It was nice I liked the chapter :) hehehe, favorite line....
only vaguely registering Gustav throwing a punch at the man and making him leave.
YEA!!! go Gusti!! I'm so glad you put him in here :) hehehe, he turned out to be a great help I think :) yea!! anyway...I feel bad for feeling very happy that Bill feels bad about what he has done :) *grins* I think he might be getting some humanity in him after all :)
leaving a trail of blood drops along the way.
That was icky, but for some reason it added more to the story :) lol, just something in there about blood as they walk away, idk why... :) but anyway...
GO Tomi!!! I'm wondering if going so fast in the car had more of a meaning, than Tom trying to piss of Bill, and Bill vomiting. Lol, it might not be anything more, but somehow I see it as Bill being afraid to go fast in a real relationship. But that could just be me :) lol, it probably was just being drunk :) lovely chapter :)
Date: 07/02/09 12:41 pm Title: XVIII
Hmmm. I was wondering if that jerk put something in the shot he gave Bill since Bill was so disoriented. I was freaking out slightly b/c I wasn't sure if that was the case, and also b/c I didn't want Tom to leave him and Bill get attacked.
I did notice, however, Bill seeming a bit hurt at Tom saying that he might like him if he weren't so bitchy. Or he could have been pissed off. It's hard to tell with Bill sometimes. I think it was hurt though b/c it seemed afterwards that he sort of lost his enthusiasm for handing out the flyers and was in hurry to get home. But what can Bill expect? He's been a complete horror to Tom since he arrived, rejecting all types of friendship...what does he expect Tom to do? Be his best buddy forever? Is Bill delusional? LOL
And oh...the driving fast. I'm beginning to suspect Bill has a phobia now that has something to do with his dad's untimely death.
And Tom's coming to apologize somehow diverted him from snorting anymore coke. Interesting. :D
I was bouncing with glee when Bill seemed jealous of "blonde girl". He just seems to find all kinds of things wrong with any girls who come into contact with Tom. I wonder if he even realizes that he does this or if he's that deep in denial himself.
But then I wanted to slap him after he got himself in trouble with that older guy and Tom punched him. I was hissing at my computer that Bill seemed almost annoyed that Tom even tried to rescue him. Seriously? I would have been completely adoring. But then Bill seemed to have come around when the guy hit Tom back. Although he just stood there and it was Tom's friends that came to his aid.
*sigh* One step forward, ten steps back with Bill isn't it? LOL
So I'm wondering if this was the end of the party for Tom, or if he'll rally strong and come back outside. And will actually apologize? Because it's his fault that that creep showed up in the first place. And what of blondie? Will she be the one comforting Tom instead of Bill?
Well, considering that Bill and Tom don't even realize they kind of like each other yet, then I'm sure she will be the one to comfort Tom.
But I'm sure Bill will find something about her to bitch about.
And oh! Is is insane of me, as Geo and Gusti are helping Tom away, that the first thing I thought of was: "OMG, don't let blood drip into the pool!" I mean, I don't even know if they were that near the pool, but I figured that there was a very good chance that they could have been seeing as that is where the party is taking place.
So yeah, don't judge me. *pouts* :DDD
Good job as usual, hon.
Date: 07/02/09 12:33 pm Title: XVIII
bill's a proper retard and all *shakes head* and tom's slow as all fuck on the uptake xD
Date: 07/02/09 12:28 pm Title: XVIII
You should feel horrible, Bill...-__-
I'm glad Tom came to the rescue. And I think Bill's dad died in a car accident - with him on the ride...
Glad you updated. It's been a very tough day and I'm delighted this came up..^^ Thank you!^^
Date: 07/02/09 12:22 pm Title: XVIII
Awwww. I don't really know what to say about the chapter... I liked it, but I want more. :D
... more ...
... and some more ...
... and some more more ...
Yeah! That's what I NEED! MORE! :D
Date: 07/02/09 12:22 pm Title: XVIII
awww tomm :/
i`d feel pretty horrible too xP lol
Date: 07/02/09 12:17 pm Title: XVIII
Subtle is the way to go. And am I mistaken if I say I think Bill's father died in a car accident because Bill said something to him? That might be the reason Bill's mom blamed him, and well, it fits in my mind puzzle of this story. Oh well, keep it coming and we will see.
Date: 07/02/09 12:13 pm Title: XVIII
Go TOM!
Maybe bills bitchy wall is finally cracking????
Date: 07/02/09 12:02 pm Title: XVIII
whoa..... this was uber intense..... gr8 chapter, as always, though!
Date: 07/01/09 12:07 pm Title: XVII
mmmmmm))) I feel....update will be very soon))))) I feel it) and horoscope says so also)))))))
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, horoscope might have been right then, I'm working on the next update right now ;)
Date: 06/30/09 12:24 pm Title: XVII
Fuck, coronita and desperados. Desperados actually brings bad memories...and good ones too. I personally hate beer, unless it's a good murphy's irish red, but meh. Bill's a bitch, btw. And I love him, Tom loves him too, he just doesn't know it yet.
Author's Response: Oh same here, both desperados and coronita bring back many memories haha. I just like some Spanish beer... I definitely prefer beer from wine though! & I think you might be right about Tom ;)
Date: 06/27/09 03:45 pm Title: XVII
(Check my last review)Thank you. You really made it easier for me to enjoy the story. And thanks for being cool with my opinion; to tell you the truth, I was a little afraid of your possible reply. xD
Author's Response: & I'm glad you didn't take my response in a bad way! I respect your opinion and I'm glad you expressed it to me instead of just giving up on the story or just saying "hm, i don't really like some things, but continue soon!" ;)
Date: 06/27/09 02:21 pm Title: XVII
coollll
Author's Response: :)
Date: 06/26/09 03:39 pm Title: XVII
LOL at the coronita! god, why spanish ppl named Corona that way?! Here in mexico corona IS corona! XP i got to say i love that beer ^^ btw i gotta try that desperados... but it sounds weird :S lyk desesperados. anyway im waiting for next chappie! awesome storie really! :D
Author's Response: Haha I've no clue why it's named differently, someone from mexico told me in their review that it's got something to do with the size of the bottle... desperados is really nice! Have you ever tried shandy? Beer mixed with lemonade--that's a bit what desperados tastes like ;) not at all like tequila! Glad you like the story :)