Date: 10/06/11 10:26 am Title: XX
You've got a good story going here. The plot is straightforward enough and the interaction between the potential stepbrothers is interesting. It's not so much the bickering or the funny lines like: “Bill, I don't want a massage, I just need you to- oh my god! I can feel your dick!”
...nicely done because it was so easy to imagine Tom's reaction, it didn't require a description. What made this story good was the subtlety of Bill and Tom's feelings for each other. It's not blatant and the progression works really well...which is why it's such a shame to see that the story has stalled here.
If a story has obviously not been updated in some time but I can't resist reading, I tend not to bother leaving a review but in this case I'm hoping like a lot of others are, that you'll finish your story.
Date: 08/25/11 02:12 pm Title: XX
Oh no! The last chapter...and it hasn't been updated since 09!! I mean, I know you have stuff to do but...two years?!?! D:
Date: 07/27/11 12:53 pm Title: XX
I had come across this story a while back and decided not to read it since it wasn't complete. Not too long ago, I came across it again and decided to forget about it not being complete and just read it. Well, I read it yesterday and I was pleasantly surprised. I really enjoyed what I read so far and I'm really hoping you will continue on and finish it. I am interested to see how Tom and Bill's relationship plays out. So far, I am really enjoying where things are going! =]
Date: 07/15/11 03:04 pm Title: I
Ugggh, this was fabulous! I've read it like, four times already, and I still can't get enough! You're such a brilliant writer, and I really enjoy reading your works.
I know you're probably not coming back, but here's to hoping. ♥
Date: 06/11/11 04:51 pm Title: XX
100 reviews on one chapter, DONE!
Please, please, update? :3
Date: 06/01/11 06:25 pm Title: XX
this is a really good story!
when will u post the rest??
Date: 03/29/11 04:48 pm Title: XX
ahhh... want more of that storyhh... it's really really good...
Date: 02/15/11 06:05 am Title: XX
Ahhhhhhhh I feel like I'm on a precipice or something. Almost getting my climax but not quite. I can't stand it lol. Off to find some smut now to relieve the itch!
Date: 02/15/11 05:40 am Title: XVI
Sigh... I haven't reached the end yet but I'm already sad because I know this story is incomplete. I came into THF really late so I've managed to avoid all the incomplete stories but for some reason I couldn't go past yours and felt compelled to read. And now I'm just so sad!!!
Date: 01/15/11 07:15 pm Title: XX
Oooo!! This was so good! I can't wait to read more :)
Date: 12/26/10 03:28 pm Title: XX
It's been a fucking year since the update :'(
Date: 12/05/10 07:45 am Title: XX
I really hope you update soon! This fic is really good and I want to know what happens next!
Date: 09/23/10 08:15 pm Title: I
where are you gonna update? this story is on hiatus since FOREVER
Date: 08/12/10 05:39 pm Title: XX
haha I LOVE IT ... lol itīs like seing one of the best movies gosh and how i love this Bill and Tom
Date: 07/23/10 11:43 pm Title: XX
Ahhh!! I love this story! Update PLEASE!!!! I wanna know what happens!!
Date: 07/10/10 03:59 am Title: I
Okay so... This story is soooo good! You should really update soon!! Pretty please? If not, I might cry! ;)
Date: 06/24/10 09:46 pm Title: XX
omg.. took me a few hours to read it all trough! And damn girl! This is some really good shit! And not just the boys hooking up after 2 chapters. LOVED IT!!! Love Bills Character!! Love