Date: 08/06/09 06:57 pm Title: XX
I'm glad you're back, and well again, or at least well enough to be let out of the hospital.
Both Tom and Bill were so much more appealing in this chapter. Not that they're not always appealing, especially Tom, but both just more so. Bill didn't seem as much of a bitch, well, he was, but in the best possible way. And Tom aww bless him, you always find a way to mess him up. And Bill fucking with him doesn't count, that's good. Bt his sunburn, and being wrong, the poor boy! Does it never end for him?
They seem like they're going to make an amazing couple, they'll be perfect for each other, balancing one another out and that. But regardless of that it'd be your amazing writing that makes them work, you have a way with your characters. I can't wait for more.
Date: 08/06/09 06:56 pm Title: XX
*grins* they're both ridiculously insane/slow. i LOVE it xD and *pats your head* i hope you feel better love.
Date: 08/06/09 06:39 pm Title: XX
Yayyy finally an update ;)
Bill laughed and gently dragged his nails down Tom's back once more. “Tom, when I'm horny I want cock and when I want cock, I don't care who's cock it is.”
Omg xDDD Bill is such a sluttt
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, he kinda is :p
Date: 08/06/09 09:10 am Title: I
Hey, I'm only here to nag you again. XD When will you update?? You need to update!
Date: 07/28/09 02:15 pm Title: XIX
Why did you stop writing? :(
Date: 07/27/09 01:16 am Title: XIX
LOL. Bill mooned Tom... XD Looove this story!
Date: 07/27/09 12:25 am Title: VII
This Bill's an asshole!
I love him!!
Date: 07/23/09 10:53 am Title: XIX
Oh god, I just wanna fucking punch Bill! :D I seriously don't understand why Tom is so nice to him. If I'd Bill's potential stepsister, I wouldn't have dealt with that kind of attitude for too long. Props for Tom, I wouldn't be able to stand that kind of shit.
Date: 07/22/09 01:22 am Title: XIX
oh whoa there.... that was hilarious.... I am cracking up at seeing Tom's face...
Date: 07/21/09 10:43 am Title: XIX
your fans are waiting for you)))
Date: 07/13/09 02:53 pm Title: XIX
that was the funniest thing Ive ever rea
d!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07/11/09 10:57 pm Title: XIX
The incident in Tom's room was hilarious. After I got over my initial what the heck just happened reaction, I couldn't stop laughing.
Date: 07/11/09 09:17 am Title: XVIII
omg! TOM! nnnuuuuu
Date: 07/10/09 01:21 pm Title: XIX
muuahauahauah really, unbelievable.
I'm starting to love bill, he's crazy XD
can't wait for more!!
Date: 07/09/09 03:02 pm Title: XIX
oooh, I love it! Please update soon! I feel like those two are finally getting somewhere!
Date: 07/09/09 03:11 am Title: XIX
Damnit, Tom. -__-"
You don't say no when Bill offers sex. You just don't.